User talk:Emrynes

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Hello, Emrynes, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{help me}} before the question. Again, welcome! --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:42, 27 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Medical amnesty policy

Hello Emrynes. I have been looking over the work at the above page. A few comments:

Wikipedia has a couple of formatting guidelines including WP:MOS. It may be helpful to read this. For example with respect to the headings the first word is caps and there are usually not caps after that.
Another useful guidelines is WP:MEDRS on referencing
Useful places to find further sources include google books, google scholar, and pubmed. Let me know if you have any specific questions.
Have added further comments to the talk page for the MA page.--Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:49, 27 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Article tips

Just took another look at your article and thought of some ways to improve it. One big way of getting help with the article is to seek community feedback and input (especially in regards to the globalization notice posted on the article) You can do this in many ways, but two examples are: 1.) finding users who contribute to your article or other similar articles and seeking their feedback. I wrote on the user page of YiJeon, an emt at Wash U in St. Louis, who has contributed to your article in the past, asking for his assistance. 2.) linking other popular and related pages to your article in an attempt to get more traffic and receive more input as a result. For example, Amnesty International page view statistics this amnesty international article is both relevant and related to your topic. Most importantly, as the link I posted here details, it receives 1.5 thousand views per month. Keep up the good work AMDomG (talk) 05:07, 1 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Medical Amnesty Suggestions

In the “Development” section, include a list of some schools that have passed or are working on this policy. Make the Amethyst Initiative link into a reference link so you would take out the second “amethyst initiative.” Dominic mentioned fixing the section, “level of protection,” where beginning with “protects” makes it awkward, so try rewording that section. In the section, “Levels of Implementation,” instead of putting in numbers like “RCW 69.50.4013,” cite it in references. In the section “Effectiveness,” take out the last line and just cite it as a reference. Bonkong (talk) 18:55, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Onondaga Health Article

We suggested in class on making this a subpage of Onondaga County. Here is more information on subpages:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Subpages

To create a subpage, you have to add a slash in the URL of the main page (Onondaga County), with the title of your subpage. It will then prompt you to either create a new article or link an existing which you have. Other than that, try to make it noticeable so there will be greater feedback from the community. Bonkong (talk) 19:13, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Suggestions con't

Not much to say this week, except follow what Doc James said above. Reach out to him to see if the tags can be removed. Bonkong (talk) 03:51, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]