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Hello, I'm Jprg1966. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Third party (United States) seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Jprg1966 ^(talk) 16:47, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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edits on third party

In response to jprg1966, in edit at 2:33pm on August 29 I have simply rearranged the content of the article which he has reverted to. No changes in content have been made. The rearrangements were an attempt to eliminate the two-party bias that was evident in the previous version. While the comments were neutral, the arrangement seemed to be an attempt to deter voters from third party candidates.

I am impressed with your compromise solution. It does not alter the article's quality or tone, but shifts emphasis slightly.

There is one last issue, which is that now there is not much of a lead. Perhaps a neutral summary of the rest of the page would be doable? If you don't feel like writing, it you can mark the page with {{Lead too short|date=August 2012}}. --Jprg1966 ^(talk) 18:47, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A barnstar for you!

	The Editor's Barnstar
	For averting an edit war by finding an acceptable compromise. Jprg1966 ^(talk) 18:49, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Haha, thank you! I would be happy to write the lead! I will do my best to keep it neutral.