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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Iz55 (talk | contribs) at 06:10, 12 May 2018 (→‎Reply 11-MAY-2018). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Collaboration of further authors

I have requested the help from a few others singapore based contributors who have contributed to the online media space in Singapore. I have written on the talk page of User:S9929527I, User:LMX97, User:Deoma12, User:Rqiang84 and‎ User:LeeChoonYeeLcy as they are regular contributors to many other local singapore media pages. Iz55 (talk) 01:47, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Contested mention of Grammy winning producer

You had mentioned that the article doesn't mention about Ed Cash's Grammy but having a Grammy winning producer helps the audience understand the producer. For example, i noticed that you like NCIS (Which i love). Tony Dinozzo shared his first kiss with academy mosssad agent ziva david. This would illuminate the audience's understanding of Ziva, but also of Tony. Please correct me if i am wrong! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iz55 (talk • contribs) 14:04, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

No, that's not how notability works and it's not a good analogy. Her working with a producer who has received a Grammy is sufficient to establish significance but his grammy award is completely and totally irrelevant to the article and adding it at least 3 times in the article was nothing more than an attempt to pad the article, as I said on my talk page. CHRISSYMAD ❯❯❯¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 14:09, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Iz55 I have now asked you 5 times (probably more) to address the COI issue and you have avoided it, so please respond here or on my talk page about it. CHRISSYMAD ❯❯❯¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 14:11, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
But Rqiang84 had only mentioned it in his revision once. Can i trouble you to revert to Rqiang84's version and we can remove the offending parts from there and work from there — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iz55 (talk • contribs) 14:13, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Iz55 See my question above. This does not answer it. CHRISSYMAD ❯❯❯¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 14:15, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
chrissymad which are the portions of rqiang84's content that you feel are unsupported and untrue? I urge you to look through his content. Can you revert to rqiang84's content and delete accordingly the portions you do not agree with so that editors can see your specific comments for the specific portions? Thank you!Iz55 (talk) 14:33, 10 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Proposal for addition of Professional Life details

Subject is an internet celebrity in Singapore, with newspaper articles referenced in the main article. She also has viral videos that have more than 2 million views, which is almost everyone in a small country like singapore haha. Since she also directs the videos she acts in, i wanted to share on her professional life as a filmmaker before being an actress. I hope to add this content to help improve her actress and film maker section by putting in the following:

Professional background

Actress and Film maker

Lee was involved with film creation of two short films Graduation and Keep Mum. The first film Graduation won the Best Production Design at the Singapore Short Film Awards and *SCAPE's National Youth Film Awards in 2015,[1] and was the Singapore finalist at Hong Kong International Mobile Film Awards. Her second film Keep Mum was nominee of Best Direction in the National Youth Film Awards 2015 and was featured at Cana Film Festival in 2016.[2] Lee expressed that these short films as her way of commenting on social issues facing her generation[3]

Lee was discovered by SGAG after they came across her blog,[4] in which she illustrates stories from her daily life in an endearing humorous style,[5] which they would later published one of her articles regarding the Carousell onto their social platforms. Upon their request, Lee joined SGAG in January 2016 and helped to establish its video team, where she is fully involved with the productions of the SGAG videos since then, in which she often appears under the personas as a news presenter "Suezanna Chole Tan" and more often as "Sue Ann" alongside with other actors.[6]

Proposal for improvement of info box

This info box is pretty similar to the current info box, but a photo has been added, and some minor changes have been put in. This info box was primarily helped to be done up by another editor rqiang84

Template:Infobox Chinese-language singer and actor Iz55 (talk) 16:12, 11 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "www.scape.sg website".
  2. ^ "Cana Film Festival, Singapore". www.facebook.com. Retrieved 2018-05-10.
  3. ^ "Review - NTU ADM Film 2015 Graduation Shorts - Part 2". www.sindie.sg.
  4. ^ "Annette Lee - Content Summit". contentsummit.asia.
  5. ^ "PressReader.com - Connecting People Through News". www.pressreader.com.
  6. ^ Post, Vulcan (31 October 2017). "Here's What You Missed At Content Summit 2017 - Part 1".

