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Hey Julia,

I thought you did a great job adding information to the Riverine rabbit.

I do have two suggestions to make it better.

1) Under the Identification subtitle, you talk about the description of the animal. I would add how big or small the animal is in terms of dimensions of the animal so people can compare and contrast the size to other mammals. 2) In the behavior section you mention how the rabbit eats its own waste products, but don't mention the actual term- coprophagy.

--Khmccorm (talk) 04:14, 8 December 2014 (UTC)Kelly[reply]

Julia, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the new updates to this article. I think there are a few things that would make it even better. If at all possible, a picture added to the article would help the reader imagine what this particular rabbit looks like. Also, the reader could have benefitted from knowing the rabbit's life span or time taken to mature. Just a few suggestions, it was overall very well put together.

-Lauren LeidenLwleiden (talk) 03:41, 11 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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 -Lauren Leiden[[User:Lwleiden|Lwleiden]] ([[User talk:Lwleiden|talk]]) 03:41, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
-== Under Construction ==
-Dear Wikipedia Editors interested in this article,
-Over the next few weeks, my team will be doing a very large edit to this article. Today, we will be posting a draft to the live page. Please excuse minor errors, such as close paraphrasing, as we will be editing and proofreading this article in depth over the next few weeks. However, if you see any mistakes that we make, or ways that we could improve, please feel free to notify us, as we would be happy to take these suggestions. Our team is a group of undergraduate college students, completing a large scale edit as part of an assignment for our writing class.
-The following is a broad list of changes that we made
-- Expanded on all of the sections, especially ecology
-- Integrated information from a much wider pool of sources
-- Added sections on endangerment and conservation
-- Improved and expanded the lead
-Thank you,
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