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== Peer Review 2 == |
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I thought this was a good article overall, there were many good sources and I thought the content was organized very well. In the section with all the examples, I think that some of the examples stray away from a neutral tone. For example, the pampers example that states that they are changing their diapers to save money could be worded differently to stay on the topic of greenwashing, avoiding anything unrelated. |
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I also really liked the lead section and thought that it really stressed how important this topic is. |
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I would like to see more detail on the outcomes of greenwashing and the impact on our society since it is such an important issue that not many people know about! |
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Great job! |
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Peer Review #1
The Lead Section: The lead section gave a general explanation about what greenwashing is. It provides important background information setting up the reader for the article to go more in depth.
Structure: The sections are in good order, talking about the topic, the usage of greenwashing, history on the topic, then going into the regulation in different countries, and examples. I feel that this is a solid general layout.
Balance: I feel that there weren't any major points left out and the article doesn't really contain anything off topic.
Neutral: The article is neutral in tone and it is all based on fact.
Sources: The sources are solid, all of them are derived from books, journals, reliable websites, and databases. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tbartlett16 (talk • contribs) 23:14, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review 2
I thought this was a good article overall, there were many good sources and I thought the content was organized very well. In the section with all the examples, I think that some of the examples stray away from a neutral tone. For example, the pampers example that states that they are changing their diapers to save money could be worded differently to stay on the topic of greenwashing, avoiding anything unrelated.
I also really liked the lead section and thought that it really stressed how important this topic is.
I would like to see more detail on the outcomes of greenwashing and the impact on our society since it is such an important issue that not many people know about!
Great job!