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I am truly sorry but I was trying to help actually. Yesterday when I opened Summerslam 2014 on Wikipedia, some of the match cards were vandalised e.g instead of John Cena vs Brock Lesnar it was Cena vs Batista and even a completely absurd match up featuring CM Punk taking on Daniel Bryan. I corrected all this but after I corrected Rusev vs Jack Swagger, I couldn't put "Flag match" in a the stipulation side so I mistakenly erased it all, hoping that someone would correct it. Thank you anyways for notifying me. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Farrukhsalar16 (talkcontribs) 07:42, 16 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Crown Group (Crown Group Holdings Pty Ltd) (August 15)

Hi Anupmehra, I was hoping you might be able to assist me to ensure my Wikipedia article is accepted. You declined my submission at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Crown_Group_(Crown_Group_Holdings_Pty_Ltd) Are you able to assist me to ensure it is accepted and demonstrates a more neutral tone. Thanks, Dominique August 18 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dominique Kuhne (talkcontribs) 22:59, 17 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hi Dominique - Yes, I certainly will. The subject appears to be notable for inclusion on Wikipedia. There at present I find only two problem with the draft, one is -promotional tone and the other, original research. Wikipedia neutral point of view guideline explains in detail how should a Wikipedia article ideally be written about. In short, it says..articles should be written without biases presenting significant views published in multiple reliable sources. As a fix, I'd suggest you to start from scratch and re-write only what has been published in reliable sources not what do you personally think of subject. I may edit the draft to write a section or two to illustrate what do really Wikipedia expects for. In the meanwhile, you may continue improving the draft. Anupmehra -Let's talk! 04:13, 18 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Anupmehra,
Thank you for the quick response. If you could edit some of the draft as an example that would be fantastic.
In the meantime, I will continue to work on it.
In terms of the original research, I have have presented mainstream newspapers - considered a reliable source by Wikipedia.
There are no peer reviewed, or other academic sources otherwise to note on this topic.
If I referenced more of the information would I be more likely to have this piece accepted?
Thank you very much for your assistance - I am a first-time contributor. Thanks, Dominique
  • @Dominique Kuhne: - I need some time to read sources, so I could write a paragraph or two, because -information present in Wikipedia articles must be based on information present in secondary, independent and reliable sources. Let me make it clear what Wikipedia meant by original research, -"if one reliable source says A, and another reliable source says B, do not join A and B together to imply a conclusion C that is not mentioned by either of the sources". Also, please note that, -despite the need to attribute content to reliable sources, you must not copy-paste because doing would be a copyright violation and may constitue plagiarism. Articles should be written in your own words while substantially retaining the meaning of the source material. Hope, it does help.
As a side note, when you leave a reply to a message on a talk page, please edit the section header rather than making a new section (click "edit" that appears on right hand side). And remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~). It'd generate your signature with date and time. Anupmehra -Let's talk! 04:54, 18 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]