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Please comment on Talk:Richard Sakwa

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Happy New Year!

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CNMall41,
Thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia, and a Happy New Year to you and yours! North America1000 09:14, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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Thanks for the cheers! Looking forward to a busy year! --CNMall41 (talk) 19:48, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Eric Benny Page

Thanks for your time. Please elaborate me with example, what need to be done. I am new here.

Abs arka - Thanks for posting your note. First you would need to disclose your affiliation with the subject. You have already stated you have a conflict of interest, but you should read WP:PAY and if this applies to you then make the appropriate disclosure. Once you have done so, I will be more than happy to walk you through what needs to be done with your draft before it can be moved into the main space. --CNMall41 (talk) 19:47, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

14:21:53, 3 January 2018 review of submission by Abhijit9297


Hello, I see that my draft for "Gautam Sen" has been rejected. Please guide me as to what more references/ citations I require to submit. ( this is my first real submission and I am not very experienced at this.) Please note the following links ( that are already in my draft) that shows he is a respected author/ journalist with a long list of published books - [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] Gautam Sen’s book wins Grand Prix for the Most Beautiful Book of the Year: http://evoindia.com/gautam-sens-book-wins-grand-prix-beautiful-book-year/</ref>

References

  1. ^ http://www.turbo.fr/actualite-automobile/385678-beaux-livres-joyaux-automobiles-maharadjahs/
  2. ^ http://www.team-bhp.com/forum/pre-war/2653-how-rich-were-maharajas-before-independence-cars-maharajas-39.html
  3. ^ http://www.team-bhp.com/forum/technical-stuff/96094-gautam-sen-launches-car-design-book.html
  4. ^ https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/26193277-million-cars-for-billion-people
  5. ^ https://www.amazon.com/Marcello-Gandini-Maestro-Gautam-Sen/dp/185443280X

Also that he is associated with respected organisations like FIVA ([1] ) and ( [2] ) [3]

References

  1. ^ http://www.fiva.org/?page_id=189
  2. ^ http://www.chantillyartsetelegance.com/wp-content/uploads/Sen-2017.pdf
  3. ^ http://festivalautomobile.com/en/portfolio-item/32eme-ceremonie/

Regards, Abhijit9297 (talk) 14:21, 3 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Abhijit9297. The first issue that needs addressing is the referencing. There are senctions of the submission that talk about the subject but do not have a reference supporting them. For instance, this section:
In 1986 Sen left Maruti Udyog to join Business Press Pvt Ltd to start India’s first newsstand automobile magazine, The Indian Auto Journal, with the first issue released in September 1986. In 1988 The Indian Auto Journal was renamed Indian Auto. In 1992, Sen left Business Press Pvt Ltd to join the Business India Group. In 1993, the Business India Group launched the magazine Auto India, with Gautam Sen as the magazine’s Editor. On its launch, Auto India immediately went on to become India’s highest circulating automobile magazine, as per the ABC (Audit Bureau of Circulation) audited figures, a status it retained for the next six years. In 1996, Gautam Sen moved to Paris, to manage the project of designing and developing a new small sports car for San Engineering & Locomotive Ltd, with the Le Mans Design Group. At the same time he also remained the Editor of Auto India magazine, till 1997, when he became the Consulting Editor of the magazine, as he concentrated more on automotive design and development projects in France.
Please have a look at this page which explains how and why citations should be placed at the end of such content. From the rest of the submission, I see that you are familiar with how to do that already - as some of the content already has inline citations - but you will need to do it for the entire page. Once you have done so, please let me know and I will gladly review it again. Thanks and good luck. --CNMall41 (talk) 19:46, 6 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Matthias Schranner (CNMall41 (talk) 05:34, 1 January 2018)

Dear CNMall41,

Thank you for taking time to look into my submission, and for contacting Wikipedia:WikiProject Germany for further clarification. I know German sources are not ideal. I did, however, pay close attention to make sure all sources met Wikipedia source requirements. I don't know if it makes a difference, but the subject of the article does have an existing page in German. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to help with the process. Thanks for all the hard work! Ajmeldem (talk) 19:25, 8 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Than you, Ajmeldem. I cleaned up the tone of the submission and moved it live. I also linked it to the German page and updated the Wikidata information. Thanks for taking the time to review as it helps us clear up the backlog at AfC. Hope you have a great New Year!! --CNMall41 (talk) 20:32, 8 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much CNMall41. Have a great day!Ajmeldem (talk) 20:43, 8 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Ajmeldem - I hate to ask you again, but there is another one - Draft:Alexander Filipović - that has been pending for about 2 months that has quite a few German references. Is it possible you can assist me again? This one also has a German entry. --CNMall41 (talk) 22:47, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Dear CNMall41, sorry for the late reply. I would love to help. What can I do?Ajmeldem (talk) 22:20, 23 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Ajmeldem Thanks again and sorry to keep bugging you. Looks like someone already reviewed the draft and made it live. I normally like to reach out in the event of sources being in a language other than English since that is the only language I speak or read. Thanks again. --CNMall41 (talk) 21:00, 24 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Please comment on Talk:Apple Maggot Quarantine Area

