Talk:Femininity
Problems with this article
- Men "continually test the masculinity of their associates"?
- "Femininity is rooted in . . . early development", but masculinity is "mastered" well into adulthood?
- Comments on the "fake homosexual women" are just plain confusing, but certainly sounds POV.
Much of this article is well-written, but I think, Endomion, that you've made a few unsupportable statements here. I congratulate you on the work you've done, expanding this in a major way. I just think you've got a few things to tighten up, IMHO. Unschool 06:35, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
Well sue me, I have taken this article up from a little bitty stub.At any rate, it's largely completed and I can fine tune it for NPOV tomorrow maybe. Endomion 06:39, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
- Whoa, I think it's good work (didn't I say that?). My objections were largely in the first ¶, and, as I've said, you've done a lot of work. If I thought your writing sucked, I would have made the changes myself. I think you more than deserve the chance to fine-tune it. Good night. Unschool 06:54, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
- Okay, thank you, my first remarks were out of line. Endomion 06:55, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
- Hey, it's okay—as it turns out, my lawyer wouldn't pick up his cell phone anyway. :) Unschool 06:57, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
Not enough about breasts and stuff
I'm surprised at how bad this article is. I just felt I need to complain before attempting to fix it. I'll probably leave some things out, so it should be reviewed by another editor. -Barry- 03:55, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
contrast/opinion
If I was a female, I could be much more masculine than an action-movie lead actor.
Females have narrow hips?
The article formerly said that "narrow hips in relation to shoulders" is a feminine body trait, apparently indicating that women have relatively narrower hips and wider shoulders than men, which is obviously completely backwards. I changed that. 71.68.75.61 15:48, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
POV EDIT REVERTING
Please don't remove my writings just because you have a personal problem with them. Perhaps you could explain to me why my addition to the top of the page was removed, and why you disagree with it.