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"Manchurian Strategic Offensive Operation" come from the Soviet General Staff. it is the operation name. If you wish, unlike other Wikipedians, you can contact Mr. Glantz himself and ask the questions. --124.183.146.14 (talk) 01:09, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
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- An article about a war, any war, includes sections
- 1 Background
- 2 Chronology (preceding diplomatic relationships)
- 3 Pre-war events (economic aspects of going to war and sustaining it)
- 4 Course of the war (deployment of forces)
- 5 Aftermath
- 6 Impact of the war
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Hmmmm. Well, I may not be any wiser, but I am certainly much better informed! Thanks for that. Interesting. Very interesting. Pdfpdf (talk) 07:09, 13 September 2009 (UTC) |
Back to the subject of the article
Whom do you refer to when you say that they offer a different picture to that of Glantz?
- (I just want to clarify my use of "different" here. In these circumstances when I say "different", I mean "overlapping but also containing other information" rather that "completely different" or opposite or conflicting.)
- At one level, you could say all authors offer a different picture. My comment was attempting to point out that, to me, Glantz's summaries often seem to "miss" things that add colour and depth to the picture. I'm not trying to infer that the information Glantz presents is inaccurate or "wrong", just that often there are bits of the picture missing, and when I see those bits elsewhere, it gives me greater depth of understanding.
- I guess I'm saying that I don't like to restrict my information to just one source.
- However, being specific, and refering to Soviet-Japanese War (1945)#Further reading and also the references, "different pictures" I enjoyed looking at were Butow, the Bart Whaley section in Despres, Slavinskii, Drea and Hayashi (Vol.13 of the special studies).
All the references I would offer to the full name are from Russian language sources.
Glantz, as a Russian Academy of Sciences fellow, now has unprecedented access to Russian and Soviet archives, and I think is the only one among specialists in the field to actually speak the language.
- The Anglo-Australian who translated Slavinskii probably deserves an "honourable mention". (Geoffrey Jukes). I find Slavinskii's work very interesting. It's a shame he died "young" (In his 50s I think.)
Of course the Japanese side has to be reflected also, but I never had a chance to get there. I was going to work with other editors in Wikipedia working in the Japanese area, but that was never pursued. This would have been possible if the companion paper [1] was read by anyone other than me Mrg3105--58.165.187.31 (talk) 05:24, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- Well, I've read it, but as you've probably already determined, my interests tend to be in the strategic level - I'm not so interested in the tactical. Cheers, Pdfpdf (talk) 07:09, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- So how can I help improve the article? Mrg3105 --124.176.95.71 (talk) 22:32, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- I have a number of ideas, and I imagine EconomistBR might have some too. As a first step, perhaps you can comment on the ideas?
- Background: It would seem to me that there are now a number of articles and/or possible articles. E.g.
- Soviet-Japanese Border Wars
- Soviet–Japanese Neutrality Pact
- Japanese attempts to end WWII while Soviet–Japanese Neutrality Pact still active
- Soviet-Japanese War (1945)
- Soviet invasion of Manchuria (1945)
- [[Khingan-Mukden Offensive Operation (August 9, 1945 - September 2, 1945)
- [[Harbin-Kirin Offensive Operation (August 9, 1945 - September 2, 1945)
- [[Sungari Offensive Operation (August 9, 1945 - September 2, 1945)
- The Japanese surrender:
- a) Internal Japanese wrangling;
- b) Japanese attempts to avoid unconditional surrender;
- c) American "manouvres":
- i) whether to drop 0, 1, 2 or 3 bombs;
- ii) justifying dropping bombs;
- iii) whether to insist on unconditional surrender;
- iv) "dealing" with the Soviets; the Chinese; the British; others;
- d) Soviet "manouvres";
- e) etc.
- South Sakhalin Army Group Offensive Operation (August 11, 1945 - August 25, 1945)
- Seisin Landing Operation (August 13, 1945 - August 16, 1945)
- Kuril Landing Operation (August 18, 1945 - September 1, 1945)
- Operation Downfall and similar
- End of World War II in the Pacific
- "Aftermath" articles: e.g. Evacuation of Manchukuo, Japanese POWs in the Soviet Union, etc.
