Talk:Chronic granulomatous disease
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Expanced article...please contact me with any suggestions, questions, or comments.--Jfurr1981 04:14, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
Comments
The following sentence could be reworded for clarity:
- X-linked Chronic Granulomatous disease: defect in membrane NADPH oxidase. Autosomal Recessive Chronic Granulomatous disease: defect in cytoplasmic NADPH oxidase.
In the news article it says that 3 people were recruited to the gene therapy trial, the article says 2. --apers0n 15:22, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
For first read:
- no external links
- a reference for NBT would be useful
- "X-linked Chronic Granulomatous disease: defect in membrane NADPH oxidase. Autosomal Recessive Chronic Granulomatous disease: defect in cytoplasmic NADPH oxidase." sentence should written ina better prose sytle.
NCurse work 15:36, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
Re: Suggestions
Reworked the genetics and therapy (specifically gene therapy) sections, and added a reference for the NBT test. Thanks for the input AspersOn and NCurse.Jfurr1981 13:25, 17 September 2006 (UTC)