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Cheers, [[User:Auntieruth55|auntieruth]] [[User talk:Auntieruth55|(talk)]] 16:33, 6 June 2018 (UTC) |
Cheers, [[User:Auntieruth55|auntieruth]] [[User talk:Auntieruth55|(talk)]] 16:33, 6 June 2018 (UTC) |
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:Hi [[User:Auntieruth55|auntieruth]], I haven't seen this review, so I apologize for such a late reply. Please, give me a couple of days to check everything and sort things out. Then I will return with a reply.--[[User:Seiya|Seiya]] ([[User talk:Seiya|talk]]) 16:34, 18 June 2018 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 15:24, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
I'll start this review in a few days auntieruth (talk) 15:24, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
- I've looked through the first couple of sections. this article will need work on grammar and "flow"....it seems to jump around, even within paragraphs, between different time periods. It would be good to define "partisans"--were these Soviet partisans, Crimean partisans, Communist, anticommunist? Why did the Soviets deport Tartars who were communists? Or didn't it matter? Was the defining feature Tartar, Muslim, or...something else?
Cheers, auntieruth (talk) 16:33, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
- Hi auntieruth, I haven't seen this review, so I apologize for such a late reply. Please, give me a couple of days to check everything and sort things out. Then I will return with a reply.--Seiya (talk) 16:34, 18 June 2018 (UTC)