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{{AFC comment|1=The news stories are about the items made by the company, but don't really discuss the company at any length. Just being the manufacturer of a couple of gifts for a monarch doesn't seem sufficient to establish notability. That is, the company's notability can't be inherited from the notability of the items. You really need references that talk about the company itself in depth [[User:MarcGarver|MarcGarver]] ([[User talk:MarcGarver|talk]]) 15:46, 8 July 2024 (UTC)}} |
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{{AFC comment|1=Thank you for your feedback. The article has been revised to focus more on the company itself rather than just its notable works. Key changes include: |
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Direct References: Included references specifically about the company, such as their official website and an article from the UNESCO Biosphere Isle of Man. |
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Community Engagement: Added a section on community involvement, detailing their fundraising efforts for local charities and support for the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival.}} |
Community Engagement: Added a section on community involvement, detailing their fundraising efforts for local charities and support for the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival. [[User:CaptainTavish|CaptainTavish]] ([[User talk:CaptainTavish|talk]]) 18:21, 9 July 2024 (UTC)}} |
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{{AFC comment|1=This is rather promotional in tone. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:03, 10 July 2024 (UTC)}} |
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{{AFC comment|1=Previous feedback was to talk about the company more, and why it is notable. Maybe this has lead to a 'promotional tone'. I have tried to dial it back a bit based on your feedback. Thanks. [[User:CaptainTavish|CaptainTavish]] ([[User talk:CaptainTavish|talk]]) 18:25, 10 July 2024 (UTC)}} |
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==History and Background== |
==History and Background== |
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Element Isle was founded in 2018 by Claire Pearse, a [[Fellow of the Royal Society of Arts]], and Scott Pearse, who holds advanced degrees in [[Natural Science]] |
Element Isle was founded in 2018 by Claire Pearse, a [[Fellow of the Royal Society of Arts]], and Scott Pearse, who holds advanced degrees in [[Natural Science]].<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://elementisle.com/pages/about-us |title=Element Isle - About Us |website=Element Isle |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> The company's designs are inspired by nature, culture and heritage incorporating elements from their local environment, a [[World_Network_of_Biosphere_Reserves | UNESCO Biosphere Reserve]]. Their aesthetic draws from both Celtic and Nordic influences, reflecting the cultural heritage of the Isle of Man.<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.biosphere.im/news/nature-inspired-jewellery |title=Nature-Inspired Jewellery |publisher=UNESCO Biosphere Isle of Man |date=2023 |access-date=2024-07-09}}</ref> |
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==Community Engagement== |
==Community Engagement== |
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Element Isle is |
Element Isle is involved in the local community, supporting various charitable causes and initiatives. In 2023, the company raised £6,000 for 20 charities across the Isle of Man through the sale of limited edition jewellery.<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.iomtoday.co.im/news/element-isle-raises-ps6000-for-20-charities-across-the-island-626332 |title=Element Isle Raises £6,000 for 20 Charities Across the Island |publisher=Isle of Man Today |date=2024-04-03 |access-date=2024-07-09}}</ref> They also supported the return of the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival coming in 2025.<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://manx.news/element-isle-ensures-oie-voaldyn-fire-festival-return-in-2025/ |title=Element Isle Ensures Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival Return in 2025 |publisher=Manx News |date=2024-06-15 |access-date=2024-07-09}}</ref> |
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Additionally, they played a crucial role in ensuring the return of the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival in 2025 by providing substantial support.<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://manx.news/element-isle-ensures-oie-voaldyn-fire-festival-return-in-2025/ |title=Element Isle Ensures Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival Return in 2025 |publisher=Manx News |date=2024-06-15 |access-date=2024-07-09}}</ref> |
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==Notable Works== |
==Notable Works== |
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Element Isle has created several notable pieces, including commissions for the [[British Royal Family]]. These include the [[Jewels of Elizabeth II#Infinity Isle of Man Brooch|Infinity Brooch]], presented to [[Queen Elizabeth II]] for her Platinum Jubilee, and silver falcons created for the [[Coronation of Charles III and Camilla|coronation of King Charles III]]. These pieces incorporate traditional Manx symbols and craftsmanship.<ref>{{Cite news |url=https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-isle-of-man-61638728 |title=Isle of Man's gift to Queen marked Platinum Jubilee |work=BBC News |date=June 2022 |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.gov.im/news/2022/may/31/bespoke-brooch-sent-to-mark-her-majesty-the-queens-platinum-jubilee/ |title=Bespoke Brooch Sent to Mark Her Majesty The Queen's Platinum Jubilee |publisher=Isle of Man Government |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> |
