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Thanks, [[User:Cptnono|Cptnono]] ([[User talk:Cptnono|talk]]) 12:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC) |
Thanks, [[User:Cptnono|Cptnono]] ([[User talk:Cptnono|talk]]) 12:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC) |
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Nice article! I found something that has no citation in the Retirement section(lol), but I found another one. Why are you putting in citations before the sentence is over? That makes no sense. |
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The article is very good. It grasps a lot of what a reader would ask from an article. That is definitely checked off on the [[WP:FA|featured article]] checklist. |
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Out of all, I think with a little scanning over, you could send your article for examination! [[Special:Contributions/2601:8:3800:55E:1E0:1E6A:9B3F:9B59|2601:8:3800:55E:1E0:1E6A:9B3F:9B59]] ([[User talk:2601:8:3800:55E:1E0:1E6A:9B3F:9B59|talk]]) 11:31, 27 November 2014 (UTC) |
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I've listed this article for peer review because it would be great to see if it could get to FA quality. Zak has retired since the page was brought to GA. Any extra eyes on grammar would be appreciated.
Thanks, Cptnono (talk) 12:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC) Nice article! I found something that has no citation in the Retirement section(lol), but I found another one. Why are you putting in citations before the sentence is over? That makes no sense. The article is very good. It grasps a lot of what a reader would ask from an article. That is definitely checked off on the featured article checklist. Out of all, I think with a little scanning over, you could send your article for examination! 2601:8:3800:55E:1E0:1E6A:9B3F:9B59 (talk) 11:31, 27 November 2014 (UTC)