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**"[1], to " move comma to before ref. |
**"[1], to " move comma to before ref. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"to the best player " no - to the player voted to have been the best? |
**"to the best player " no - to the player voted to have been the best? |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"award given since the 1953 All-Star Game[1], to the best player of the annual All-Star Game. The award was established in 1953 when NBA officials decided to designate an MVP for each year's game. " these two sentences effectively say the same thing. |
**"award given since the 1953 All-Star Game[1], to the best player of the annual All-Star Game. The award was established in 1953 when NBA officials decided to designate an MVP for each year's game. " these two sentences effectively say the same thing. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"The league also re-honor players from the previous two All-Star Games." every year? or just the once? |
**"The league also re-honor players from the previous two All-Star Games." every year? or just the once? |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"who cast vote after " their vote? their votes? do they get more than one each? a first/second/third? |
**"who cast vote after " their vote? their votes? do they get more than one each? a first/second/third? |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**Image captions look like complete sentences so need a [[full stop]]. |
**Image captions look like complete sentences so need a [[full stop]]. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"NAME (X)" just "Player (X)" or "Name (X)" is fine. No need for all the SHOUTING. |
**"NAME (X)" just "Player (X)" or "Name (X)" is fine. No need for all the SHOUTING. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"Los Angeles Lakers (6)" - did you intend to add the number awarded to each team? |
**"Los Angeles Lakers (6)" - did you intend to add the number awarded to each team? |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**[[:Image:George Mikan 99.jpg]] has no fair use rationale for use in this page. And I doubt you can provide a satisfactory one. |
**[[:Image:George Mikan 99.jpg]] has no fair use rationale for use in this page. And I doubt you can provide a satisfactory one. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**Eleven voters, how can you get joint winners? Needs explanation. |
**Eleven voters, how can you get joint winners? Needs explanation. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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**"The most recent winner..." - The 2008 winner. |
**"The most recent winner..." - The 2008 winner. |
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::'''DONE!''' -- [[User:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#FCB926">K. Annoyomous</span>]][[User talk:K. Annoyomous24|<span style="color:#5C2F83">24</span>]] <sub>[[WP:LAKERS|GO LAKERS!]]</sub> 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
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*[[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 09:04, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
*[[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 09:04, 29 July 2008 (UTC) |
Revision as of 16:50, 29 July 2008
NBA All-Star Game Most Valuable Player Award
I am nominating this list with User:K. Annoyomous24 because we believe it should be promoted to a featured list.—Chris! ct 00:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Comments
- "[1], to " move comma to before ref.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "to the best player " no - to the player voted to have been the best?
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "award given since the 1953 All-Star Game[1], to the best player of the annual All-Star Game. The award was established in 1953 when NBA officials decided to designate an MVP for each year's game. " these two sentences effectively say the same thing.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "The league also re-honor players from the previous two All-Star Games." every year? or just the once?
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "who cast vote after " their vote? their votes? do they get more than one each? a first/second/third?
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- Image captions look like complete sentences so need a full stop.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "NAME (X)" just "Player (X)" or "Name (X)" is fine. No need for all the SHOUTING.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "Los Angeles Lakers (6)" - did you intend to add the number awarded to each team?
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- Image:George Mikan 99.jpg has no fair use rationale for use in this page. And I doubt you can provide a satisfactory one.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- Eleven voters, how can you get joint winners? Needs explanation.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- "The most recent winner..." - The 2008 winner.
- DONE! -- K. Annoyomous24 GO LAKERS! 16:50, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- The Rambling Man (talk) 09:04, 29 July 2008 (UTC)