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Question about draft: Needy Foundation

draft:Needy Foundation Another Wikipedian told me that the sentences in my draft read like advertisements. But I don't understand why he seems so Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 07:23, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: Feel free to ask the user who declined your draft to provide further explanation. I hope you saw my comments at Wikipedia:Teahouse#Can anyone tell me, where is problem in my draft?. GoingBatty (talk) 14:53, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, and thanks for reply Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 14:57, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Mentor, can you see my draft and convert it into an article Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 15:01, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Mentor, can you see my draft and convert it into an article? Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 15:01, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: I declined your draft again and reworded my Teahouse comments for you. GoingBatty (talk) 15:32, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
As per your direction, i removed all photos under reference and add some news references, now see the draft plz. After your response i will resubmit the draft:Needy Foundation again. waiting for your valuable response. Sorry for troubling Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 16:44, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: Before you resubmit, please change every sentence fragment (e.g. "Distribution of winter clothes to disadvantaged families, orphans, helpless and widows during winter season.") to a complete sentence, and ensure every sentence has an appropriate reference. GoingBatty (talk) 16:53, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Content added as per your valuable suggestion. Please see the matter. After your response i will resubmit the draft: Needy Foundation Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 19:00, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: I'd added some requests for clarification and a citation. Have you declared your conflict of interest? GoingBatty (talk) 19:31, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
All clarification and citation clarified by me. I have no conflict of interest.I'm beginner editor, and i want trying to write this kinds of article. Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 03:39, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: How did you get all those photographs that you originally used as references in your draft? GoingBatty (talk) 03:49, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I got all those photographs from wikipedia commons Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 04:15, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Now see the draft:Needy Foundation Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 07:21, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: I've made some final tweaks to the draft for you. GoingBatty (talk) 14:49, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for valuable finalization the draft. Sir, just now I resubmitted the draft. Sorry for troubling. Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 15:06, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I submitted the draft 2 days ago, but I still haven't received any feedback on the draft. Can you review the draft? Thanks Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 07:31, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: The big yellow template at the top of the page states "This may take up to a week, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 175 pending submissions waiting for review." I choose not to review articles whose references are in languages I cannot read. While you are waiting for a review, you could continue improving the draft, including expanding each Bengali reference to include a |trans-title= parameter with an English language translation of the title. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 15:46, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir, as per your instruction I have added English translation in all the reference. Good morning, happy editing! Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 16:53, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir, I have already expressed my opinion to the user, who has tagged conflict of interest (COI) in my draft. Can you remove the tag now? Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 05:55, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: The {{COI}} template states "Please discuss further on the talk page." Please do so, and then remove the template if you have no conflict of interest. GoingBatty (talk) 06:08, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir,i already tell him, i have no personal conflict of interest on the draft. Now can i remove the tag on draft? Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 06:16, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: Please address the issue on the talk page, and then remove the template if you have no conflict of interest. GoingBatty (talk) 06:25, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk%3AMd_Shahedul_Alam_Khan#c-Jeraxmoira-20231129074100-Managing_a_conflict_of_interest#Managing_a_conflict_of_interest Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 06:28, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
i already address the issue on the talk page Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 06:31, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: The {{COI}} template states "Please discuss further on the talk page", and the link goes to the DRAFT's talk page: Draft talk:Needy Foundation. Sorry I wasn't clear. GoingBatty (talk) 06:42, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir, please don't say sorry 😔, it's my fault for not understanding what you mean Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 06:53, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft_talk%3ANeedy_Foundation#Managing_a_conflict_of_interest Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 06:53, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir, check the Drafts talk page: Draft:Needy Foundation. And Tell me if the tag can be removed now? Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 17:48, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: Thank you for posting on the draft talk page. I've already said twice you could remove the template if you have no conflict of interest. GoingBatty (talk) 18:04, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks a lot sir Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 18:08, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The draft:Needy Foundation declined again. Now, how to i improve it for resubmission? suggest me, please. Sorry for troubling you again and again. Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 09:57, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: I see the decline message on the draft and your user talk page. You may ask the editor who declined it for further details - either on your user talk page or their user talk page or the draft talk page. GoingBatty (talk) 22:50, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir, if you have any chance then see the following discussion a bit. Sorry for troubling.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk%3AMd_Shahedul_Alam_Khan#c-Jeraxmoira-20231207113900-Md_Shahedul_Alam_Khan-20231207111400#Your_submission_at_Articles_for_creation%3A_Needy_Foundation_%28December_6%29 Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 17:43, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: I'm glad you have multiple editors who are providing detailed feedback for you about the sources you are using. GoingBatty (talk) 23:43, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Sir if you have any chance then you can review the draft for further stage. Sorry for troubling. Thanks Md Shahedul Alam Khan (talk) 05:44, 10 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Md Shahedul Alam Khan: I see you have changed some of the references. As I said above, I choose not to review articles whose references are in languages I cannot read. Good luck! GoingBatty (talk) 06:14, 10 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again!

