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Behavioral Ecology Peer Review

I have reviewed the article and made edits to correct grammar, syntax, and punctuation errors. I rearranged sentences to make them more reader-friendly. I also added hyperlinks for topics that would further facilitate the understanding of the readers. Overall, concise and informative writing. I would suggest looking for more images to add, although I personally was not able to find any on Wikimedia Commons. Dyklee (talk) 23:42, 29 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Behavioral Ecology Peer Review

Hello! I thought this article to be a very comprehensive article. The lead section is a bit brief so I would expand more with a brief introduction of their anatomy and population structure that is further explained in the respective sections. I fixed a few grammatical details and removed a few unnecessary words to allow more concise and effective language for the audience. For instance, I shortened run-on sentences and changed phrases like "because of this" to "accordingly." I also added hyperlinks to terms that could be further explored such as "velvet spider," "cribellum," and "social spider." I would recommend finding and adding more information on the sexual ratio skew towards females in the Population Structure section. I also thought disperal could be a sub heading for a more expansive header such as home range and territoriality.

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 I have reviewed the article and made edits to correct grammar, syntax, and punctuation errors. I rearranged sentences to make them more reader-friendly. I also added hyperlinks for topics that would further facilitate the understanding of the readers. Overall, concise and informative writing. I would suggest looking for more images to add, although I personally was not able to find any on Wikimedia Commons.
 [[User:Dyklee|Dyklee]] ([[User talk:Dyklee|talk]]) 23:42, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
+== Behavioral Ecology Peer Review ==
+Hello! I thought this article to be a very comprehensive article. The lead section is a bit brief so I would expand more with a brief introduction of their anatomy and population structure that is further explained in the respective sections. I fixed a few grammatical details and removed a few unnecessary words to allow more concise and effective language for the audience. For instance, I shortened run-on sentences and changed phrases like "because of this" to "accordingly." I also added hyperlinks to terms that could be further explored such as "velvet spider," "cribellum," and "social spider." I would recommend finding and adding more information on the sexual ratio skew towards females in the Population Structure section. I also thought disperal could be a sub heading for a more expansive header such as home range and territoriality.