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:It could do with a general copyedit and reordering : I shall try to do that myself at some point. However, apart from this, the content seems far too myopic and focused on events of the 2000s : the 1990s are barely mentioned at all. [[User:Morwen|Morwen]] - [[User_talk:Morwen|Talk]] 22:09, 18 October 2006 (UTC) |
:It could do with a general copyedit and reordering : I shall try to do that myself at some point. However, apart from this, the content seems far too myopic and focused on events of the 2000s : the 1990s are barely mentioned at all. [[User:Morwen|Morwen]] - [[User_talk:Morwen|Talk]] 22:09, 18 October 2006 (UTC) |
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:In Popular Culture could use changes. You have only referenced Eastenders references on other various television programs, though Eastenders is throughout all British culture. It also seems a little silly that nearly every single program you mention just happens to be a BBC production, as Eastenders is, and so gives little indication of "Eastenders in popular culture". Some references and more depth is required there. However, the paragraph about Derek Martin goes into far too much depth and feels gratuitous.—[[User:Abraham_Lure|<u>Abraham Lure</u>]] 23:16, 18 October 2006 (UTC) |
:In Popular Culture could use changes. You have only referenced Eastenders references on other various television programs, though Eastenders is throughout all British culture. It also seems a little silly that nearly every single program you mention just happens to be a BBC production, as Eastenders is, and so gives little indication of "Eastenders in popular culture". Some references and more depth is required there. However, the paragraph about Derek Martin being on Little Britain goes into far too much depth and feels gratuitous.—[[User:Abraham_Lure|<u>Abraham Lure</u>]] 23:16, 18 October 2006 (UTC) |
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It failed it's former FAC nomination, but all the reasons it failed have been fixed now, and it's been much improved. Trampikey (talk to me)(contribs) 18:37, 17 October 2006 (UTC)
- It could do with a general copyedit and reordering : I shall try to do that myself at some point. However, apart from this, the content seems far too myopic and focused on events of the 2000s : the 1990s are barely mentioned at all. Morwen - Talk 22:09, 18 October 2006 (UTC)
- In Popular Culture could use changes. You have only referenced Eastenders references on other various television programs, though Eastenders is throughout all British culture. It also seems a little silly that nearly every single program you mention just happens to be a BBC production, as Eastenders is, and so gives little indication of "Eastenders in popular culture". Some references and more depth is required there. However, the paragraph about Derek Martin being on Little Britain goes into far too much depth and feels gratuitous.—Abraham Lure 23:16, 18 October 2006 (UTC)