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===Infinity Brooch=== |
===Infinity Brooch=== |
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the [[Platinum Jubilee of Elizabeth II#Isle of Man | Platinum Jubilee]] of [[Queen Elizabeth II]], symbolises the Isle of Man's connection to the crown, where the reigning British monarch is recognised as the [[Lord of Mann]]. The brooch, an abstract representation of the shape of the Isle of Man was made in white gold, featuring four stones representing the main towns on the island.<ref>{{Cite news |url=https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-isle-of-man-61638728 |title=Isle of Man's gift to Queen marked Platinum Jubilee |work=BBC News |date=June 2022 |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.gov.im/news/2022/may/31/bespoke-brooch-sent-to-mark-her-majesty-the-queens-platinum-jubilee/ |title=Bespoke Brooch Sent to Mark Her Majesty The Queen's Platinum Jubilee |publisher=Isle of Man Government |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> |
the [[Platinum Jubilee of Elizabeth II#Isle of Man | Platinum Jubilee]] of [[Queen Elizabeth II]], symbolises the Isle of Man's connection to the crown, where the reigning British monarch is recognised as the [[Lord of Mann]]. The brooch, an abstract representation of the shape of the Isle of Man was made in white gold, featuring four stones representing the main towns on the island.<ref>{{Cite news |url=https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-isle-of-man-61638728 |title=Isle of Man's gift to Queen marked Platinum Jubilee |work=BBC News |date=June 2022 |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.gov.im/news/2022/may/31/bespoke-brooch-sent-to-mark-her-majesty-the-queens-platinum-jubilee/ |title=Bespoke Brooch Sent to Mark Her Majesty The Queen's Platinum Jubilee |publisher=Isle of Man Government |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> |
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A run of twenty replica brooches, made from sterling silver, featuring the limited edition Platinum Jubilee hallmark raised |
A run of twenty replica brooches, made from sterling silver, featuring the limited edition Platinum Jubilee hallmark raised funds for local Isle of Man charities.<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.manxradio.com/news/isle-of-man-news/element-isle-donates-to-20-charities/ |title=Element Isle Donates to 20 Charities |website=Manx Radio |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> |
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===Silver Falcons for King Charles III=== |
===Silver Falcons for King Charles III=== |
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For [[Coronation of Charles III and Camilla| King Charles III's coronation]], Element Isle created two silver falcons adorning an Elm Bowl in collaboration with local woodturner Graham Hall, continuing the Isle of Man's tradition of gifting falcons to the [[Lord of Mann]] on the event of their coronation. The project used recycled silver and wood from a fallen elm tree, reflecting the King's passion for sustainability.<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/articles/cz76ykr3w89o |title=Manx Coronation Gift to King Charles III |website=BBC News |date=5 May 2023 |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> |
For [[Coronation of Charles III and Camilla| King Charles III's coronation]], Element Isle created two silver falcons adorning an Elm Bowl in collaboration with local woodturner Graham Hall, continuing the Isle of Man's tradition of gifting falcons to the [[Lord of Mann]] on the event of their coronation. The project used recycled silver and wood from a fallen elm tree, reflecting the King's "passion for sustainability".<ref>{{Cite web |url=https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/articles/cz76ykr3w89o |title=Manx Coronation Gift to King Charles III |website=BBC News |date=5 May 2023 |access-date=2024-03-29}}</ref> |
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==References== |
==References== |
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Comment: The news stories are about the items made by the company, but don't really discuss the company at any length. Just being the manufacturer of a couple of gifts for a monarch doesn't seem sufficient to establish notability. That is, the company's notability can't be inherited from the notability of the items. You really need references that talk about the company itself in depth MarcGarver (talk) 15:46, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Thank you for your feedback. The article has been revised to focus more on the company itself rather than just its notable works. Key changes include:Company Focus: Added a detailed history and background section, highlighting the founders' credentials and expertise.Direct References: Included references specifically about the company, such as their official website and an article from the UNESCO Biosphere Isle of Man.Community Engagement: Added a section on community involvement, detailing their fundraising efforts for local charities and support for the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival. CaptainTavish (talk) 18:21, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: This is rather promotional in tone. Theroadislong (talk) 15:03, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Previous feedback was to talk about the company more, and why it is notable. Maybe this has lead to a 'promotional tone'. I have tried to dial it back a bit based on your feedback. Thanks. CaptainTavish (talk) 18:25, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
Element Isle is a jewellery design company based in the Isle of Man, known for its original work inspired by the Isle of Man's natural beauty and cultural heritage.
