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Article Evaluation

Pneumatic chemistry

• Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

Everything that I noticed in the article appeared to be relevant, but the article did appear to gloss over some of the historical timeline and accomplishments of people such as Robert Boyle and Hooke's contribution of the air pump, as well as some more modern explanations of the chemistry that was going on. James Watt is also credited with establishing "pneumatic therapy," but is not mentioned later as someone who played a role in the development of pneumatic chemistry.

• Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

The article appeared neutral, all of the people addressed in the article appeared to be given fair and adequate explanations (with the exception of James Watts) and there are no clear Biases that appear to have been implemented in the article.

• Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

James Watts was mentioned in one line for implementing "pneumatic therapy" but is not discussed later in the article. The main players in Pneumatic Chemistry are also not discussed much and could be fleshed out more.

• Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?

Only two of the links were from online journal articles, but those links worked and appeared to support the article.

• Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?

Most of the references were published books from university presses, so they appear to be credible. I believe they are unbiased, but there is no noting of bias anywhere.

• Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

No information is "out of date" per se, but there is missing information about important players that needs to be fleshed out, and James Watts's contribution to Pneu. Chem.

• Check out the Talk page of the article. What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?

There are no conversations in the Talk page; there is only someone mentioning they are a student editor for the page.

• How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?

The article is rated a Start Class, Mid importance, and is a part of the WikiChemistry and History of Science Wiki Project.

• How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?

It mentions a few there characters, but they are not discussed in depth with their contributions.

3/2/18 Article Assignment

Partner: Savannah Swaringam (wiki-user: sesxb7)

Article Choice: Pneumatic Chemistry

Why did we choose this article? What is missing? What do we want to add?

• The article is lacking good structure with more relevant information already present as compared to other article we were considering (Avicennism). This article needs better grouping of information and expansion upon relevant topics and key figures within the article. Our main goal is reformatting and expanding the major figures of Pneumatic Chemistry and adding people that were not mentioned (James Watt, Alessandro Volta). ~~~~

References

1. James Watt by Andrew Carnegie, The Floating Press 2009, ISBN:9781775416340. 9781776510351
2. James Watt, by Andrew Carnegie 1736-1819, Doubleday 1905. ISBN: unsure
3. McEvoy JG. 2015 Gases, God and the balance of nature: a commentary on Priestley (1772) ‘Observations on different kinds of air’.Phil. Trans. R. Soc. A 373: 20140229. http://dx.doi.org/10.1098/rsta.2014.0229
4. Stewart L. "His Majesty's subjects: from laboratory to human experiment in pneumatic chemistry," Notes and Records of the Royal Society of London, Vol. 63, No. 3, Thomas Beddoes, 1760-1808 (20 September 2009), pp. 231-245.
5. Tomory L. "The origins of gaslight technology in eighteeth-century pneumatic chemistry," Annals of Science, Vol. 66, No. 4, October 2009, pp. 473-496.
6. Various books in the library that I need to check out.

Need to revise references for consistency of formatting. ~~~~

Possible Edits

Addition to Joseph Priestley's section

Joseph Priestley, in Observations on different kinds of air, was one of the first people to describe air as being composed of different states of matter, and not as one element[Gases, God and the balance of nature (GGBN)]. Priestley elaborated on the notions of fixed air (CO₂), mephitic air and inflammable air to include "inflammable nitrous air," "vitriolic acid air," "alkaline air" And "dephlogisticated air" [GGBN]. Priestley also described the process of respiration in terms of phlogiston theory [GGBN]. Priestley also established a process for treating scurvy and other ailments using fixed air in his Directions for impregnating water with fixed air. ~~~~

Joseph Black Edits

https://www.physiology.org/doi/10.1152/ajplung.00020.2014

https://search-proquest-com.libproxy.mst.edu/docview/1020570288?pq-origsite=summon&accountid=14594

Joseph Black was a chemist that took interest in the pneumatic field after studying under William Cullen. While his primary research was in magnesia alba and heat, his research led him to make inferences about fixed air, as given off by reactions involving the salt. Despite him never using the pneumatic trough or other instrumentation invented to collect and analyze the airs, his inferences led to more research into fixed air instead of common air, with the trough actually being used. (original)

