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Reviewer: PerryPerryD (talk · contribs) 18:21, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am PerryPerryD, I will be performing this GA Review under the GA criteria. I have already noticed this doesn't have any quick violations to address. I will be performing a deep look at the article. PerryPerryD Talk To Me 18:21, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

The article does not contain a "Plot" section, and most of the plot details appear to be merged with the Gameplay section, I would advise separating these. PerryPerryD Talk To Me 18:48, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:

There is multiple cases of I.P Vandalism, but other than that, No reverts of content. PerryPerryD Talk To Me 18:48, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

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 #: b. ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|MoS]] for [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section|lead]], [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout|layout]], [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch|word choice]], [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Writing about fiction|fiction]], and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Embedded lists|lists]])'': {{GAList/check|? <!-- Insert y, n or ? --> }}
 #:: <!-- 1b. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. -->
-#:: The article does not contain a "Plot" section, and most of the plot details appear to be merged with the Gameplay section, I would advise separating these.[[User:PerryPerryD|<span style="background:black; color:#00ffa6; padding:2px; ">PerryPerryD</span>]] <small>[[User_Talk:PerryPerryD|Talk To Me]]</small> 18:48, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
+#:: The article does not contain a "Plot" section, and most of the plot details appear to be merged with the Gameplay section, I would advise separating these. [[User:PerryPerryD|<span style="background:black; color:#00ffa6; padding:2px; ">PerryPerryD</span>]] <small>[[User_Talk:PerryPerryD|Talk To Me]]</small> 18:48, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
 # It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''.
 #: a. ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout#Notes and references|reference section]])'': {{GAList/check| <!-- Insert y, n or ? --> }}
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 #:: <!-- 5. It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
     Scan the article's history and talk page for edit wars and content disputes. Good-faith improvements (such as copyediting), changes made in response to the review, proposals to merge or split content, and reversions of vandalism do not apply here. Stability is based on the article's current state, not any potential for instability in the future. -->
-#:: There is multiple cases of I.P Vandalism, but other than that, No reverts of content.[[User:PerryPerryD|<span style="background:black; color:#00ffa6; padding:2px; ">PerryPerryD</span>]] <small>[[User_Talk:PerryPerryD|Talk To Me]]</small> 18:48, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
+#:: There is multiple cases of I.P Vandalism, but other than that, No reverts of content. [[User:PerryPerryD|<span style="background:black; color:#00ffa6; padding:2px; ">PerryPerryD</span>]] <small>[[User_Talk:PerryPerryD|Talk To Me]]</small> 18:48, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
 # It is illustrated by '''[[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''' and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 #: a. ''(images are tagged and non-free content have [[Wikipedia:Non-free use rationale guideline|non-free use rationales]])'': {{GAList/check| <!-- Insert y, n or ? --> }}