GoingBatty the Savor
Helpful as always. (Teahouse help) UnexpectedSmoreInquisition aka USI (talk) 15:25, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@UnexpectedSmoreInquisition: Thanks! Did you see that Holy Grail is being rereleased in theaters? I'm trying to convince my teenagers to see it with me, but they're now too cool to hang out with their dad. GoingBatty (talk) 15:35, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I did! I'm assuming you noticed my name is a Monty Python pun, so I'm quite excited. Unfortunately, life's busy rn so I likely won't see it there. Have a great day, UnexpectedSmoreInquisition aka USI (talk) 15:54, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@UnexpectedSmoreInquisition: Yes, and the image you used is the Black Knight's helmet. "Tis but a scratch!" GoingBatty (talk) 16:02, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, that too. Hoped you would get the reference. UnexpectedSmoreInquisition aka USI (talk) 16:15, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft: Wikipedia: a surprisingly reliable site

You denied my article submission because another article already exists. I acknowledge the existence of my sister article: Reliability of Wikipedia. Even though I acknowledge her, I disagree with your decision, since my draft adds new information to the fight for credibility of Wikipedia. It contributes to Reliability of Wikipedia and backs it up with more information, and then Wikipedia users can find more information on the topic than simply one article. While Reliability of Wikipedia has a lot of information, my article can add a bit more, and it acknowledges the false misconception in schools, unlike Reliability of Wikipedia. AriLovesTacos (talk) 01:39, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@AriLovesTacos: I did not deny Draft:Wikipedia: a surprisingly reliable site. I ran some bots to clean up your references and added a comment. Your draft (and your user talk page) lists the editor who declined (not denied) your draft. GoingBatty (talk) 02:56, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Question from Medicmarnie (04:21, 30 November 2023)

How do I create a page to document my public work as a elected public figure? --Medicmarnie (talk) 04:21, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Medicmarnie: Hi there! WP:AUTO explains that Wikipedia strongly discourages autobiographies. Creating a new Wikipedia article can be quite challenging, especially when you have a conflict of interest (COI). To learn how to edit, I suggest you start at Help:Introduction. I suggest spending a significant amount of time editing existing articles to hone your skills. When you're ready to create an article, you would gather multiple published independent reliable sources that have provided significant coverage of you, and determine whether they demonstrate that you meet Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, called "notability". If so, you could create an account and declare your COI on your user page. Then follow the instructions at Help:Your first article and summarize what the sources have published, and be prepared for a process that may include months of waiting for review, declines, and rewrites, before an article is created. If you are successful, then you could never edit the article directly due to your COI, but could submit edit requests on the article talk page. Hope this helps. GoingBatty (talk) 04:25, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Question from Raksiyyyy (09:29, 3 December 2023)

Hello, I posted a new article that was frequently being sent to Draft by someone else, now I want to find that article where do I find it? --Raksiyyyy (talk) 09:29, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Raksiyyyy: Hi there! Looking at User talk:Raksiyyyy, I see a section called "Kannammal Institution moved to draftspace". If you click on the either of the Kannammal Institution links, you'll be takedn to Draft:Kannammal Institution. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 15:54, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Notory Art

I made the page corrections as indicated on the Notory Art. Draft:Notory Art - Wikipedia . I noticed that the editing page is different in its format than what I was originally working with. Please double check that this is satisfactory. If not, please direct me. I'm new. Haplo1990 (talk) 15:05, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Haplo1990: Hi there! I've made some more tweaks to the format. In the last bullet in the Editions section, I don't understand what "_____." should represent. GoingBatty (talk) 02:23, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed it. Just needed to ENTER to move it to the next line. The blank space represents the author's name. Rather than repeating his name for another source that he wrote, a blank space is common practice in bibliography writing. Haplo1990 (talk) 15:33, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Haplo1990: I was wondering if that was the case, but it wasn't clear to me. Thanks for fixing it, and congratulations on having your draft become an article! GoingBatty (talk) 15:37, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

