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Discrimination against women in Iran can be traced to decade’s nay centuries of hardship for women and the rise of Islamic Republic has not made things more comfortable either. I believe writing this article will bring about public attention to the injustices that are happening against women in Iran. The public awareness might encourage the international community to put more pressure on Iran about this matter.  I want to revise this article to contribute to the discourse of equality of men and women in Iran and foresee that this study will lead to policy changes that at least could make the life better for women in Iran.

I compared my article to a B-rate article name Women’s Rights in Saudi Arabia. The Wikipedia article on Saudi Arabia is stronger than my article because of the extensive literature used in this article. Each sub-topic is supported by background information as well as the literature. The article is well written and remains focused on the most critical issues regarding the topic, which it makes the article easy to read.