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A user with 234 edits. Account created on 4 June 2023.
21 June 2023
- 12:0912:09, 21 June 2023 diff hist −66 m Rochdale Typo clean up. Tag: Visual edit
- 12:0612:06, 21 June 2023 diff hist −782 Rochdale Created a section termed MODERN ROCHDALE - the old section did not align with the article as a whole - focusing on topics such as a television show and criminality in the town. These topics might belong in this article but not in this location within it. This part of the article needs lot of work - there is a slight hint of bias and lack of objectivity in much of the content. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:2411:24, 21 June 2023 diff hist +569 Rochdale Corrected numerous spelling errors, typos and created more white space for enhanced readability. Adding links explaining the macroeconomic aspects of the collapse of the textile industry. Tag: Visual edit
- 10:5610:56, 21 June 2023 diff hist +16 m Rochdale Very minor mods. Updated population with a live link. Added more white space for readability. Clarified certain claims - broadly defined the decline of the regional textile industry rather than a focus on just spinning capacity as originally written. Tag: Visual edit
- 10:2310:23, 21 June 2023 diff hist +66 m Siegfried Sassoon →Homosexuality and Affairs Tag: Visual edit
- 10:1210:12, 21 June 2023 diff hist +341 Siegfried Sassoon →War opposition and Craiglockhart: Added a published claim relating to the friendly fire incident described - there are several published articles insinuating this shooting was intentional - it has been made clear this is a fairly dubious claim - but it is worth inclusion, providing some context relating to how Sassoon might have been perceived in the ranks). A link to the online article added. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5409:54, 21 June 2023 diff hist +15 m Audrey Hochberg Minor clarification. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:4409:44, 21 June 2023 diff hist +928 Microsoft Certified Professional →Overview: This needs a more thoughtful re-write - I just tried to provide some historical context. The page is called MCP - the MCP was a free standing certification. This should really be a page about Microsoft Citification Offerings as a bulk topic - Tag: Visual edit
20 June 2023
- 23:0823:08, 20 June 2023 diff hist +72 m Siegfried Sassoon Supported the concept of the likely mentality of the 'pre-war' Sassoon - a wealthy aesthete and a product of a culture of privilege. The prior tone suggested that this man was 'always' tuned into serious matters - this clearly was not the case based on his literary activities prior to the first world war. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4622:46, 20 June 2023 diff hist +24 Siegfried Sassoon Cleaned up introduced typos. Added more context relating to Owen's and Sassoon's actual relationship. Expanded on current academic thinking as to his later life conversation to Catholicism - the original content lacked any serious attempt to expand on his motivations for this conversation - I think this adds to other content relating to how this man's views changed over his life time - in a manner that respects his legacy without extrapolating too much into his deeper motivations. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3417:34, 20 June 2023 diff hist +326 Siegfried Sassoon →Religion: Enhanced References. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5004:50, 20 June 2023 diff hist +43 m Siegfried Sassoon No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1404:14, 20 June 2023 diff hist +131 m User:Exnihilox No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5803:58, 20 June 2023 diff hist +42 Siegfried Sassoon →Personal life Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5403:54, 20 June 2023 diff hist +61 Siegfried Sassoon →Religion Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3203:32, 20 June 2023 diff hist +3,498 Siegfried Sassoon →Religion Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1303:13, 20 June 2023 diff hist +1,834 Siegfried Sassoon →Personal life: Enhanced the discussion of suggested homoerotic relationship between Owen and Sassoon - often this topic is danced around in many articles on both men - I was very cautious to discuss with tact - both are personal heroes...the later relationships of Sassoon's are not in doubt. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5002:50, 20 June 2023 diff hist 0 Talk:Siegfried Sassoon →Suggested Total Rework to Make if More Logical.
