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In re merge, please comment here. For what it might look like, have a peek at this, WIP. TREKphiler ^{hit me ♠} 14:21, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral POV?

This appears very much to be written from a British point of view. How did Germany, or or the United States, or the Soviet Union, view the Mid-Atlantic Gap? The issue of submarines vs. merchant convoys in the Atlantic is extremely important to WWII. Beyond the glaring use of only a British perspective, I don't think the article gives due importance to the actions, consequences, perceptions, and planning of the other major players in the North Atlantic, nor to the issue of merchant shipping as a whole. It is as though a former British officer describes what happened from his perspective, without considering that other nations were involved and had their own perspectives, or that WWII was a complex global event rather than solely an assault on the UK.

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 In re merge, please comment [[Talk:Air Gap (Battle of the Atlantic)#Merge|here]]. For what it might look like, have a peek at [[User:Trekphiler/The Black Pit|this]], WIP.  [[User:Trekphiler|<font color="#1034A6"><small>TREKphiler</small></font>]] [[User talk:Trekphiler|<font color="#1034A6"><sup><small>hit me ♠</small> </sup>]]</font> 14:21, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
+== Neutral POV? ==
+This appears very much to be written from a British point of view.  How did Germany, or or the United States, or the Soviet Union, view the Mid-Atlantic Gap?  The issue of submarines vs. merchant convoys in the Atlantic is extremely important to WWII.  Beyond the glaring use of only a British perspective, I don't think the article gives due importance to the actions, consequences, perceptions, and planning of the other major players in the North Atlantic, nor to the issue of merchant shipping as a whole.  It is as though a former British officer describes what happened from his perspective, without considering that other nations were involved and had their own perspectives, or that WWII was a complex global event rather than solely an assault on the UK.