new draft article

Hi - You have replied to a few of my questions over the last few weeks about my submittal of a draft article for review - "Robert E. (Bob) Bourke" I was informed yesterday by some Teahouse folks that I did NOT submit the article on 11/28! However, on 11/28 I did click the blue "submit" button. These folks suggested I click the "Submit" button now, but I cannot locate it anywhere! Is it hidden someplace else? How can I confirm whether I have submitted the piece, or not? A profound thank you for your help with this quandary. Legendt9455 (talk) 22:42, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Legendt9455: Hi there! Viewing the history Draft:Robert E. Bourke Jr., I see where you created the draft, but not where you submitted it for review. In this edit when I added a comment to your draft, it incorrectly removed the submission template, which is why you couldn't find the submit button. I apologize for that issue. I've restored the template for you and requested a bug fix to the Articles for creation team. I suggest you do not submit the draft for review until you fix the footnotes. Also, there are a few paragraphs in the "The Years After Studebaker" section that have no footnotes at all, which should be fixed before submission. Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 23:25, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your prompt helpful reply, and I found the submit button! Is it correct that by fixing the footnotes the main issues are moving the citations to the right place in the paragraphs and citing the actual relevant page numbers? The lack of Footnotes in "The Years After Studebaker" are due to the fact that this is personal knowledge based on the fact that Robert Bourke Jr. was my father and I retained many of his personal and business records and have communicated over the years with past business acquaintances (which I could and will footnote.) Legendt9455 (talk) 16:45, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Legendt9455: Proper footnotes is one issue. I am not going to attempt to verify which references are independent reliable published sources. All text should be based on reliable published sources so it is verifiable by others, so please remove everything that is based on personal knowledge and communications. GoingBatty (talk) 18:47, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your prompt reply! One last question: I can pull up my "draft" piece from clicking through your blue "Draft: Robert E. Bourke Jr." above, log in and edit it there. At the point I assume I can click "publish changes", followed by clicking "submit the draft for review."
Is this the best procedure to move forward?   Legendt9455 (talk) 16:56, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Legendt9455: Yes it is - happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 23:44, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for your help! Legendt9455 (talk) 18:22, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Page Review!

Dear @GoingBatty Hello, Requesting you to Please Review this Page Draft:Dwaraka Creations 

and suggest me changes for the page creation.

Thankyou! Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 17:11, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Mr.shaikmeer: Hi there! I made some edits to your draft to fix the formatting, capitalization, and grammar. Although this is a draft about Dwaraka Creations, there is very little information about the company itself in the draft. What have the independent reliable published sources written about the company itself, besides information about the films they have produced? Happy editing! GoingBatty (talk) 18:10, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Dear @GoingBatty can’t thanks enough. thanks for editing.
From the google itself the Independent articles about Dwaraka Creations were not Published !
what Should i do now for the Page to be Accepted by the Reviewer?
Requesting You to Please Suggest me the needful.
Thankyou! Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 18:21, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Mr.shaikmeer: In order to show that Dwaraka Creations meets Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, called "notability", you'll need to find multiple independent published reliable sources that provide significant coverage of the company. You can use sources that are not online, such as newspapers, magazines, and books. GoingBatty (talk) 18:28, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the Information, Can you please guide me how to upload or keep the offline sources in the draft ? Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 18:33, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Mr.shaikmeer: You don't have to upload copies of offline sources to Wikipedia. You can use {{cite news}}, {{cite magazine}}, or {{cite book}} to provide other people enough information to find the materials themselves. GoingBatty (talk) 18:44, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thankyou so much !!
I do have an other Draft article.If you don’t mind can you please look take a look on that ? Draft:VJ Sunny Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 18:51, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Mr.shaikmeer:  Done! In the tables in both drafts, I don't understand why you have some citations in the Film column and others in the Notes column. GoingBatty (talk) 19:21, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
In the film column the citations represent the movie and in the Notes column the citation represents the review of the movie! Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 19:25, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Dear @GoingBatty Hello, Done with the changes mentioned by you for the draft Draft:VJ Sunny.
Now, the Page has enough Independent Sources. Requesting you to please Accept the Submission.
Thankyou! Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 15:21, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Mr.shaikmeer: I removed the maintenance template I added and made some other minor fixes. Footnotes #3 and #6 are not in the right place. Help:Referencing for beginners states that inline citations "are generally added either directly following the fact that they support, or at the end of the sentence that they support, following any punctuation." GoingBatty (talk) 18:34, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@GoingBatty Thankyou so much, I Made that changes Mentioned by you. You can accept the submission this time as well. Mr.shaikmeer (talk) 05:20, 14 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Question from Dj Baby Black4life (21:15, 13 December 2023)

How can I write about myself here --Dj Baby Black4life (talk) 21:15, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Dj Baby Black4life: Hi there! WP:AUTO explains that Wikipedia strongly discourages autobiographies. Creating a new Wikipedia article can be quite challenging, especially when you have a conflict of interest (COI). To learn how to edit, I suggest you start at Help:Introduction. I suggest spending a significant amount of time editing existing articles to hone your skills. When you're ready to create an article, you would gather multiple published independent reliable sources that have provided significant coverage of you, and determine whether they demonstrate that you meet Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, called "notability". If so, you must declare your COI on your user page. Then follow the instructions at Help:Your first article and summarize what the sources have published, and be prepared for a process that may include months of waiting for review, declines, and rewrites, before an article is accepted. If you are successful, then you could never edit the article directly due to your COI, but could submit edit requests on the article talk page. Hope this helps. GoingBatty (talk) 22:35, 13 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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