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Clean-up needed

The bit that says:

In August 2009, an 18-year-old girl from Pentyrch called Lucie Jones had a stellar audition on the sixth series of UK talent show The X Factor, the YouTube video of which has already gained over 3 million hits, and she has so far made it past the Bootcamp and judges house stages of the competition, and is one of the top 12 selected acts to sing on the live shows.

Seems a little sloppy to me. I tried editing it with:

In August 2009, an 18-year-old girl from Pentyrch called Lucie Jones auditioned on the sixth series of the UK talent show The X Factor, the YouTube video of which has already gained over 3 million hits. She is currently in the shows finals with 11 other people.

However Wikipedia wouldn't accept the edit?

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+== Clean-up needed ==
+The bit that says:
+In August 2009, an 18-year-old girl from Pentyrch called Lucie Jones had a stellar audition on the sixth series of UK talent show The X Factor, the YouTube video of which has already gained over 3 million hits, and she has so far made it past the Bootcamp and judges house stages of the competition, and is one of the top 12 selected acts to sing on the live shows.
+Seems a little sloppy to me. I tried editing it with:
+In August 2009, an 18-year-old girl from Pentyrch called Lucie Jones auditioned on the sixth series of the UK talent show [[The X Factor (UK)|The X Factor]], the [[YouTube]] video of which has already gained over 3 million hits. She is currently in the shows finals with 11 other people.
+However Wikipedia wouldn't accept the edit?