Reply 11-MAY-2018

  1. This photograph is missing evidence of permission. It may have an author and a source, but there is no proof that the author agreed to license the file. Unless evidence of permission is shown, the file is scheduled to be deleted within seven days.
  2. The references suggested for use in this article do not work towards resolving any of the already-existing maintenance template issues. It would be better to address those deficiencies (such as notability, point of view-prose style, and reference quality) with the goal of eliminating them before adding newer material to the article. .spintendo⋅⋅) 17:12, 11 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion on Article Notability

I would like to propose that subject is notable as it surpasses the guidelines on the following points:
1. Subject has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject. Just to name a few:
She had been featured in a full length interview in the Singapore newspaper the straits times, which is the only newspaper in singapore. That article is listed as on of the reference and for convenience it is referenced here too[1].
She also has featured in a full length interview with Mediacorp's online website called Toggle, and appears in a full length feature by them. That interview is also referenced here [2].
She also furthermore has appeared in other full length magazine features such as Time Out (magazine), which is the british magazine group and publishes 108 cities around the world. That article is here [3].
She also appears in Cleo (magazine)'s magazine as a full length feature here[4]


2. Subject also has attracted attention over a sufficiently significant period of time
The above articles have been published over a period of time. the straits times - 27/10/17, Time Out (magazine) - 14/09/17, Mediacorp's toggle article - 02/10/17, Cleo (magazine) - 1/12/17


3. Subject is also an internet celebrity with weekly videos, some of which have more than 1.5 to 2.5 million views. For a small country like singapore, 2million viewers is almost every person under the age of 30. Some of her videos are referenced here [5][6]


4. She is the main star of SGAG, which has more than 800k followers on Facebook, and 450k on instagram.


5. I have made multiple edits (in an effort to address template maintanence issues), and no new content was added. Please take some time to review my edit. Thank you! Iz55 (talk) 02:17, 12 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ https://www.straitstimes.com/lifestyle/entertainment/funny-girl-also-sings
  2. ^ https://lifestyle.toggle.sg/en/worklife/news/the-secret-life-of-an-sgag-writer-annette-lee-9263112?page=2
  3. ^ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_Out_(magazine)
  4. ^ https://www.pressreader.com/singapore/cleo-singapore/20171201/281573765977487
  5. ^ https://www.facebook.com/sgag.sg/videos/1652189174796064/
  6. ^ https://www.facebook.com/sgag.sg/videos/1757632317585082/

Reply 11-MAY-2018

Red X Already declined

  • The question is not over the subject's notability, but rather, whether the changes requested offer an improvement to the article. Requested changes to the article such as adding a picture which does not have the required licensing would not constitute as an improvement.
  • Other requested changes to the wording of the information were not grammatical, and would not improve the article:

    Example No.#1 "Lee was discovered by SGAG after they came across her blog,[4] in which she illustrates stories from her daily life in an endearing humorous style,[5] which they would later published [sic] one of her articles regarding the Carousell onto their social platforms."
    Example No.#2 "Lee joined SGAG in January 2016 and helped to establish its video team, where she is fully involved with the productions of the SGAG videos since then, [sic] in which she often appears under the personas as [sic] a news presenter.."

    For those reasons the edit request is declined. .spintendo⋅⋅) 04:56, 12 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Dear user:spintendo, greetings. I must apologise i was unclear in my 2nd edit request. The second edit request was to ask for your guidance and thoughts as i had already actually made the changes in grammar, reference quality etc to the main body of the article (not on the talk page). I have abandoned the above proposal of content, but directly edited the reference qualities into the main body of at the article itself. I did not add any new content but cleared up the grammar, reference quality etc. Please do have a look through the main article body (not the talk page). For your convenience, i had also detailed out the changes in the edit history so you can see what i had done. Please guide me if my minor edits are sufficient. Thank you for your time, sorry for the trouble Iz55 (talk) 06:10, 12 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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