User talk:GoingBatty

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Yevgheniy Yenin

Goog morning, GoingBatty. Could you be so kind as to check my last changes to the Yevgheniy Yenin article that I made May,23. I tried to follow all your recommendations. Best, Dasha — Preceding unsigned comment added by DashaHor (talk • contribs) 14:32, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

@DashaHor:  Done! GoingBatty (talk) 20:55, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for getting back to me and your comments. As to reference 7 in article, its impossible to find now the Decree wich awarded Mr. Yenin with his Order and when I didnt put refernce in previous editions you corecrted me that I should, so what I have to do in such a case. Also I find a lot of articles in Wikipedia that doesnt have references to each sentence. When I put reference to the educational instituotion in section Early life you also corrected me. So why some articles in Wikipedia doesnt have references to each sentence and you edite me every time? — Preceding unsigned comment added by DashaHor (talk • contribs) 18:05, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

@DashaHor: There are many existing Wikipedia articles that need to be improved (or maybe even deleted) - see Wikipedia:Other stuff exists. It seems that you are writing the draft based on what you personally know about Yenin, and then you are trying to find sources to match what you know. Instead, you should be gathering the independent reliable sources, summarizing what they say, and then providing the inline citations so everyone else can see the same sources you used. Hope this helps! GoingBatty (talk) 21:03, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

Lets try ones again. Could you please check the edited article? Thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DashaHor (talk • contribs) 17:59, 1 June 2020 (UTC) Goog morning, GoingBatty. Could you be so kind as to check my last changes to the Yevgheniy Yenin article? — Preceding unsigned comment added by DashaHor (talk • contribs) 14:49, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

@DashaHor:  Done! Thank you for all your improvements to the draft. GoingBatty (talk) 14:56, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

Good morning, GoingBatty! How long my article will be reviewing? I am waiting already three weeks( — Preceding unsigned comment added by DashaHor (talk • contribs) 07:46, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

@DashaHor: At the top of Draft:Yevgheniy Yenin is your answer: "Review waiting, please be patient. This may take 5 weeks or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order." (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 23:08, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Independent/secondary sources citations added. Request to review again.

Hi GoingBatty, First of all thank you so much for your help on clearing out my doubts on my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Nikhil_Paralikar regarding the sources. As suggested by you, I have further added secondary sources which are newspaper and magazine articles and TV news channel sources. I would like your assistance to review the article again and help me publish the article. Thank you. Mrunmayi Katkar (talk) 08:57, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

@Mrunmayi Katkar:  Done! GoingBatty (talk) 13:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

Hi GoingBatty, As suggested by you, the changes were made. I would like your assistance to review the article again and help me publish the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Nikhil_Paralikar Thank you,[[Mrunmayi Katkar (talk) 20:34, 10 June 2020 (UTC)]]

Hi GoingBatty, As suggested by you, the changes were made. I would like your assistance to review the article again and help me publish the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Nikhil_Paralikar Thank you, Mrunmayi Katkar (talk) 21:40, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

@Mrunmayi Katkar: I made some formatting updates to Draft:Nikhil Paralikar and left my comments there for all to see. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 13:46, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Draft: Kamal Chawla

Thanks for the prompt review of article on Kamal Chawla. Have updated as per your comments. Kcsnooker (talk) 06:09, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

@Kcsnooker: Thank you - I have responded at Draft:Kamal Chawla. GoingBatty (talk) 13:34, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks again for the review. I have made all the changes as mentioned by you. There is one citation which is of Wikipedia, but the citation of the source in the Wiki article is also broken and hence there is no other citation available. Let me know how to address that. Also, have restored the COI page that I had created earlier. Thanks again! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kcsnooker (talk • contribs) 18:02, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

@Kcsnooker: It appears that reference #3 of Cue sports at the 2013 Asian Indoor and Martial Arts Games could also be used on Draft:Kamal Chawla. Your draft claims "He has won 10 International Medals for India", but the medal table only shows nine medals. Plus, Cue sports at the 2013 Asian Indoor and Martial Arts Games states that he was an independent athlete (not competing for India). I hope you can address these discrepancies in the draft. GoingBatty (talk) 15:43, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks, have added clarification on the 10 international medals and also corrected the Medal List. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kcsnooker (talk • contribs) 15:49, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

hello

hello batty i have done changes which were raised by you and all was done according to wiki's policies. my purpose to create article named as Sukhpal Sukh on wikipedia is just to provide information about this music producers who is in punjabi (india asia) music industry since 1990 with huge catalogue . this artist was almost away from tv, newspapers or magazines interviews,social media since long that's why there are not so much references available on net. now he is reconnecting to his fan with social media, and his offical website which is under construction. my aim is not to promote him or do any advertisement for him as he is a well known and legend in punjabi music industry. so i will be happy if you can look into this matter as early as possible. thanks and regards brother — Preceding unsigned comment added by VirdiOnline (talk • contribs) 18:02, 10 June 2020 (UTC)

