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very important: two key articles are missing from the suspension part: pushrod and pullrod suspension systems, and maybe even a third more important one, electronically controlled suspension (made by bose). this would complete a quite short secttion of wikipedia. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 161.73.18.79 (talk • contribs)

The latter is somewhat covered here. --Interiot 17:25, 3 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Added brief section on push/pull rods, though this is my first proper edit, so feel free to edit further etc. or give recommendations for the future! This new section could also use a diagram of some kind. thanks, ARDawson (talk) 12:36, 6 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I cleaned the article up a bit, and also clarified the purpose of the pushrod and pullrod in the racing car. Feel free to add a diagram or animation if you can find one. Bdc101 (talk) 15:52, 8 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I like your edit, reads considerably better, much clearer! ARDawson (talk) 09:38, 11 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Too technical for most readers to understand?

This article has been tagged as being too technical for most readers to understand since May iof 2008, but it does not seem too techical to me. Unless someone objects, I am going to wait seven days and then remove the tag. (posted 11:10, 1 March 2011) Guymacon (talk)

Removed tag. Guy Macon (talk) 19:44, 7 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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 ::I cleaned the article up a bit, and also clarified the purpose of the pushrod and pullrod in the racing car. Feel free to add a diagram or animation if you can find one. [[User:Bdc101|Bdc101]] ([[User talk:Bdc101|talk]]) 15:52, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
+:::I like your edit, reads considerably better, much clearer! [[User:ARDawson|ARDawson]] ([[User talk:ARDawson|talk]]) 09:38, 11 April 2011 (UTC)
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