User contributions for Magnolia Zuniga
A user with 99 edits. Account created on 2 October 2017.
7 October 2017
- 18:4618:46, 7 October 2017 diff hist +40 m K. Pattabhi Jois combined two sentences and moved them to career in order to specify how Jois got a teaching position at the college
- 18:4118:41, 7 October 2017 diff hist +309 m K. Pattabhi Jois →International Travels: added sentence describing the spread of his system of yoga due to visit to encinitas. Citation included
- 18:3718:37, 7 October 2017 diff hist +242 m K. Pattabhi Jois →KPJAYI: added sentence about the first americans to attend classes with citation
- 18:3518:35, 7 October 2017 diff hist +127 m K. Pattabhi Jois added citation
- 18:3418:34, 7 October 2017 diff hist +68 m K. Pattabhi Jois →KPJAYI: added sentence describing in more detail the yoga hall addition to his house
- 18:3118:31, 7 October 2017 diff hist +1 m K. Pattabhi Jois →KPJAYI: condensed sentences about new location in Gokulam
- 18:3018:30, 7 October 2017 diff hist +2 m K. Pattabhi Jois →KPJAYI: changed word He to Jois
- 18:2518:25, 7 October 2017 diff hist +39 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Career: split up this section into career, KPJAYI (school in India), and International Travels
- 16:3316:33, 7 October 2017 diff hist −1 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: correcting punctuation
- 16:3016:30, 7 October 2017 diff hist +153 User talk:Biografer →Thank you!: new section
- 15:4515:45, 7 October 2017 diff hist +155 K. Pattabhi Jois added bibliography section and Jois's only book Yoga Mala
- 15:4115:41, 7 October 2017 diff hist −5 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: removed an unnecessary word
- 15:4015:40, 7 October 2017 diff hist −2 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: condensed the paragraph about the king and the Mysore Palace
- 15:3815:38, 7 October 2017 diff hist 0 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: reworked the sentence about his marriage in order to start with the date
- 15:3715:37, 7 October 2017 diff hist −11 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: condensed sentences of marriage and children and moved sentence about the opening of the first school in Lakshmipuram below within the same section.
- 15:3315:33, 7 October 2017 diff hist −23 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: removed two words that were unnecessary
- 15:3315:33, 7 October 2017 diff hist +414 K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: added a sentence (with citation) with more details to his training with Krishnamacharya. It also explains his entrance into teaching at Sanskrit College and segways nicely into career section
- 15:2415:24, 7 October 2017 diff hist +2 K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: reworked the paragraphs in this section in order to follow a timeline of moving to Mysore then marriage, then reconnecting with Krishnamacharya, then studies, then moving into career.
- 15:1815:18, 7 October 2017 diff hist +2 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Birth: added a hyphen
- 15:1715:17, 7 October 2017 diff hist +120 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Birth: added a sentence about siblings and role of the mother. Also from the same source citation
- 14:5214:52, 7 October 2017 diff hist −6 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Criticisms: needed to rework the sentences slightly. Integrity of criticism remains
- 14:5014:50, 7 October 2017 diff hist 0 K. Pattabhi Jois →Criticisms: there were two separate paragraphs with the same information about Pattabhi Jois's adjustments. I brought them together
- 14:4714:47, 7 October 2017 diff hist −2 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Criticisms: combined two sentences for better flow
- 14:4614:46, 7 October 2017 diff hist +11 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Criticisms: added the words Pattabhi Jois to begin paragraph instead of He
- 14:4514:45, 7 October 2017 diff hist −50 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Criticisms: combined two sentences for better flow. When I brought them together they were repeating the information.
- 14:4114:41, 7 October 2017 diff hist +2 K. Pattabhi Jois Moved the first paragraph from Career about the Yoga Korunta and whether or not it exists is to criticisms.
