User talk:Milo1020

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Hiya, Milo1020!

Howdy, Milo1020. I'm Theo, your Online Ambassador for the New Media Technology and Communication online Wikipedia course, and I'll be here to help if you run into any problems. I've left a welcome message here that has some useful info, including my email address. Give it a look, and let me know if you need anything! —Theopolisme (talk) 12:19, 5 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your work

Good development of original stub content.

Consider making the following changes:

Add source citation: "dates back to 1909 when Ray Newby of California made his debut for Herrold College of Engineering and Wireless"
Consider developing Types of Radio Jockeys into sub-sections,e ach with its own heading...
...Then move Notble Radio Jockeys to the relevant sub-section
Format for readability: "For 1-4 years it's $15,200-39,400, 5-9 $20,600-41,700, 10-19 $23,200-51,200, and 20 or more years $26,300-73,000"
Include source citation: "only large corporate houses participate in the medium"
Last 3 References are not formatted per Wikipedia guidelines. Please fix.

Mgantony (talk) 17:15, 4 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings and Suggestion

Greetings from Conner Baldwin (Campus Ambassador (In Training). To get used to sub-sections, Make an outline in Word using the Outline View. You'll gain a concept of main ideas versus secondary concepts belonging to a specific section.

Yjx2ic35 (talk)Yjx2ic35 —Preceding undated comment added 16:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Good development since the last assessment. Here is some feedback on your progress:

Consider capitalizing all section headings. E.g., "Talk radio jockeys," "Sports radio jockeys" etc.
Jockeys is consistently misspelled - "jockeys" is plural, "jockey's" is possessive
Fix spelling: "a person must got through"
Consider hyperlinking these terms to their respective Wikipedia entries: radio broadcasting, audio engineering,
The last 5 references do not follow Wikipedia guidelines. Please fix this.

Mgantony (talk) 14:46, 17 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]