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Definition

I'm suggesting we change the definition phrasing to something stronger. Saying when something occurs is not a definition, it's more of an application. Maybe "Networked Feminism is the concentrated use of social media to increase gender equality on behalf of women" SCTT (talk) 21:15, 13 March 2013 (UTC) I'm suggesting that the definitionexclude the part about "gender equality". The end of goal of networked feminism is indeed gender equality but networked feminism is more specifically focused on increasing the power and influence of the female gender and the definiton should reflect that. SCTT (talk) I'm suggesting we don't link to other articles within the first mention of the term "networked feminism"[reply]

Phrasing Variety

All four sentences in the open paragraph begin the exact same way with "Networkeed Feminism." I'm suggesting a change to the phrasing in order to make it more readable. SCTT (talk) 21:15, 13 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

International Occurrences

Addressing only the USA within the opening paragraph implies that Networked Feminism only occurs within that country.