Talk:Intro (End of the World)/GA2

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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 02:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing this soon. Glad that this got sorted out at AfD. Ippantekina (talk) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Prose

• "After the release of her sixth studio album Positions (2020)" comma before album title
• "The album's lead single "Yes, And?"" → lead single, "Yes, And?", ...
• ""Intro (End of the World)" is reported to be the second song Grande wrote for Eternal Sunshine" reported by who?
  • Business Insider; I don't know where did they get that info from whom but they did claimed it. So that's why I put "reported" in the sentence. Gained (talk) 07:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
• "places emphasis on" emphasizes
• "How can I tell if I'm in the right relationship?". remove the full stop after the quotation mark per MOS:"
• singing the lyric "If it all ended tomorrow, would I be the one on your mind?". ditto
• "The track was conceived as a companion to the song both in its sound and lyrics" which track/song are we talking about here...?
  • "Intro (End of the World)"; I have reworded it to that Gained (talk) 07:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Sources

• Spotcheck: 1, 14, 21, 22, 33
  • 14: ""healing after a breakup"" should be "healing-from-a-breakup"
• Include |url-access=limited in Rolling Stone refs

That's all I got! Ippantekina (talk) 07:37, 4 July 2024 (UTC)