- 02:4802:48, 20 June 2023 diff hist +6,416 Talk:Siegfried Sassoon →Suggested Total Rework to Make if More Logical.: new section Tag: New topic
- 02:2602:26, 20 June 2023 diff hist +23 m Siegfried Sassoon Marriage time lines. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2002:20, 20 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Siegfried Sassoon No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1102:11, 20 June 2023 diff hist +105 m Siegfried Sassoon No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0102:01, 20 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Siegfried Sassoon 1936 Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4101:41, 20 June 2023 diff hist −1 Siegfried Sassoon Clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:3901:39, 20 June 2023 diff hist −4 m Siegfried Sassoon Clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:3101:31, 20 June 2023 diff hist +14 m Siegfried Sassoon Typos. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:2401:24, 20 June 2023 diff hist +4 m Siegfried Sassoon Clean up and clarification. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5600:56, 20 June 2023 diff hist +13 m Siegfried Sassoon Clean up my own typos. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:4900:49, 20 June 2023 diff hist +65 m Siegfried Sassoon Clean up. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:3200:32, 20 June 2023 diff hist −9 m Siegfried Sassoon Typos. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:3000:30, 20 June 2023 diff hist +282 m Siegfried Sassoon Clean up my own typos. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1300:13, 20 June 2023 diff hist +79 m Siegfried Sassoon Minor language clean up - too many run in sentences for easy reading. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:0400:04, 20 June 2023 diff hist +6 m Siegfried Sassoon Clean up and clarification. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:0100:01, 20 June 2023 diff hist +386 m Siegfried Sassoon Made the article more readable. Added some text to support the spelling of his regiment based on the 1881 final title of the regiment adopted. There is a citation supporting this. It retained the archaic spelling of Welch, instead of Welsh, and Fuzileers for Fusiliers. I noted this has been mentioned a few time - looks like a spelling error. Took some slightly odd archaic clearly copied language out but tried to retain the context of 'Sassoon the man' - prior to WWI, Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
19 June 2023
- 17:1617:16, 19 June 2023 diff hist +2,017 N User:Exnihilox Non promotional detail about this editor - provided for some initial context. This information is useful in understanding why an edit or an article is as it is. Tags: Possible self promotion in userspace Visual edit
- 07:1307:13, 19 June 2023 diff hist 0 m Siegfried Sassoon Typo - played Tag: Visual edit
- 07:1107:11, 19 June 2023 diff hist +96 m Siegfried Sassoon This article was originally written with very large blocks of text - one can debate paragraph structure, but adding some thoughtful breaks and white space makes the article more accessible to readers - very long run on sentences are prevalent in the document - I did modify this spacing. I added the reference the cricket club in TbW - it had the name but only indirectly noted it was factually a local cricket club. I still think the sentences are far to long for a modern reader! Tag: Visual edit
- 06:4906:49, 19 June 2023 diff hist +7 m Siegfried Sassoon Large blocks of text are noted throughout this article. I added more paragraph structures to aid in reading. I did modify opening words to each new paragraph for readability. No actual content was modified and all references are intact. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:1706:17, 19 June 2023 diff hist +4 m Audrey Hochberg Clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:1606:16, 19 June 2023 diff hist +151 m Audrey Hochberg Expanded offspring - one individual daughter is a notable academic. Dr. Judith Hochberg who is well published and worked for the Los Alamos National Laboratory. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:5805:58, 19 June 2023 diff hist +105 m E. Howard Hunt Added more detail on the children of Hunt. Enhanced clarity given Hunt's slightly unusual name choices for his kids - and their portrayed roles in film portrayals. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3805:38, 19 June 2023 diff hist +47 E. Howard Hunt →Dorothy Wetzel - Hunt's First Wife: Clarified with a focus on clearly pointing out that the source of the reporting of how much/if Dorothy Hunt was actually carrying excessive cash for nefarious reason - seems to a thoughtful reader to be not as a robust as one would like in a well written Wikipedia article and boarders on perhaps a 'conspiracy theory' - as written the reader is now left to consider the actual accuracy of the aging newspaper story refenced. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2805:28, 19 June 2023 diff hist −2 E. Howard Hunt →Dorothy Wetzel - Hunt's First Wife: Spacing for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2605:26, 19 June 2023 diff hist +4 E. Howard Hunt →Dorothy Wetzel - Hunt's First Wife: Clarity by better spacing - Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2205:22, 19 June 2023 diff hist +108 m E. Howard Hunt →Dorothy Wetzel: Changed to ensure clarity - the original form was hard to understand the children that Hunt and Wetzel had. There was a suggestion the kids were also killed in there air crash - numerous readers did read it that way - and it was not the case, Further, just using 'SHE' is clearer than name repetition. Some of grammar was also obvious. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4804:48, 19 June 2023 diff hist +879 Talk:E. Howard Hunt →Poor grammar - ??? Needs to be written by a native English speaker!: new section Tag: New topic
15 June 2023
- 16:4116:41, 15 June 2023 diff hist +6 Talk:GCE Ordinary Level (United Kingdom) →O-Level Grading Comments are not ACCURATE.
- 16:3816:38, 15 June 2023 diff hist +1 Talk:GCE Ordinary Level (United Kingdom) →O-Level Grading Comments as not ACCURATE.
- 16:3816:38, 15 June 2023 diff hist +593 Talk:GCE Ordinary Level (United Kingdom) →O-Level Grading Comments as not ACCURATE.: new section Tag: New topic
4 June 2023
- 18:2118:21, 4 June 2023 diff hist +1,048 Talk:Siegfried Sassoon →Michael?: Reply Tag: Reply
