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ClickUp

Hi CNMall41 - know there is a major backlog of submissions to review, but was hoping to see where things were at with the review of the ClickUp page. It was originally declined due to sources, but updated to include more independent and thorough sources. Thanks! GrooveDJ (talk) 19:44, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@GrooveDJ:, every single reference talks about funding which does not meet WP:ORGCRIT. The only one that would be close is The Huffington Post but that is written by a contributor and not a staff writer so there is little (if any) oversight or fact checking involved. I will leave it for another reviewer as I would likely decline it again in its current state. --CNMall41 (talk) 01:00, 9 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@CNMall41:, thank you for the input. Just out of curiosity, do the sources from Diginomica and The American Genius, which don't mention funding, not count? Just helpful to understand where the sources miss the mark so I can ensure the page is properly sourced to Wikipedia's guidelines. Thank you for your help! GrooveDJ (talk) 18:33, 9 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@GrooveDJ:. If you look at WP:ORGCRIT you will see a chart that will assist you. To determine if a source (such as Diginomica or The American Genius), you will need to see WP:RS. Basically, a reliable source will be known as unbiased and employs independent fact checkers. Hope that helps. --CNMall41 (talk) 01:37, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Forever Group

Dear CNMall41

Thank you for taking the time to review our Wikipedia page submission.

I understand more now about the need for external source coverage and notability.

Hopefully we will achieve this and resubmit in future.

Kindest regards,

Dave

Forevergroup (talk) 00:14, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

iMerit

Thanks for reviewing the iMerit page. When I created it, I'm not sure why the title is IMerit instead of the lowercase "i." Can that be changed? Also I would like to make the page less promotional. Any guidance you can provide would be helpful. Thanks again for your time with it.Miaminsurance (talk) 21:40, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shiji Group

Kalimera from Crete CNMall41,

Thanks very much for your review and suggestions on my Draft:Shiji Group submission, I will follow your advice and add more 3rd parts resources. Also, on the controversy section I created, I will fix this too. I basically used Wikipedia pages like Hilton Hotels & Resorts, Wyndham Hotels & Resorts and some others as templates for creating the page for the Chinese conglomerate. Please, if you have any other suggestions, I would greatly appreciate your help. There are other pages I would like to create, especially notable subjects here in Greece not yet within the encyclopedia.

Thank you once again, for all your efforts. Philbutler (talk) 07:09, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Red Turística de Pueblos Patrimonio de Colombia

Hi, CNMall41. Thank you for your warm welcome. After learning about the backlog for reviewing new pages through the drafts process, I developed a duplicate article (with a similar title) and published it directly myself, skipping the drafts process. I based the article on the already-extant Spanish-language Wikipedia page on the topic, and used a template from the English-language Wikipedia page on a closely-related topic. I would like to delete my original Draft (or merge it into the newly-published article), because it is now redundant. Would you be able to either delete the original Draft, or merge it into the newly-published article? Thanks for your help! -Matt

existing Spanish-language article on the topic: https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_de_pueblos_patrimonio_de_Colombia

existing English-language article on a closely-related topic (used as a template for the newly-published English-language article): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pueblos_M%C3%A1gicos_(Mexico)

newly-published English-language article on the topic (skipped the drafts process because of backlog): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pueblo_Patrimonio_(Colombia)

draft English-language article to be deleted or merged into the newly-published English-language article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Red_Tur%C3%ADstica_de_Pueblos_Patrimonio_de_Colombia

MattWeinstein (talk) 15:06, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Notability of Veleco

Hi CNMall41, you had recently reviewed submission of Draft:Veleco, and I was wondering if I could ask you to take another look maybe? I know there is a giant backlog of review submissions, but that draft lacked a notable source, which did show up today, as an independent Polish national newspaper made a coverage about Veleco company. I have added the reference to printed publication, but being fairly new on wiki I'm not 100% sure if this is enough for the required notability. If you could help out by checking it, that would be appreciated. If the independent newspaper source isn't enough, a feedback about it would also be appreaciated. Sorry to take up your time with this. MartinOrl087 (talk) 10:29, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Request on 00:57:58, 18 April 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by MegaSmike46


What does "Concur with original assessment" mean? I'd like to know why my draft of "List of animation studios owned by ViacomCBS" can't be accepted.

MegaSmike46 (talk) 00:57, 18 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@MegaSmike46:, the first decline reason is listed on the draft and I concur with that assessment given by the reviewer. The content you provided is already existing in another Wikipedia page or can be added to it accordingly. --CNMall41 (talk) 19:23, 18 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Question regarding ViacomCBS

I understand, for now. I've contributed to that other list of ViacomCBS assets. However do you think if the company ever delves further into animation studios, that a new separate is necessary. Until, then should it remain as draft until further notice?

