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- Philippe 12:12, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
Hi! Thanks for creating this new article. I'm not sure if the German Wikipedia has a different style, but in my view this article needs a decent amount of work to be ready for mainspace. All of the "History" and "Innovations" sections, which is the bulk of the article's content, are unsourced. The "Company founder" bit is just a long quote, which is strongly discouraged, especially given that it's written in an unencyclopedic style. With the "From Richter's life..." bit, it's best not to include the bulk quote, instead simply include a sentence mentioning that a letter was sent and maybe its content (how does the source treat the excerpt?). We don't need to catalog everything :P. I would make these changes, but I don't have access to the source materials and thus can't add sources or do justice in rephrasing it. Best regards, Vermont (🐿️—🏳️🌈) 04:30, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Vermont! Thanks for your comments. I will add an online source for the "History" and "Innovations" sections in the next few hours. And I will also send you a link today to documents (scans of German-language texts) which you can use - as offered - to make the corrections. Many thanks and best regards! LogoX (talk) 10:01, 20 May 2024 (UTC)