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Philip McHarris

Hello, Java! After your suggestions, I worked to improve the article about Draft:Philip McHarris and clarified his biography and got rid of the essay style and all the redundant information. If you have spare time, please let me know how I did this time.Wikiedits5891 (talk) 21:25, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikiedits5891, thanks! I'll go through. Java Hurricane 03:57, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Good question!
This is the only source I found but it doesn't look like reliable one, so I decided to remove it:
www.mylife.com/philip-mcharris/e80149938393210

Here are the other two sources that indicate his approximate age between 27-29: https://www.bc.edu/publications/chronicle/FeaturesNewsTopstories/2015/topstories/_world-of-difference.html https://www.bc.edu/publications/chronicle/FeaturesNewsTopstories/2013/features/mcharris021413.html Wikiedits5891 (talk) 06:55, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikiedits5891, is there anything on his website? Java Hurricane 07:16, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the suggestion, Java! In his "bio" on the website he lists the DOB. I've updated the Draft:Philip McHarris to reflect the updated date of birth. Wikiedits5891 (talk) 13:16, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikiedits5891, thank you! Java Hurricane 13:16, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

JavaHurricane, Thank you for the suggestions! Wikiedits5891 (talk) 22:15, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Cyclone Heidi

Hiya Java. I saw you're working on Heidi. Talk:2011–12_Australian_region_cyclone_season/January - I wanted to make sure you knew of this archive of sources. You should be able to write a good MH with that. Thanks for working on that article :) Lemme know if you need any help. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 20:56, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hurricanehink, thanks! Java Hurricane 02:44, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Tim Thomas (NBA)

The edits of mine you reverted for Tim Thomas I believe were constructive as they were correct and accurate.

"Thomas also seriously considered making the jump straight to the NBA from high school, waiting to declare his decision to attend college at Villanova until just days before the deadline to enter the NBA draft."

This was info was gained from a story in Sport Illustrated... https://vault.si.com/vault/1996/11/15/one-year-and-then-villanova-phenom-tim-thomas-gives-it-the-old-college-try-but-the-call-of-the-nba-is-never-out-of-earshot Pretty reliable source... so.. what's the problem?

Also the other edits were cosmetic.. I was taking the ALL CAPS off some of the words and correcting prepositions. Seems pretty constructive to me.

No?

Per BLP policy, all information on biographies of living persons MUST be reliably sourced without exception. Since you did not add the source while adding the information, I reverted the edit. Please feel free to add back the information, as long as you cite the source. Java Hurricane 07:31, 22 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I literally linked most of what I wrote ... how do you add a source otherwise? Pleas explain. Because sadly you are now presenting incorrect info about Tim Thomas. Specifically the years he played in the NBA 1997-2007 is WRONG and you keep reverting to that. Look it up yourself if you want.. he played from 1998-2010. So.. You are making wiki incorrect every time you revert me.

Tell me step by step what you need. Thanks as I am new.

I'm sorry if you feel bad, but I must abide with Wikipedia policy. You must too. As I said, add a source. Are you using Virtual Editor or the source editor? I can help you if you tell me that. Java Hurricane 07:52, 22 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Jayvijay Sachan

Hello we have created a article called Jayvijay Sachan. You Know Jayvijay Sachan is very notable person in Indian comedy field. so please help me to get publish this article to mainspace. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mamaharyaindia (talk • contribs) 11:49, 26 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mamaharyaindia, ummmm... I won't be able to help as I am busy at the moment. You could, however, ask for help at the Teahouse, which is meant to serve this very purpose. Java Hurricane 12:04, 26 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mamaharyaindia, I agree with JH. This looks pretty notable, given the wiki links given, but more sources would be better. Cheers! Eumat114 formerly The Lord of Math (Message) 12:55, 26 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Nikolai Udianskyi again

Hi again! You wrote about Draft:Nikolai Udianskyi that «Article looks good now. There were some promotional things there on the page when I reviewed, but it seems all clear now.»

Could you please change the {{AFC submission|d|bio|u=Perohanych|ns=118|decliner=JavaHurricane|declinets=20200421083559|reason2=adv|ts=20200420202749}} template on the draft article! --Perohanych (talk) 20:29, 26 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Perohanych, I didn't review it after the 21st. I honestly don't see any problems now. Going through right now. Java Hurricane 03:12, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please resubmit the draft now. Java Hurricane 03:15, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resubmitted just now. --Perohanych (talk) 05:30, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Perohanych, okay will go through soon. Java Hurricane 05:31, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The article has been accepted. Java Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

PSA Certified

Hello JavaHurricane, Thanks for reviewing the PSA Certified draft so quickly and the clear feedback you gave - I was expecting to be waiting a while for the page to be reviewed. I'm going to tweak the content and resubmit, but wanted your opinions on the planned edits prior to resubmitting.

- Remove Certification & Security section (as some of this is referenced from primary sources) - Remove mentions of external companies (e.g. STMicroelectronics) - Tweak Foundation language to make more encyclopedic.

If those steps are carried out, do you think the draft would be closer to acceptable? If you have any further advice, it would be appreciated.RichardDigital47 (talk) 13:44, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

RichardDigital47, that doesn't need to be removed. I think that the only issue I found was the language in the "Foundation" section. That you can go forward with. Rest of the things can stay. Java Hurricane 14:27, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

JavaHurricane thanks for the clarification and responding quickly. I have now resubmitted the draft with the changes we have talked about. To make things easier, this is the link. If you have the chance to review, I would really appreciate it. Link - Draft:PSA Certified. RichardDigital47 (talk) 09:49, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]