That would be a bridge to cross if/when it happens. --CNMall41 (talk) 17:29, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Realtor.com

Hello! I've responded here, if you have a moment to revisit our discussion. Thanks so much! Inkian Jason (talk) 18:16, 19 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Inkian Jason:, stepping out for a few but will take a look in a few hours. Cheers!!--CNMall41 (talk) 17:29, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! Inkian Jason (talk) 17:32, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Inkian Jason:, I did what I could but still uncomfortable with the marketing information (i left notes on the talk page). Sorry to be that editor but I don't see any of it as encyclopedic (including the information that is already there). --CNMall41 (talk) 23:22, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

ByteDance layout - following up

Hi CNMall41. Thanks for commenting recently at Talk:ByteDance#Fixing MOS:LAYOUT and MOS:LEAD issues. Since then, no one else has commented in the thread, so would you mind implementing the improved layout for the article? I've taken care to only change the layout in the new version - the content itself should be the same as it is in the current version. Thanks, JatBD (talk) 02:15, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I am a little confused and hopefully you are able to clarify. The content in the new proposed layout is changed. Above you say that it should remain the same. --CNMall41 (talk) 17:25, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry I wasn't clear enough. What I meant when I said "the content itself should be the same" is that in the new proposed layout here, no new material is added and no existing material is removed - I just re-organized the existing content in a more sensible way, mostly through the use of a standard History section. JatBD (talk) 01:10, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@JatBD:, Okay, I understand. However, the content changes would need to be requested on the talk page to include reasoning for each change. The draft you prepared is substantially different. --CNMall41 (talk) 04:26, 28 April 2021 (UTC)::::I gave the reasoning for all my proposed changes when I wrote on the Talk page what my draft accomplishes: integrating most of the current overly long lead's content into the body of the article; and reorganizing most of the body into sections on History (with multiple chronological subsections), Technology, Leadership, Finances and Funding. I also cited WP:CSECTION to explain why it's inappropriate to have a section dedicated to Controversy (now inaptly renamed "Reception"). This explains every change that I'm proposing. To be more precise, here is a more detailed list of what my draft changes from the current version:[reply]
  • Shorten lead per MOS:LEADLENGTH and move the trimmed content (sentences about Musical.ly, Flipagram, Toutiao, the company's recent valuation and the company's alleged connection to the CCP) into new History and Finances sections.
  • Move the Leadership and Funding subsections from within the "Corporate affairs" section into their own primary sections later in the article.
  • Move the content of the Products, Acquisitions and Reception sections into the History section, with the paragraphs organized chronologically under subsections titled "2012-2014," "2015-2017," "2018-2019" and "2020-present."
I hope this makes sense. If it helps, I can re-post this at the Talk page and ping you. Thanks, JatBD (talk) 12:46, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 23:32:35, 21 April 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Hemilmodi.noai


Hi, I am a new contributor to Wikipedia and I am just starting up with creating my first article to identify and highlight a crucial government inventor (Parimal Kopardekar) whose game changing contribution to the air traffic control/management sector is redefining how new and emerging air vehicles will integrated in the airspace. I understand that the content I used from the official NASA page is also used by another entity which might have copy righted it (not sure how government info is copy righted by others). Anyway, I kindly request to undelete/unlock the draft so that it can be edited and updated. Also a link to content guidelines would be great. Thank you very much for all your assistance.

Hemilmodi.noai (talk) 23:32, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hemilmodi.noai, you will need to reach out to the deleting admin (@Justlettersandnumbers:). I will add that based on the tone above ("game changing" "redefining"), you will need to review Wikipedia guidelines on tone and promotion prior to doing any further submissions. --CNMall41 (talk) 17:00, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, CNMall41, Hemilmodi.noai! Draft:Parimal Kopardekar was declined by CNMall41 as a copyright violation (from this page), an action which also tagged it for deletion as WP:G12, unambiguous copyright violation; when I came to delete it, I added the deletion criterion WP:G11, unambiguous promotion, because of the unacceptably promotional tone in which it was written. Hemilmodi.noai, if you want to start a new draft about this person, your first step is to disclose your conflict of interest; your user-page, User:Hemilmodi.noai, is the place for that. You can then start a new draft, citing independent reliable sources (i.e., not his employer or self-written bio), and presenting the verifiable facts of his life and achievements in a neutral and encyclopaedic tone and manner. Please note that Wikipedia doesn't tolerate promotion of any kind. Thanks, Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 17:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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