Talk:Flame-faced tanager/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:56, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Link arthropods.

Done.

• Link fledgling.

Done.

• "by the IUCN. However" explain IUCN before using the initialism.

Done.

• "genus Tangara. Within" that's a dab page.

Fixed.

• "and golden tanager. This" overlinked.

Should have been golden-eared, fixed.

• "tanager.[7] All three subspecies are recognized" -> "tanager,[7] all of which are recognized"

Done.

• "Zimmer, 1943:" why not in parentheses like the others.

The parentheses are actually a way to show that a species or subspecies was described by the author in a different name than the one currently assigned i.e. the genus was different when the author described it.

• "weighing 28 g (0.99 oz)." average?

That it is an average is mentioned earlier in the sentence: I've reworded it so that it is maybe slightly clearer.

• "have 7 other species' seven.

Done.

• A couple of [clarification needed] tags in there.

Gleaning was already linked, and I've added an explanation. The second tag is after a subspecies name which has already been mentioned, so maybe you could remove it if you think it's clear enough.

• Date formats in the references should be consistent, either DD MM YYYY or YYYY-MM-DD, but not a mixture.

Fixed, all refs are now YYYY-MM-DD

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:42, 4 October 2021 (UTC)