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Draft:Slido

Hi CNMall41, Thank you very much for taking the time to review my submission of "Slido". I elaborated on your comments trying to concise the lengthy content which might have been irrelevant (sorry). I am new to Wikipedia, so any help will be much appreciated :). Could you advise me if the resubmission is suitable to be moved to articles? And if not, what do you advise to improve further? Thank you once again O:) Verca74 (talk) 08:53, 12 January 2018 (UTC)Verca74Verca74 (talk) 08:53, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks leaving a message. It appears that another editor has since reviewed the page and also declined it, even with your new edits. I would suggest paying closing attention to the links at the top of the page such as those on reliable sources, advertising, etc. Once you look through those and edit the draft accordingly, please resubmit for someone to review. Good luck! --CNMall41 (talk) 22:36, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Please comment on Talk:Bahar Mustafa race row incident

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Draft: Heat Of Damage

Hi CNMall41, I have corrected the referencing on the draft page Heat Of Damage. Please review again. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by BalderCharles (talk • contribs) 01:02, 24 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the note. I took another look and left a message on the draft for you to review. --CNMall41 (talk) 20:57, 24 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi CNMall41,

My best judgment indicates to me that Heat Of Damage is notable according to Wikipedia criteria. Criteria 1 - "been the subject of multiple, non-trivial, published works appearing in sources that are reliable, not self-published, and are independent of the musician or ensemble itself" - the band has been featured in several publications specializing in music and music reviews. Some of these are cited in the draft article, others are not, such as an interview with tattoo.com[1]. The band's first record was reviewed by several organizations including MetalHolic magazine [2] and Rock Revolt Magazine, who featured the band again later to discuss newer material[3].. The band has been interviewed by talk shows across the country, such as BODS Mayhem Hour (has interviewed notable musicians such as Phil Anselmo and Zakk Wylde) of Kentucky [4] and KJAG Radio of Kansas [5].


In a sense, however loosely, the band fits Criteria 5, as they are professionally represented by Distilled Entertainment, who from what I understand represent Neil Turbin, the original vocalist of famed Metal band Anthrax, and who at one point managed former Iron Maiden vocalist Blayze Bailey and rapper DMX [6].

Criteria 7 - "Has become one of the most prominent representatives of a notable style or the most prominent of the local scene of a city" - the band, based in Sacramento, is one of the most prominent examples of both metal and youth in their city. Tying in with loosely with Criteria 8, winning an award, or perhaps better with Criteria 9, placing in an esteemed music competition, the band's Sacramento Area Music Award is indicative of their prowess in the area as well as their recognition by the community. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BalderCharles (talk • contribs) 05:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Golich, Jessica (21 November 2017). "A Conversation with Sacramento Rockers: Heat Of Damage". Tattoo.com. Retrieved 24 January 2018.
  2. ^ Rose, Rustyn (20 November 2015). "Folsom's HEAT OF DAMAGE Influence Fueled on 'Open Fire'". MetalHolic. Retrieved 24 January 2018.
  3. ^ Thomas, Melody. "Heat of Damage Release New Music Video for "The Gift"". Rock Revolt. Rock Revolt Magazine. Retrieved 24 January 2018.
  4. ^ "David Haug vocalist of Heat Of Damage 9-22-17". YouTube. Retrieved 24 January 2018.
  5. ^ "Heat of damage w/ Jiggy Jaguar 11/26/2017". YouTube.
  6. ^ "Artists List". Distilled Entertainment. Retrieved 24 January 2018.
Thanks for the additional comments. I commented directly on the draft in order to keep everything together. I would suggest using the Teahouse going forward as you may find someone to assist with finding better references or even obtain a second opinion - as I am only one editor. --CNMall41 (talk) 21:12, 26 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Driscoll's

Hi. I used to pick strawberries when I was a kid (for a living). What's your connection to Driscolls's? Youngnoah (talk) 21:49, 29 January 2018 (UTC)Youngnoah[reply]

