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This article needs to be rewritten

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Currently, this article is mess of mostly advertising and relies entirely on primary sources. As for trying to find non-primary sources for New Dream and The Center for a New American Dream, all I could find was two revenue overviews[1][2] with very little information other than how much money they made.

In order to improve this article to comply with WP:NOTADVERT, and as this article is mostly advertising and barely notable, I suggest it to be significantly reduced by removing the puffery and leaving only objective, verifiable facts, such as this version of New Dream.

  1. ^ "Center for a New American Dream". influencewatch.org. Retrieved 10 May 2024.
  2. ^ "Center For A New American Dream". projects.propublica.org. Retrieved 10 May 2024.

Sketchsynth (talk) 18:34, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]