Talk:Jang Jin-young/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 13:55, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I will begin the review soon. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 13:55, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, it looks pretty good. Here is what I've noticed (it's not much):

The lead section starts with her death. It should be a summary of Jang and her life in chronological order.
I've put it in chronological order. I further expanded the lead with information of her works. Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
It also shouldn't have a citation, assuming that this information is found and cited elsewhere in the article.
It's only cited in the lead, so I kept it there. Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The lack of an "Early life" section should be addressed.
I added one Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Secret marriage" should be made a subsection of "Later life and death."
Done! Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 16:24, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, looks good. I will pass it. --An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 18:43, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking the time to review it! Btspurplegalaxy 🗩 🖉 18:51, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]