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I'm not sure if either of you can see this page, but if so, I'm wondering about changes to my edits on the COTS page. I realize that I made a mistake the first time by citing my own organization as a source in my first edit, but the second time I did not do so, and the source I cited was a non-partisan research group (the DoD's internal think-tank, the Defense Science Board) which is not associated with my organization. I wrote a brief paragraph on the huge relevance of COTS to government procurement. With President Obama's emphasis on contracting reform, this is an important issue and worthy of public consideration--especially on Wikipedia--as it is often the first stop for people trying to make their way through the sea of acronyms that is Washington DC. If I've overlooked something else, I would look forward to your advice on how to improve my usage.
{{unblock|I'm not sure if either of you can see this page, but if so, I'm wondering about changes to my edits on the COTS page. I realize that I made a mistake the first time by citing my own organization as a source in my first edit, but the second time I did not do so, and the source I cited was a non-partisan research group (the DoD's internal think-tank, the Defense Science Board) which is not associated with my organization. I wrote a brief paragraph on the huge relevance of COTS to government procurement. With President Obama's emphasis on contracting reform, this is an important issue and worthy of public consideration--especially on Wikipedia--as it is often the first stop for people trying to make their way through the sea of acronyms that is Washington DC. If I've overlooked something else, I would look forward to your advice on how to improve my usage.


At the same time, I see that a citation of one of our articles (from a bi-partisan research group that provides neutral analysis on policy issues) has been flagged because it may be construed as advertising of a "product." The intent of this piece is to show that that LUH was a successful case of a COTS acquisition. At present, the LUH article notes this, but does not have a source.
At the same time, I see that a citation of one of our articles (from a bi-partisan research group that provides neutral analysis on policy issues) has been flagged because it may be construed as advertising of a "product." The intent of this piece is to show that that LUH was a successful case of a COTS acquisition. At present, the LUH article notes this, but does not have a source.
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I would also appreciate if you could overturn the block you put on the account. I will refrain from making any more edits pending your suggestions but my primary concern is the block on our IP address, which prevents some 250 people from accessing Wikipedia.
I would also appreciate if you could overturn the block you put on the account. I will refrain from making any more edits pending your suggestions but my primary concern is the block on our IP address, which prevents some 250 people from accessing Wikipedia.


Thanks for your consideration.
Thanks for your consideration.}}

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I'm not sure if either of you can see this page, but if so, I'm wondering about changes to my edits on the COTS page. I realize that I made a mistake the first time by citing my own organization as a source in my first edit, but the second time I did not do so, and the source I cited was a non-partisan research group (the DoD's internal think-tank, the Defense Science Board) which is not associated with my organization. I wrote a brief paragraph on the huge relevance of COTS to government procurement. With President Obama's emphasis on contracting reform, this is an important issue and worthy of public consideration--especially on Wikipedia--as it is often the first stop for people trying to make their way through the sea of acronyms that is Washington DC. If I've overlooked something else, I would look forward to your advice on how to improve my usage.

At the same time, I see that a citation of one of our articles (from a bi-partisan research group that provides neutral analysis on policy issues) has been flagged because it may be construed as advertising of a "product." The intent of this piece is to show that that LUH was a successful case of a COTS acquisition. At present, the LUH article notes this, but does not have a source.

I would also appreciate if you could overturn the block you put on the account. I will refrain from making any more edits pending your suggestions but my primary concern is the block on our IP address, which prevents some 250 people from accessing Wikipedia.

Thanks for your consideration.

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