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== Is biased! ==

The first paragraph of the main text ends with very partial language: "They are powerful lobbyists who wish to keep pimping and the exploitation of women legal in the United States." Someone else should rewrite this article.



== Needs citations ==
== Needs citations ==

Revision as of 23:46, 12 September 2012

Is biased!

The first paragraph of the main text ends with very partial language: "They are powerful lobbyists who wish to keep pimping and the exploitation of women legal in the United States." Someone else should rewrite this article.


Needs citations

I'm not sure the 'Original Research' template is the right one, but the whole article is in desperate need of citations. It reads very much like it was written by someone close to the subject matter. The last paragraph in particular is more like the conclusion of an opinion article than an encyclopedic one.Zegota (talk) 02:40, 14 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I just changed the template to COI, which I think is more appropriate. I don't know much about the FSC, so I don't know how much I can help, but there are a lot of problems with this article, starting about a month ago. Zashitnik (talk) 10:05, 17 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]