User contributions for 162.136.193.1

5 May 2010

• 13:1713:17, 5 May 2010 diff hist −3‎ Green Monster ‎ →Advertisements: cleaned up grammar

4 May 2010

• 20:0120:01, 4 May 2010 diff hist +1‎ Barney (British TV series) ‎ →Barney's Friends
• 20:0020:00, 4 May 2010 diff hist −221‎ Barney (British TV series) ‎ →Barney's Friends: Cleaned this section up: attrocious spelling and capitalization errors, beginning sentences with lowercase "and"; looks like a 6-year-old wrote this.
• 19:5619:56, 4 May 2010 diff hist −113‎ Barney (British TV series) ‎ removed obvious vandalism "and was put in the rubbish along with 7 million other programmes which are commercial failures hence 'relative'."
• 19:2419:24, 4 May 2010 diff hist 0‎ The Best Day (George Strait song) ‎ →Plot: spelling correction
• 17:2117:21, 4 May 2010 diff hist −575‎ Dick Clark ‎ →"'57 Heaven": Removed section as the place is closed, all cars sold, and the paragraph didn;t mention how this is related to Dick Clark (vs his restaurant)

29 April 2010

• 19:3519:35, 29 April 2010 diff hist +242‎ Talk:Gobstopper ‎ →Gopbstopper: proper noun?: new section
• 19:3319:33, 29 April 2010 diff hist −160‎ Ferrara Candy Company ‎ →Original Boston Baked Beans: removed: ~ term used in the candy industry to describe any sugar-coated peanut candy:complete nonsense (PayDay? Peanut Brittle? Peanut M&Ms? Goobers? Fiddle Faddle?)

28 April 2010

• 01:1401:14, 28 April 2010 diff hist +78‎ Johnny Ramone ‎No edit summary

27 April 2010

• 21:2921:29, 27 April 2010 diff hist −188‎ Talk:Frogger ‎ →iPod/iPhone
• 21:2621:26, 27 April 2010 diff hist −5‎ Keystone Kapers ‎ →Gameplay
• 21:1921:19, 27 April 2010 diff hist −318‎ Bob Denver ‎ →Later career: cleaned up punctauation, rambling sentences
• 21:1321:13, 27 April 2010 diff hist −286‎ Bob Denver ‎ →Television and film career: removed details abut who played who on Dobie Gillis, irrelevant to the article. Also removed name of the coffee shop his charceter worked at in THSM.

23 April 2010

• 15:2415:24, 23 April 2010 diff hist −100‎ Kokomo (song) ‎ →Release: Cleaned up this section; was not punctuated properly, also had negative bias "clearly tried to take advantage"
• 15:2115:21, 23 April 2010 diff hist −230‎ Kokomo (song) ‎ →Composition and recording: removed uncited refernce to song being played on oldies stations because it sounds like an oldie...the song is 22 years old, and therefore IS an oldie.

22 April 2010

• 20:2620:26, 22 April 2010 diff hist +301‎ Talk:BlackBerry ‎ →Blackberry is not the actual device name

21 April 2010

• 21:4921:49, 21 April 2010 diff hist +2‎ Job for a Cowboy ‎ →Members
• 19:3819:38, 21 April 2010 diff hist −65‎ Terryville, Connecticut ‎ →Notable residents: removed this second-grader entry: There is even a bridge named after him. The Ted Knight bridge.
• 19:1719:17, 21 April 2010 diff hist −47‎ Breakin' 2: Electric Boogaloo ‎ →Critical Reception: Removed "Cult classic, to breakdance fans in general." Uncited, not an actual review.
• 19:1319:13, 21 April 2010 diff hist −475‎ Breakin' ‎ removed paragraph about it being a retelling of West Side Story...Huge stretch, and unsourced.
• 18:3218:32, 21 April 2010 diff hist −218‎ Cassette tape ‎ →Cassette players and recorders: Cleaned up this section
• 18:2418:24, 21 April 2010 diff hist −1‎ Cassette tape ‎ →Tape leaders: change 'forwards' to 'forward'
• 17:3517:35, 21 April 2010 diff hist −85‎ 8-track cartridge ‎ →Reliability and usability: removed "Shaking the cassette in time to the current album playing was both fun and effective." Makes no sense, is pure opinion, and definitely not encyclopedic