- Ideas
- 1) I think that, either, there needs to be a certain amount of rationalisation, or, some sort of structure/framework is required. (Or both!) What do you think?
- 2) What's missing from the above list?
- 3) I quickly roughed out a proposed structure for the Soviet-Japanese War (1945) article - see Talk:Soviet-Japanese War (1945)#Article about the war. Perhaps you can comment on that structure?
- It was done in haste. It doesn't quite match:
- 1 Background
- 2 Chronology (preceding diplomatic relationships)
- 3 Pre-war events (economic aspects of going to war and sustaining it)
- 4 Course of the war (deployment of forces)
- 5 Aftermath
- 6 Impact of the war
- I think it should. Your suggestions would be appreciated.
- Also: "All the references I would offer to the full name are from Russian language sources." - Well, some of those would be better than the no-references-at-all that we currently have ...
- Unrelated: Some time in the next month I need to do the family's income tax returns. Hence, if I go quiet for a period, it's because I'm doing "unpaid work for the Australian Tax Office". i.e. Nothing personal!
Cheers, Pdfpdf (talk) 11:46, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
Manchurian Strategic Offensive Operation
- I live in Brazil so this is the best definition of Strategic Offensive Operation I found:
- Book: Colossus reborn: the Red Army at war : 1941-1943
- Author: David M. Glantz page 82
- ""a system of offensive operations unified by a single Stavka concept and conducted to achieve the military-political aims of a campaign"."
- So the Manchurian Strategic Offensive Operation is a system of offensive operations designed to achieve military-political goals. Such article should define this system and define its goals.
- IMO the conduction of the operation falls outside of the scope of such article. So the article Soviet invasion of Manchuria or Battle of Manchuria should inform that the Soviet plans and objectives are detailed in the Manchurian Strategic Offensive Operation article. EconomistBR 16:52, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
- I'm a bit confused here. Yes, I agree that "Such article should define this system and define its goals.", but I'm not sure why you're saying the actual execution of the
operationplan falls outside the scope. The word "Operation" is in the title - if the plan is not executed, then it's just a plan, not an operation. Also, as you say, it's a system of operations, not just a system of plans. So, I guess that means I disagree? Pdfpdf (talk) 15:49, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
- I'm a bit confused here. Yes, I agree that "Such article should define this system and define its goals.", but I'm not sure why you're saying the actual execution of the
IMO the actual execution is the scope of the Battle that the Strategic Offensive Operation generated. Also given that a SOO is complex one would need a plan in order to conduct it.
What's the subject of an article entitled Manchurian Strategic Offensive Operation?
IMO MSOO is a system of offensive operations in the planning phase. So an article describing Manchurian Strategic Offensive Operation would have to also detail Soviet plans for the Hokkaido Landing Operation, even though that didn't happen: Which units would land where? Estimated strength of the defenders, objectives and so on. EconomistBR 23:51, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- You have raised several points here.
- Before I address them, I'd like to clarify what I mean when I use "plan", "execution" and "Operation". Maybe I've had too much exposure to Australian doctrine and this is biasing my POV? I'm not quite sure what it is we are disgreeing on - choices include: conflicting definitions of words; semantics of the English language; "implicit" assumptions which are "obvious" to one of us but obscure non-sequiturs to the other; some-thing else ...
- In Australian doctrine, the planning phase and the execution phase are two sub-phases of "the operation".
- Hence, when you ask me "What's the subject of an article entitled ... ", my answer is "the operation" - the other words in the title are adjectives - and to me, that means "the whole shooting match", including both planning and execution.
- "IMO the actual execution is the scope of the Battle that the Strategic Offensive Operation generated." - Well yes, but to me, the battle is part of the operation, not separate from the operation.
- And yes, I agree that all the other things you mention are part of the planning phase (which to me, is part of the operation.)
- I'm not sure it that gets us any closer to a solution or not! Pdfpdf (talk) 12:06, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
- Yes, I am not sure that this conjecturing is helping us either.
- The article Strategic operations of the Red Army in World War II doesn't help us, it has mostly empty links or redirects and it has only 1 source citation. Also there isn't a proper definition of SOO, let alone an article about it. I believe that these two facts will make it harder for us to reach a definitive conclusion about this issue. Unless sources are found I am afraid that this will remain an open case. EconomistBR 20:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
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