@VirdiOnline: References do not have to be on the net. They can also be newspaper and magazine articles, as long as you provide enough information that other people can find and read the same articles. I have added my comments on Draft:Sukhpal Sukh. (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 16:20, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

That's the main problem brother this artist was kind of unsociable person at his peak of career. Thats why he was not a part of interviews, print or digital articles. So this article is my homage to this artist. Now he is working hard to maintain and rebuild his social media presence. My request is to publish this article to main space. VirdiOnline (talk) 18:08, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

Sukhpal Sukh

Hello brother...i have made correction as per your suggestion. Kindly check that draft named Sukhpal Sukh and do the needful. Thanks and regards brother VirdiOnline (talk) 17:58, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

@VirdiOnline: No need to create a new section header to continue a conversation. I made some updates for you and provided my response at Draft:Sukhpal Sukh. GoingBatty (talk) 22:12, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi GoingBatty and Thank you

I believe that Dr. Adrian R. Lewis' Wikipedia draft may be ready for publishing live. Can you please take a look? Thank you so much.Roccie ;) 13:41, 13 June 2020 (UTC)Roccie

@Roccie: I made some updates to Draft:Adrian Richard Lewis today. It appears that he meets Wikipedia:Notability (academics)#Criteria, but I wish you had more independent sources. Before you resubmit the draft, I hope you can explain who considers Omaha Beach the best analysis available on the Normandy Invasion. Thanks! GoingBatty (talk) 15:12, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

FYI

 – moved comments from same user from other places to this section

Hello GoingBatty

For some reason - my changes did not publish from a day or so ago. I had planned on you looking at a revised version. My apology. Yes, not sure what happen - it looked like an older version. I took the "best analysis of the Normandy Invasion" out. I added some external links. I am so thank for you - water in my eyes - I know I need a bit of help. I am trying and will continue to do so when I see review some of the newer pages established. Thank you so much and you are greatly appreciated!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Roccie (talk • contribs) 23:15, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Yes GoingBatty

I need some more independent sources and am working it. You are appreciated dearly! Roccie ;) 23:18, 14 June 2020 (UTC)Roccie

FYI

 – Combined sections (please stop creating new sections for the same topic)

Hi GoingBatty - Believe we are there!

Hello, Thank you again for your help in getting this ready. I did as you stated and put a few more sources in to include one from ProQuest. It appears to be so much out there and I believe what is relevant is contained in the article. I would ask if we can get it approved and published in the mainstream? Much appreciated. Many Blessings - stay safe - stay healthy! Roccie ;) 16:06, 15 June 2020 (UTC)Roccie

@Roccie: I've made some updates to your new references for you. Could you please expand the ProQuest reference? Thanks! - Absolutely - the ProQuest reference is expanded. Thank you!! Roccie - Thank you ---->GoingBatty (talk) 23:40, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

I believe we are there.

Hello GoingBatty, I've resubmitted Dr. Adrian R. Lewis' Article for a review and submission approval. I have added more to the ProQuest source, as instructed. Thank you for all your help, thus far. When you have an opportunity. Please review for an official publish to the internet. Thank you! Roccie ;) 02:07, 17 June 2020 (UTC)Roccie - Sincerely. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Roccie (talk • contribs)

What article links are missing in ChroPath page for which you are marking it as Orphan?

Hi, Request you please help me to understand what article links required here. I found there are lots of article links have been added but still it is getting marked as Orphan. I want to learn this so I can also help others in this. Appreciate your help me to understand this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 106.51.22.253 (talk) 16:45, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

There are no Wikipedia articles that link to ChroPath. There are five links in the {{orphan}} template I added to the article - please click each one and read it. Thanks! (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 19:21, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

Review new page request

Hello, you have previously rejected my new page proposal due to lack of references. I have now added some. Can I ask you to kindly review? The page is Draft:Dividend Arbitrage. Many thanks in advance! — Preceding unsigned comment added by TheTroothFairy (talk • contribs) 18:44, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

@TheTroothFairy:  Done! (Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four keyboard tildes like this: ~~~~. Or, you can use the [ reply ] button, which automatically signs posts.) GoingBatty (talk) 21:08, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks very much for your help! TheTroothFairy (talk) 07:53, 14 June 2020 (UTC)TheTroothFairy

Introduction to Gordon Tredgold, and correction of Tyler L Adams

Please help in accessing this new Article, and the correction of Tyler L Adams, it takes almost 124 hours without any response from moderator, contributor and others regarding Tyler L Adams Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 01:00, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: Draft:Gordon Tredgold is not an article - it is a draft (see WP:Drafts) which you have not yet submitted for review. Before you submit it, please change the promotional wording (e.g. "awarding winner, super excellent coach"), fix the section headers (see Help:Section), refer to him as "Tredgold" (see WP:SURNAME), and fix the spelling and capitalization.

