Talk:Jang Jin-young/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 13:55, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

I will begin the review soon. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 13:55, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Okay, it looks pretty good. Here is what I've noticed (it's not much):

• The lead section starts with her death. It should be a summary of Jang and her life in chronological order.

  I've put it in chronological order. I further expanded the lead with information of her works. Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

• It also shouldn't have a citation, assuming that this information is found and cited elsewhere in the article.

  It's only cited in the lead, so I kept it there. Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

• The lack of an "Early life" section should be addressed.

  I added one Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

• "Secret marriage" should be made a subsection of "Later life and death."

  Done! Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Good work! --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 14:11, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Okay, looks good. I will pass it. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 18:43, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review it! Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 18:51, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

You're welcome! --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 21:53, 14 May 2022 (UTC)