16 April 2010

• 17:4117:41, 16 April 2010 diff hist +406‎ Talk:United States ‎ →Transportation section biased?: new section
• 17:1317:13, 16 April 2010 diff hist +834‎ N Talk:Tiger Woods PGA Tour Online ‎ ←Created page with 'I edited the section about free courses. It's not accurate to say that 'some courses are free'...in fact, it's possible that they all may be free at ine time or an...'
• 17:0517:05, 16 April 2010 diff hist +60‎ Tiger Woods PGA Tour Online ‎No edit summary
• 12:3212:32, 16 April 2010 diff hist +994‎ Benjamin Tillman ‎ →Governor of South Carolina
• 12:3212:32, 16 April 2010 diff hist +1,520‎ Benjamin Tillman ‎ →Biography
• 12:3112:31, 16 April 2010 diff hist −1,487‎ Benjamin Tillman ‎ →Governor of South Carolina
• 12:2812:28, 16 April 2010 diff hist +1,487‎ Benjamin Tillman ‎ →Governor of South Carolina

15 April 2010

• 20:5420:54, 15 April 2010 diff hist −63‎ Baseball Mogul ‎ →Gameplay: removed weasel words ", but is considered by most to be the best simulation available"...also, "but" makes no sense here
• 20:4220:42, 15 April 2010 diff hist 0‎ John Madden ‎ de-capitalized 'professional football'
• 20:3220:32, 15 April 2010 diff hist +422‎ Talk:The Battery (Manhattan) ‎ →Popular culture?: new section

14 April 2010

• 17:1617:16, 14 April 2010 diff hist −327‎ Triple-A (baseball) ‎ →Triple-A cities: removed line about teams being near bigger cities with other pro sports (NFL, NBA, NHL)...irrelevant, if it said 'near city which hosts parent MLB club', would be notable.
• 17:1217:12, 14 April 2010 diff hist −118‎ AAA ‎ removed In the video game industry, '''AAA game''' is an informal description for a video game that has a high budget.{{cn}} still no source, not common knowledge either
• 16:5416:54, 14 April 2010 diff hist +429‎ Talk:Brooklyn Nets ‎ →Who forfeited?: new section
• 16:5016:50, 14 April 2010 diff hist +174‎ Talk:Brooklyn Nets ‎ →Long island
• 16:4216:42, 14 April 2010 diff hist +353‎ Talk:Hank Steinbrenner ‎ →Author?: new section
• 16:1716:17, 14 April 2010 diff hist −272‎ George Steinbrenner ‎ →New Yankee Stadium: removed this section as it has nothing to do with Steinbrenner, just says he 'really wanted' the stadium. cAn be re-added if better info used, with sources. Tag: section blanking
• 16:1516:15, 14 April 2010 diff hist −42‎ George Steinbrenner ‎ →Reinstatement and championships: removed "Yankee Dynasty", shouldn't be a proper name, was biased, and also wording was wrong...dynasty is mentioned later in the paragraph anyway.

13 April 2010

• 22:0222:02, 13 April 2010 diff hist −213‎ True Golf Classics: Wicked 18 ‎ cleaned up article, seemed to be written in a 'humorous ad' tone
• 20:0020:00, 13 April 2010 diff hist −34‎ Hour Magazine ‎No edit summary
• 19:5919:59, 13 April 2010 diff hist +137‎ Talk:Gary Collins (actor) ‎No edit summary
• 19:5819:58, 13 April 2010 diff hist +414‎ Talk:Gary Collins (actor) ‎ →Not at fault but owes money to victims?: new section
• 19:2419:24, 13 April 2010 diff hist −13‎ Danny Cooksey ‎ →Personal life: corrected unbelievable capitalization/grammar, looked like a first grader wrote this section.

7 April 2010

• 20:3020:30, 7 April 2010 diff hist −146‎ Beach Head II: The Dictator Strikes Back ‎ removed "Ironically, the prequel's title screen had written "Beach-" and "head" in two separate lines, making the "correct" spelling impossible to deduce." Not ironic, and not impossible to deduce.
• 15:1715:17, 7 April 2010 diff hist −234‎ Pinocchio ‎ →Appearances in popular culture: removed this section as it contains the same exact sentence as the previous section. Tag: section blanking

1 April 2010

• 20:5620:56, 1 April 2010 diff hist +292‎ Talk:New Britain High School ‎ →NPOV: new section
• 20:5420:54, 1 April 2010 diff hist −4‎ New Britain Public Schools ‎ →Middle schools: Removed links for Roosevelt, as the links go to other Roosevelt Middle Schools, not this one
• 20:5320:53, 1 April 2010 diff hist −4‎ New Britain Public Schools ‎ →Primary schools: removed link to Lincoln School, links to several Lincoln Schools, but not this one