Talk:Teo Mora

Update

There is currently a discussion at WP:ANI, regarding an issue where you may be involved. SportsLair (talk) 11:09, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

corrections of some mistakes

Teo Mora, my apologies for these factual errors,[1] and my thanks for pointing them out.

I do not speak Italian, so I was mistaken about the topic of your 1977 book. I have changed the Teo_Mora#See_also link from the incorrect ~~Cinema of Italy~~ to the more correct topic, Horror film#History.

I was basing the description of what your SPES books covered, on the book-subtitles. The better approach is to report what published reviews of the books have said, but in some cases I do not have the access to those publications, or have not yet had the time to add the reviews to the wikipedia article yet. And of course the best approach is to have a wikipedian who has read the books (or in your case written the books!) able to help explain their purpose and contents. I have integrated the book-subtitles into the wikipedia prose, and located two reviews, one of which gives a brief description of the contents (SPES_I as covering equations of a single variable and SPES_II as covering multi-variate equations). Is this an improvement?

Question, I would like to wikilink directly to the correct people, is Leopold Kronecker (1823–1891) the proper person, and is Dominique Duval (1987 PhD from Institut Fourier in Grenoble) also properly identified?

In addition to WP:Accuracy-type errors of fact, wikipedia article should also strive to avoid errors of omission (per WP:NPOV), or errors of over-emphasis / under-emphasis (per WP:UNDUE). As you already know, wikipedia articles are also supposed to avoid an informal tone (WP:TONE), and especially in biographical entries any overly-negative / overly-positive language (WP:BLP). Any problems like that which you notice, ought be corrected. Wikipedia is sometimes frustrating of course, because almost anybody can work on the biographical entries, and often material is not a polished as it ought to be -- or in some cases just missing outright, such as an article on AAECC.

Please let me know if there is any other problematic material, by clicking 'edit' at the top of this article-talkpage. Or you can just directly ask for assistance at WP:TEAHOUSE, for a faster response. 47.222.203.135 (talk) 17:00, 6 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]