Joseph Black was a chemist that took interest in the pneumatic field after studying under William Cullen. He was first interested in the topic of magnesia alba, or magnesium carbonate, and limestone, or calcium carbonate, and wrote a dissertation called "De Humore acido a cibis orto, et magnesia alba" on the properties of both. His experiments on magnesium carbonate led him to discover that fixed air, or carbon dioxide, was being given off during reactions with various chemicals, including breathing. After moving on to Glasgow to teach, Black turned his interests to the topic of heat. Through his experiments with ice and water, he made several discoveries about the latent heat of fusion and the latent heat of freezing water, as well as working extensively with specific heats of a number of liquids. (updated) Sesxb7 (talk) 15:23, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Eighteenth century original text

In the eighteenth century, with the rise of combustion analysis in chemistry, Stephen Halesinvented the pneumatic trough in order to collect gases from the samples of matter he used; while uninterested in the properties of the gases he collected, he wanted to explore how much gas was given off from the materials he burned or let ferment. Hales was successful in preventing the air from losing its "elasticity," i.e. preventing it from experiencing a loss in volume, by bubbling the gas through water, and therefore dissolving the soluble gases.

After the invention of the pneumatic trough, Stephen Hales continued his research into the different airs, and performed many Newtonian analyses of the various properties of them. He published his book Vegetable Staticks in 1727, and this influenced the entire field of pneumatic chemistry, as no chemist interested in the science of air started their work without reading this book and citing it in their own papers. In Vegetable Staticks, Hales not only introduced his trough, but also the results he obtained from collected the air, such as the elasticity and composition of airs along with their ability to mix with others.

The pneumatic trough was integral thereon in work with gases (or, as contemporary chemists called them, airs). Work done by Joseph Black, Joseph Priestley, Herman Boerhaave, and Henry Cavendish revolved largely around the use of the instrument, allowing them to collect airs given off by different chemical reactions and combustion analyses. Their work led to the discovery of many types of airs, such as dephlogisticated air (discovered by Joseph Priestley).

Moreover, the chemistry of airs was not limited to combustion analyses. During the eighteenth century, many chymists used the discovery of airs as a new path for exploring old problems, with one example being the field of medicinal chemistry. One particular Englishman, James Watt, began to take the idea of airs and use them in what was referred to as pneumatic therapy, or the use of airs to make laboratories more workable with fresh airs and also aid patients with different illnesses, with varying degrees of success. Most human experimentation done was performed on the chymists themselves, as they believed that self-experimentation was a necessary part or progressing the field.

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In the eighteenth century, with the rise of combustion analysis in chemistry, Stephen Halesinvented the pneumatic trough in order to collect gases from the samples of matter he used; while uninterested in the properties of the gases he collected, he wanted to explore how much gas was given off from the materials he burned or let ferment. Hales was successful in preventing the air from losing its "elasticity," i.e. preventing it from experiencing a loss in volume, by bubbling the gas through water, and therefore dissolving the soluble gases.

After the invention of the pneumatic trough, Stephen Hales continued his research into the different airs, and performed many Newtonian analyses of the various properties of them. He published his book Vegetable Staticks in 1727, and this influenced the entire field of pneumatic chemistry, as no chemist interested in the science of air started their work without reading this book and citing it in their own papers. In Vegetable Staticks, Hales not only introduced his trough, but also the results he obtained from collected the air, such as the elasticity and composition of airs along with their ability to mix with others.

The pneumatic trough was integral thereon in work with gases (or, as contemporary chemists called them, airs). Work done by Joseph Black, Joseph Priestley, Herman Boerhaave, and Henry Cavendish revolved largely around the use of the instrument, allowing them to collect airs given off by different chemical reactions and combustion analyses. Their work led to the discovery of many types of airs, such as dephlogisticated air (discovered by Joseph Priestley).

Moreover, the chemistry of airs was not limited to combustion analyses. During the eighteenth century, many chymists used the discovery of airs as a new path for exploring old problems, with one example being the field of medicinal chemistry. One particular Englishman, James Watt, began to take the idea of airs and use them in what was referred to as pneumatic therapy, or the use of airs to make laboratories more workable with fresh airs and also aid patients with different illnesses, with varying degrees of success. Most human experimentation done was performed on the chymists themselves, as they believed that self-experimentation was a necessary part or progressing the field.