The big yellow box on Draft:Tyler L. Adams (which I just moved to the top of the draft for you) states "Review waiting, please be patient. This may take 5 weeks or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order." I see that the comments I left on 9 June have not been addressed. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 14:30, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Feedback

Please what's the feedback of Draft: Tyler L Adams because I have edited well, and provided important links for references. Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 05:38, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: I see that the comments I left at Draft:Tyler L. Adams on 9 June have not been addressed. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 14:31, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Please help with unaddressed issue regarding on 9 June. All I know I tried all the possible way to meet up with what you said at that time Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 21:46, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: Let's start with the question I asked: Which of the Wikipedia:Notability (academics)#Criteria does Adams meet? GoingBatty (talk) 23:46, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Well based on what I read Wikipedia: Notability (academics) one must hold high top position such as distinguished Professor, and other. Tyler is the current Dean of Mass Communication in the American University of Emirates, he was also dean a Dean of university of Bahamas and many more. His published work have contributed a lot world education. All the links provided are nearly independent source Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 04:49, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

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Please I want to know how to how to submit my draft for reviewing please, please help me to submit it or guide me. Thanks Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 16:29, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: You claimed above "His published work have contributed a lot world education." Do you have an independent reliable source that states this? You claimed "All the links provided are nearly independent source". Biographies on his employers' web sites are not independent. His book's web site and Amazon listings are not independent. GoingBatty (talk) 23:19, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the positive response sir, please help to access my Draft: Gordon Tredgold, I have edited promotional words, please help me to submit it or guide me to submit it Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 23:26, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: I see that someone else has nominated Draft:Gordon Tredgold for speedy deletion. You'll have to work through that process before submitting it for review. GoingBatty (talk) 00:05, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Yes, I have work on it to contest for speedy deletion.i was asked to remove promotional words, and I have removed them. That's only problem with the draft. I guess you can see it was edited from it original write up. Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 04:37, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: I added the AFC draft template to Draft:Gordon Tredgold for you. Before you submit the draft, I suggest you provide a reference for every award, fix the section headers (see Help:Section), add Template:Reflist, fix your reference templates, fix the capitalization and punctuation, and refer to him as "Tredgold" (not "Gordon" or "Gardon" per WP:SURNAME). Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 15:51, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Please help me to review this article. I tried to submit it but I couldn't Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 17:39, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

Please check my draft: Abdullahi Dauda Belel, I tried to submit but I couldn't get place to submit it. Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 17:41, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

@Abbas Kwarbai: At the top of Draft:Abdullahi Dauda Belel, type {{subst:AFC draft}} and save your draft. Before you submit your draft, please fix the section headers (see Help:Section), add Template:Reflist, fix the authors of your reference templates, fix the capitalization and punctuation and date format and redlinks, and remember WP:SURNAME. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 00:45, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Alice Cohen

Hi, I'm terrible at filling in references and stuff which I know is your speciality so could you pleae help me out with the article Alice Cohen?

Many thanks! Joe Vitale 5 (talk) 16:00, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

@Joe Vitale 5:  Done! GoingBatty (talk) 18:01, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Request on 14:25:36, 23 June 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Claratabet

• Claratabet (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Biztera (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello,

Can you please help re-evaluate the correction i've made based on your feedback last month? I haave tried to resubmit many times but am not able to catch any additional feedback.

Best, Clara

Claratabet (talk) 14:25, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

@Claratabet: In order to resubmit, you have to click the blue [Resubmit] button on Draft:Biztera. I have left my comments for you on the draft, so future reviewers will be able to see them too. Also, if you work for the company or are being paid to write this draft, please review WP:Plain and simple conflict of interest guide and make the mandatory disclosure on your user page. Thanks, and happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 21:39, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Editor's Barnstar
	You are amazing. The document on Dr. Adrian R. Lewis - looks notable and sourced correctly. It is a gem now after your editing and reviewing. Thank you very much! Roccie ;) 13:19, 24 June 2020 (UTC)