Talk:DUI laws in California

I've started the article DUI California, because months ago I discovered that California didn't have its own DUI article, although many other States did. It will take me a week or so to complete this article. My time is limited, however, I intend on trying to make it as complete as one editor can. Others are welcome to contribute.→‎ Pocketthis (talk) 21:34, 14 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The article is very basic, however, it does distinguish penalties in California if arrested for DUI from other States. My target audience for the article was intended to be those who are only interested in a DUI as it relates to them in the State of California, in a simplified format. It was expanded on today to show 3rd time offenders minimum penalties. - Pocketthis (talk) 16:36, 24 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nobody Owns Wikipedia Articles

Pocketthis (talk · contribs) , in relation to the inappropriate reversion explained,

Don't mess with my article, unless you have a clue what you are doing. I'm averaging the entire cost of getting a DUI. Your redirect doesn't answer that at all

please remember that Wikipedia is a collective project, and nobody owns an article -- including this one. Also, when you say "I'm averaging the entire cost", it means that you are doing what amounts to original research, which is not the purpose of Wikipedia. Also, your "total cost" is reflective of the legal penalty -- attorney fees are not part of the penalty for a DUI charge. Remember, we're editing in good faith, and we all must keep in mind that other editors may have considerably more subject matter expertise than we do. Also, I did not implement any form of redirect.

If you can justify your reversion in accord with Wikipedia's policies, please provide your explanation. Otherwise, the edits should be restored. Arllaw (talk) 18:20, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I wrote this article with the help of a friend in DMV, and my personal attorney. Those costs are almost to the penny. Get a life, and get out of my article.Pocketthis (talk) 18:29, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I don't know about the merits of your edit at this time, but please read WP:OWN regarding article ownership(or the lack thereof). 331dot (talk) 18:33, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You are now reiterating that you are relying upon your personal, anecdotal experience, as opposed to using even a proper sources. Also, even if we assume that your number approximates what you paid to your lawyer at one point in time, the costs are not fixed in time nor are fees consistent from region to region within the state. Arllaw (talk) 18:40, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I don't mind, (in fact I would like) constructive edits in my article. Others have added things that were relevant and helpful. Your edit is not constructive, and I'll revert it every time I see it. If you have something else relevant you'd like to add to that section or sentence, I have no objection at all. But removing the total cost of getting in your car loaded and getting a DUI in California, "Is NOT Constructive". it's "Negligent". I will research the cost and add a citation shortly to back up the numbers.→ Pocketthis (talk) 18:42, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

You have failed to justify your action other than with declarations of ownership of the article, and your own experience with your personal lawyer. Neither justify your actions. If you want to rephrase your claims and properly support them, please be my guest. If not, then the edits should be restored. Arllaw (talk) 18:44, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I must agree that your personal research and calculations are not sufficient for Wikipedia article content. That is called original research. If such costs are documented in a reliable source, such as an official publication from California DMV, the California Attorney General's office, police, or any other reliable source, that's fine. But your own calculations are not. 331dot (talk) 18:46, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I just added a certification to back it up.Pocketthis (talk) 18:54, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Renaming Article

I agree with 93 (talk · contribs) that this article would be more appropriately titled "DUI Laws in California". Arllaw (talk) 18:23, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I chose DUI California, because other states have that name for their DUI article. That's the name. Get used to it.→ Pocketthis (talk) 18:32, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please provide an example of such an article title; I've typed in a few using other states and can't find one. Most DUI laws seem covered in "Alcohol laws of X state" pages, such as Alcohol laws of New Jersey. Currently, California does not have a separate article for its alcohol laws, perhaps this could be renamed to "Alcohol laws of California". 331dot (talk) 18:37, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Renaming this article to "Alcohol laws of California" would be appropriate if its scope were expanded to include such issues as dram shop laws, liquor licensing and regulation, and the like. Without such an expansion, the title should continue to reflect its focus. Arllaw (talk) 18:42, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Fair enough, it would be an improvement at least. 331dot (talk) 18:49, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The name of the article stays AS IS. I'll delete it before I'll change the name. End of discussion.→Pocketthis (talk) 18:56, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]