Talk:16 Blocks

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There is no NYPD SWAT team in NYC change SWAT to ESU Sullynyflhi 04:56, 9 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

"Plot" section ridiculously long

Would someone like to trim down the "plot" section? It's crazy-long.

It's not so much that it's long, it's just poorly written. Who wrote this??? It goes from present tense to past tense, back to present tense. It's also written with slang, "and then the guy does this...and then the other guy does that..."

Awful.

Casting Reference Added

I added the reference for the casting note about Willis originally wanting Ludicrous. I believe that takes care of all the outstanding references for the article. Zja2 (talk) 17:53, 15 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]