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Good afternoon, I'd like to open 4 new pages. I published 4 drafts some days ago (titles: "Seminar on Youth", "The Standard Life of a Temporary Pantyhose Salesman", "Sodomies in Elevenpoint", "Uses and Abuses") but the pages haven't been opened yet. Also the page "Aldo Busi" that I've been editing for a while at the top says «page issues». Can you please help? 109.235.153.213 (talk) 13:13, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

When you think the drafts are ready to go into the encyclopedia, put "

" at the top of the draft. That will create a little box that alerts reviewers that the draft needs review. It can take quite some time (a few weeks in some cases) after that before someone gets to it. That said, if I were you before adding that I'd try to add a little more information to those articles and add some citations to secondary sources. As for Aldo Busi, I see you have put a lot of work into expanding it, and it looks like you may have used the Italian Wikipedia article for some of it as the tag suggests. If you feel there would be no additional benefit to someone translating the Italian article feel free to remove that tag, however I see the Italian article looks like it still has sections we don't, and definately has more sources than we have, therefore it may be premature to remove it. However, I can't read Italian so I don't know how valuable that content is or if it is duplicated in our article. Either way, I would leave the additional citations needed tag on ours as it doesn't cite very many. I hope this helped answer your questions; let me know if you need further help. ~ ONUnicorn(Talk|Contribs)problem solving 15:45, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

December 2018 Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, your addition of one or more external links to the page Aldo Busi has been reverted. Your edit here to Aldo Busi was reverted by an automated bot that attempts to remove links which are discouraged per our external links guideline. The external link(s) you added or changed (https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IFlpiMdrWck) is/are on my list of links to remove and probably shouldn't be included in Wikipedia. If the external link you inserted or changed was to a media file (e.g. music or video) on an external server, then note that linking to such files may be subject to Wikipedia's copyright policy, as well as other parts of our external links guideline. If the information you linked to is indeed in violation of copyright, then such information should not be linked to. Please consider using our upload facility to upload a suitable media file, or consider linking to the original. If you were trying to insert an external link that does comply with our policies and guidelines, then please accept my creator's apologies and feel free to undo the bot's revert. However, if the link does not comply with our policies and guidelines, but your edit included other, constructive, changes to the article, feel free to make those changes again without re-adding the link. Please read Wikipedia's external links guideline for more information, and consult my list of frequently-reverted sites. For more information about me, see my FAQ page. Thanks! --XLinkBot (talk) 11:28, 29 December 2018 (UTC) If this is a shared IP address, and you didn't make the edit, please ignore this notice. Your submission at Articles for creation: Uses and Abuses (January 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Buidhe was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was: 

Please add references to reviews in WP:RS. Notability is not inherited, so just because the author is notable doesn't mean that every book is. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Uses and Abuses and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Uses and Abuses, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Please use the rationale parameter to explain why this user talk page should be deleted. (E.g., {{db-g7|rationale= }}.) Thanks!

Per the User page guidelines, user talk pages are generally not deleted, barring legal threats or other grievous violations that have to be removed for legal reasons; however, exceptions to this can be and are made on occasion for good reason (see right to vanish). In addition, nonpublic personal information and potentially libellous information posted to your talk page may be removed by making a request for oversight." at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit. If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page. You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors. buidhe (formerly Catrìona) 12:16, 15 January 2019 (UTC)

Hello, 109.235.153.213! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! buidhe (formerly Catrìona) 12:16, 15 January 2019 (UTC) Your submission at Articles for creation: Seminar on Youth (February 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by StraussInTheHouse was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was: 

Probably passes WP:NBOOK due to award. Please ensure the citation for that is placed next to the claim. In order to cement notability and make the draft more than a plot summary, please try and find a couple more independent reviews in reliable sources to demonstrate significant coverage. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Seminar on Youth and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Seminar on Youth, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Please use the rationale parameter to explain why this user talk page should be deleted. (E.g., {{db-g7|rationale= }}.) Thanks!

Per the User page guidelines, user talk pages are generally not deleted, barring legal threats or other grievous violations that have to be removed for legal reasons; however, exceptions to this can be and are made on occasion for good reason (see right to vanish). In addition, nonpublic personal information and potentially libellous information posted to your talk page may be removed by making a request for oversight." at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit. If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page. You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors. SITH (talk) 14:50, 10 February 2019 (UTC) Your submission at Articles for creation: The Standard Life of a Temporary Pantyhose Salesman (February 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by StraussInTheHouse was:

I'm not sure if this meets WP:COPYVIO but please ensure you keep lengthy quotes to a minimum and summarise or describe what is said. We can't accept material copied from elsewhere. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Standard Life of a Temporary Pantyhose Salesman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:The Standard Life of a Temporary Pantyhose Salesman, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Please use the rationale parameter to explain why this user talk page should be deleted. (E.g., {{db-g7|rationale= }}.) Thanks!

Per the User page guidelines, user talk pages are generally not deleted, barring legal threats or other grievous violations that have to be removed for legal reasons; however, exceptions to this can be and are made on occasion for good reason (see right to vanish). In addition, nonpublic personal information and potentially libellous information posted to your talk page may be removed by making a request for oversight." at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit. If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page. You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors. SITH (talk) 14:52, 10 February 2019 (UTC)