Driscoll's is sitting in my fridge at the moment. They are the dominant brand being sold where I live. You used to pick for Driscoll's? Any idea where I can get some images for the page? I see a few in Flickr but I'm looking for some more historical images which I doubt I will be able to find. Also, in case you didn't see I changed the hyperlink you put in the opening paragraph that led directly to Mike Reiter. The link was proper, but I kept the text shortened to "Reiter" since it was more than just him involved in the company throughout its history. Finally, if you are interested, I started a page for the "Banner" strawberry which you can see here. Feel free to work on it if you wish. Would love to collaborate. --CNMall41 (talk) 22:04, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Please comment on Wikipedia:Village pump (policy)

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22:12:21, 5 February 2018 review of submission by Esme Shepherd


I thought that might be the best solution (adding to Krishna Kumari (princess)). However, I only found that because I looked up her father, something most seekers of information might not think of. Therefore, will it be all right to make a redirect under Kishen Kower, where most are likely to look? Esme Shepherd (talk) 22:12, 5 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Esme Shepherd - I was traveling for a contract job so didn't have much time to respond in the last week. I see that you figured out the redirect for the name already. Great job and thanks for your contributions. Hope you stick around for a while. --CNMall41 (talk) 18:27, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Request for Realtor.com article

Greetings, CNMall41. On behalf of Move, I am still looking for a neutral editor to assist with reviewing a proposed draft to replace the current Realtor.com article. I have made many improvements and trims to the draft I put forth back in September, based on feedback from a few editors. I see you are an active editor and member of WikiProject Companies. I am curious if you might be willing to take a look at the proposed draft and copy over content appropriately. If not, I will try to find other WikiProject Companies participants who may be able to help. Thanks for your consideration. Inkian Jason (talk) 16:42, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Inkian Jason - I took a look at the proposed draft and it is a great improvement of the current page. The only issue I have is that it appears you are already engaging in a conversation with an editor on the talk of both articles. If Spintendo has no issue with another editor taking a look, I will be happy to do so. But, only if, as I am not sure if your message here would constitute WP:CAN or not, being that you left it here with a single editor. --CNMall41 (talk) 18:25, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for complimenting the draft and offering to help. Sorry, I am not trying to canvass, or go around any specific editors; my hope is to get feedback from more editors, especially since I was not getting replies to my pings on the article's talk page. Several editors have participated in edit request discussions on the article's talk page, and I would welcome any of them to return with their thoughts or concerns. If you decide you're up for the task of implementing the draft appropriately, of course you are more than welcome to ping other editors so they can participate in the discussion. Thanks, Inkian Jason (talk) 18:21, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry. I didn't mean the comment to accuse you of canvassing. I meant that I didn't want others to see it as canvassing. Since one editor seems to have declined to implement many of the changes, I don't want to create an appearance of canvassing. If the editor - pinged above - doesn't object, I would be glad to review and implement what could be implemented (this doesn't mean it would be implemented as a whole as I would need to review the references more in detail). Other than that, I wouldn't want to get involved as it looks like they have already spent a great deal of time reviewing the drafts. --CNMall41 (talk) 18:26, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Sure, I understand. I invite you to review the draft's sourcing in detail, as well as the previous edit requests. Please keep in mind, some editor comments are about previous versions of the draft, so you might take a look at the edits that have been made since then. If User:Spintendo has not replied here in 2 days, I am not sure they will, but you could ping them on the article's talk page if you think that is best. More than one editor has complimented the draft, so I'm really looking for additional feedback and forward movement from any editors who are willing to help out. Thanks again for your consideration. Inkian Jason (talk) 22:01, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I understand you have discussed with others. I also pinged Spintendo already (and again now) and I am familiar with what I can and cannot do on Wikipedia. To be clear, I am not comfortable doing ANYTHING unless the editor EXPRESSLY states they have no objection with me reviewing the content. This is not about Wikipedia guidelines with me. It is about a COI issue that is already somewhat being addressed by another editor and I am not going to jump in the middle without them saying it is okay. Sorry I cannot be of more help at this point.--CNMall41 (talk) 02:56, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Please comment on Talk:Elon Musk's Tesla Roadster

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Request on 06:09:14, 13 February 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Jonivy


I'm confused over the rejection of the article. I don't often contribute to wikipedia, and I definitely don't enjoy wasting my time. If the article is deficient in some way, please let me know. Else, approve of it.

The stated notion that the subject of the article is not noteworthy is obviously erroneous. The subject, David Hildebrand, is listed as a candidate for U.S. Senate in California on more than one page on Wikipedia already and has been featured in news reporting, including those cited on the draft page along with others. California has a population of 36 million people. If our statewide elections are not noteworthy subjects of this encyclopedia, then your standards are objectively poor.

Thanks

Jon Ivy (talk) 06:09, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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