Wikipedia:Peer review/List of X-Men members/archive2
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Even though this article is very good and stable, I've listed this article for peer review because of some issues that might need improvement or third party opinion:
- The article has cited too much primary sources. Most of the sources who are from Marvel's official website. Many characters listed here cite only these sources. As per WP:PSTS, primary sources need to be supported by reliable secondary sources.
- The word X-Men is repeated too many times even though it is clear from the article's title that this is list of X-Men members.
- For example in New Mutants graduates, the word X-Men is used 4 times (section heading, sub-heading, information in sub-section and table heading).
- This article is based on chronological order which is one of the format listed in Manual of Style/Comics. The order is decided by releasing date of comic issue in which the character joined X-Men. The order of some characters who had joined in the same issue can be in alphabetical order.
- An example: In 1990s section, Cecilia Reyes, Marrow and Maggott joined in the same issue (X-Men, vol. 2 #70) so here we may apply alphabetical order. The result will be Cecilia, Maggott and Marrow.
Thanks, Squirrell2 (talk) 10:16, 17 May 2024 (UTC)