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3 Potential Topics

• Economic democracy
• Areas of improvement :

1. Sources from the article are extremely outdated
2. Should list more examples of the different economic democracy that are implemented in different country
3. Give examples of how effective is economic democracy by showing examples of different nations using this method to analysis if it worked well for them

• Voter suppression in the United States

1. Add how women were unable to vote in the past due to gender discrimination
2. Add the date of when women were granted rights to vote
3. Elaborate more on how minorities were unable to vote because they did not receive sufficient education

• 2016 United States presidential election

1. For the close states, it gave statistics of which state was close to winning the electoral votes, however not many people would be able to understand
2. The table of the demographic subgroups should include footnotes to where the data was retrieved.

Notes for Improvement to Articles

Article 1 : Voter suppression in the United States

1. The article touched base on how the voting rights system in the United States limits their voting rights. However, an improvement to this is to create another emphasis of when women were allowed to vote in the United States to allow the reader to know different voter suppressions. Additionally, it includes statistic if which minority groups voted in the past, but it needs to thoroughly explain how many minorities were unable to vote because they were illiterate.
2. For the Jim Crow laws, it should include how the segregation did not allow black voters to go cast their ballots in the same facility as white voters.
3. It included the NAACP and the League of Women Voters, however it did not elaborate on what the organization advocate to do.

Article 2 : Economic democracy

1. Since it includes economic, the article mentioned the supply and demand that is related to the topic. By improving this, adding a graph to show a visual illustration to allow the reader to understand.
2. Adding more visuals
3. Compare and contrast to at least one other ideology

Finalize your topic/Find your sources

- Social media in the 2020 United States presidential election

Adding to the article :

- Add how social media is beneficial for both sides of the presidential campaign

- Use more resources and elaborate more on each section ( for example : in the twitter section, it was fairly brief but should include more information in order for the reader to get a grasp of understanding how this social media platform affect the 2020 election )

Additional resources that this article could reference :

Bibliography :

Bergengruen, Vera. “Social Media Firms Brace For An Election Unlike Any Other.” Time, Time, 23 Sept. 2020, time.com/5892347/social-media-platforms-bracing-for-election/. (https://time.com/5892347/social-media-platforms-bracing-for-election/)

“Why Social Media Influence On The 2020 Election Will Look A Lot Like 2016.” 10/09/2019, www.mediapost.com/publications/article/341819/why-social-media-influence-on-the-2020-election-wi.html. (https://www.mediapost.com/publications/article/341819/why-social-media-influence-on-the-2020-election-wi.html)

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