- 14:3814:38, 7 October 2017 diff hist −4 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: removed an unnecessary word
- 14:3714:37, 7 October 2017 diff hist +1 K. Pattabhi Jois →Early Life and Education: moved sentence about the years Pattabhi Jois studied with Krishnamacharya in order to link it with the texts that Pattabhi Jois studied
- 14:3514:35, 7 October 2017 diff hist +33 K. Pattabhi Jois added education to the section early life title. I also moved the paragraph regarding the back and forth between Iyengar and Pattabhi Jois to the section criticisms in order to keep the section early life/education to be clearer and read better.
- 14:2714:27, 7 October 2017 diff hist 0 K. Pattabhi Jois moved sentence about Iyengar's comment regarding Pattabhi Jois never being a student to the criticism section since it reads out of place and off topic. This allows the existing paragraph to be focused about Pattabhi Jois's time at the Mysore palace.
- 14:2214:22, 7 October 2017 diff hist −3 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early life and education: creating an additional section called Birth in order to separate his birth and upbringing from early life and education.
- 14:1414:14, 7 October 2017 diff hist −1 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early life and education: correcting spelling error
- 12:5512:55, 7 October 2017 diff hist −1 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Career: too many spaces
- 12:5512:55, 7 October 2017 diff hist +176 m K. Pattabhi Jois attempting to add a citation to Sharath Jois. Hopefully this will work
- 12:3512:35, 7 October 2017 diff hist −90 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Career: I deleted a citation that I was having difficulty with. Will address the problem and come back to it.
- 12:3512:35, 7 October 2017 diff hist −10 K. Pattabhi Jois →Career
- 12:3212:32, 7 October 2017 diff hist −195 K. Pattabhi Jois →Career
- 12:3012:30, 7 October 2017 diff hist +102 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Career: I added an additional citation on Pattabhi Jois's grandson Sharath Jois.
- 12:1612:16, 7 October 2017 diff hist −4 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Career: I eliminated an unnecessary word 'new'
- 12:1612:16, 7 October 2017 diff hist +664 m K. Pattabhi Jois I added a sentence clarifying when and where he opened the first school as well as an additional sentence as to when and where he opened his second and current school
- 12:0812:08, 7 October 2017 diff hist −2 m K. Pattabhi Jois I moved the sentence detailing the scriptures.texts he studied from career to early life/education
- 11:5911:59, 7 October 2017 diff hist 0 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early life and education: corrected a misspelled word
- 11:5811:58, 7 October 2017 diff hist +387 m K. Pattabhi Jois →Early life and education: I added a sentence with citation from the same sources cited that further clarifies.
- 11:5011:50, 7 October 2017 diff hist −1 m K. Pattabhi Jois I moved the sentence about Pattabhi Jois personal practice and son's Ramesh suicide from career to early life/education
- 11:3411:34, 7 October 2017 diff hist 0 m K. Pattabhi Jois I moved the paragraph stating his marriage, purchase of a home, and names of children from career to early life and education.
6 October 2017
- 00:4900:49, 6 October 2017 diff hist −4 m K. Pattabhi Jois No edit summary
- 00:4700:47, 6 October 2017 diff hist +14 m K. Pattabhi Jois No edit summary
- 00:4600:46, 6 October 2017 diff hist −42 m K. Pattabhi Jois No edit summary
5 October 2017
- 18:1018:10, 5 October 2017 diff hist +808 m K. Pattabhi Jois Adding more information on adjustments from Pattabhi Jois and the concept of Parampara which is integral within Ashtanga Yoga and other yoga lineages. Again, please let me know if I need to clarify further. Thank you.
4 October 2017
- 20:1020:10, 4 October 2017 diff hist +390 m K. Pattabhi Jois I added an alternative perspective to the existence of the Yoga Korunta. I also cited from a chapter from the book Gurus Of Modern Yoga written by Jean Byrne, edited by Mark Singleton and Ellen Goldberg. Please let me know if I need to make any changes Tag: Visual edit: Switched