History and Background
Element Isle was founded in 2018 by Claire Pearse, a Fellow of the Royal Society of Arts, and Scott Pearse, who holds advanced degrees in Natural Science.[1] The company's designs are inspired by nature, culture and heritage incorporating elements from their local environment, a UNESCO Biosphere Reserve. Their aesthetic draws from both Celtic and Nordic influences, reflecting the cultural heritage of the Isle of Man.[2]
Community Engagement
Element Isle is involved in the local community, supporting various charitable causes and initiatives. In 2023, the company raised £6,000 for 20 charities across the Isle of Man through the sale of limited edition jewellery.[3] They also supported the return of the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival coming in 2025.[4]
Notable Works
Element Isle has created several notable pieces, including commissions for the British Royal Family. These include the Infinity Brooch, presented to Queen Elizabeth II for her Platinum Jubilee, and silver falcons created for the coronation of King Charles III. These pieces incorporate traditional Manx symbols and craftsmanship.[5][6]
Infinity Brooch
The Isle of Man Infinity Brooch, designed for the Platinum Jubilee of Queen Elizabeth II, symbolises the Isle of Man's connection to the crown, where the reigning British monarch is recognised as the Lord of Mann. The brooch, an abstract representation of the shape of the Isle of Man was made in white gold, featuring four stones representing the main towns on the island.[7][8]
A run of twenty replica brooches, made from sterling silver, featuring the limited edition Platinum Jubilee hallmark raised funds for local Isle of Man charities.[9]
Silver Falcons for King Charles III
For King Charles III's coronation, Element Isle created two silver falcons adorning an Elm Bowl in collaboration with local woodturner Graham Hall, continuing the Isle of Man's tradition of gifting falcons to the Lord of Mann on the event of their coronation. The project used recycled silver and wood from a fallen elm tree, reflecting the King's "passion for sustainability".[10]
References
- ^ "Element Isle - About Us". Element Isle. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
- ^ "Nature-Inspired Jewellery". UNESCO Biosphere Isle of Man. 2023. Retrieved 2024-07-09.
- ^ "Element Isle Raises £6,000 for 20 Charities Across the Island". Isle of Man Today. 2024-04-03. Retrieved 2024-07-09.
- ^ "Element Isle Ensures Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival Return in 2025". Manx News. 2024-06-15. Retrieved 2024-07-09.
- ^ "Isle of Man's gift to Queen marked Platinum Jubilee". BBC News. June 2022. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
- ^ "Bespoke Brooch Sent to Mark Her Majesty The Queen's Platinum Jubilee". Isle of Man Government. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
- ^ "Isle of Man's gift to Queen marked Platinum Jubilee". BBC News. June 2022. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
- ^ "Bespoke Brooch Sent to Mark Her Majesty The Queen's Platinum Jubilee". Isle of Man Government. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
- ^ "Element Isle Donates to 20 Charities". Manx Radio. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
- ^ "Manx Coronation Gift to King Charles III". BBC News. 5 May 2023. Retrieved 2024-03-29.
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