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A user with 122 edits. Account created on 8 November 2015.
19 March 2022
- 13:3913:39, 19 March 2022 diff hist −20 m Louis Pasteur →Anthrax: simplified grammar and punctuiation
- 13:3013:30, 19 March 2022 diff hist −2 Louis Pasteur →Chicken cholera: simplified punctuation
- 13:1713:17, 19 March 2022 diff hist +542 m Pasteurization →Novel pasteurization methods: Many of these "novel" methods are not pasteurization as no heat is involved, they are better described as "preservation" methods. Added "fermentation" as a preservation method as direct quote form Wikipedia, I don't know how to add the reference, perhaps on review someone can put it into the references. Tag: Reverted
- 12:5512:55, 19 March 2022 diff hist 0 m Pasteurization Subject adjective correction as the subject of the paragraph is refrigeration. Tag: Reverted
- 12:5112:51, 19 March 2022 diff hist +5 Pasteurization Improved confusing language removing the words "raw milk". The subject of the paragraph is refrigeration, raw milk does not otherwise appear at all in this paragraph. Tag: Reverted
- 12:4412:44, 19 March 2022 diff hist −9 m Pasteurization Improved wording. Pathogens do not normally spontaneously generate. Pathogens can be produced by microbes, not just bacteria. Not all bacteria produce pathogens, microbes are desirable and necessary for the proper fermentation of organic materials including foods. Tag: Reverted
- 11:4511:45, 19 March 2022 diff hist −2 Louis Pasteur Yeast is a plant not a bacteria. Yeast and bacteria are considered microbes. Yeast causes wine to turn to vinegar. Pasteurization reduces live microbial activity as well as destroying non-living enzymes extending the shelf life of pasteurized products. it is not 100% effective as it usually does not kill spores. Tag: Undo
- 11:4011:40, 19 March 2022 diff hist +2 m Louis Pasteur Yeast is a plant not a bacteria. Yeast and bacteria are considered microbes. Yeast causes wine to turn to vinegar. Pasteurization reduces live microbial activity as well as destroying non-living enzymes extending the shelf life of pasteurized products. it is not 100 Tag: Reverted
13 March 2022
- 11:2111:21, 13 March 2022 diff hist +1 Low-level laser therapy Please fix the NCBI reference for the Wiki format protocol. I don't ho how to do it. Thia information is extremely useful and will lead readers to more useful and reliable information. Tag: Reverted
- 11:1611:16, 13 March 2022 diff hist −1,741 Low-level laser therapy This deleted isolated case is not useful and does not represent the industry. Beware of interests that do not want to compete with laser therapy who may try to discredit the benefits by publishing an irrelevant single act of misuse. This information is not useful and wastes space. Tag: Reverted
- 11:1111:11, 13 March 2022 diff hist +316 Low-level laser therapy Useful and important evidence of efficacy, published by NCBI, a U.S. Federal publication. Beware of people or business interest who do not want to compete with such an effective source of pain relief to re-edit this reliable and useful information. Tag: Reverted
9 February 2022
- 16:4416:44, 9 February 2022 diff hist −311 Pythagoras These conclusions are completely false, without getting into a discussion on physics, each hammer is as a tuning fork, each will have a natural frequency of vibration, the comparative frequencies are also comparable to string frequencies. A number of commonly stated misbeliefs do not create a fact.
19 June 2021
- 18:5818:58, 19 June 2021 diff hist −10 Wyatt Earp Undid revision 1029360434 by Anachronist (talk) CA Family Law, code Section 308 only applies to marriage contracted outside California. Earps marriage niterse was formed by any maens outside California, nor was it contracted within California or anywhere else. The belief in the application of common law in California does not make it effective. California repealed the common law in 1872. Tag: Undo
- 06:5306:53, 19 June 2021 diff hist −11 Josephine Earp common law marriage cannot be formed in California, nor in Arizona so the relationship never formed a legal marriage, in conflict with popular mythology that it was a common law relationship.
- 06:5106:51, 19 June 2021 diff hist −10 Wyatt Earp common law marriage cannot be formed in California, nor in Arizona so the relationship never formed a legal marriage, in conflict with popular mythology that it was a common law relationship. Tag: Reverted
25 April 2021
- 16:3216:32, 25 April 2021 diff hist −1 m Northern Triangle of Central America "emigration" is the correct term for people leaving a region, "immigration" would be the correct term if people migrating were into the region
- 16:3016:30, 25 April 2021 diff hist −1 m Northern Triangle of Central America "emigrant" is the correct term for people leaving a region, "immigrant" would be the correct term for people migrating into the region.
- 16:2716:27, 25 April 2021 diff hist −1 m Northern Triangle of Central America Emigration is the correct word for people migrating out of a region, which is what is described.
9 December 2020
- 16:2916:29, 9 December 2020 diff hist +141 m Humour Obvious logically exclusive statements must contain a word error but I don't know what it is. Tag: Reverted
15 May 2020
25 March 2019
- 16:4116:41, 25 March 2019 diff hist −1 Hawaii removed queer as an offensive, antiquated , vague, ambiguous slang pejorative not acceptable in as an accurate or acceptable term for how it is used here. It is a term Bigots like to use, similar to "Spic", "Nigger", "Cracker" and "Honkey" (for white people), Mick", "Chink" and "Kike", etc.
27 November 2017
- 07:2107:21, 27 November 2017 diff hist −17 m Chupacabra my knowledge of these animals goes back several decatres so this fact is not true. maybe the word shudl be "recently", but I dont know the facts
3 October 2017
- 20:0420:04, 3 October 2017 diff hist −2 9/11 conspiracy theories factual correction, is evidence, however conculsion is more likely that there was not conspiracy, although not conclusively proved. Please actually read the reports.
29 June 2017
- 19:5219:52, 29 June 2017 diff hist +1,151 m Conservative Party of New York State info appears out of date, FBI infer is reliable, other info is also out of date, political nature means some person may make improper re-edit or improper reversions. Info should be researched and corrected
22 June 2017
- 12:4512:45, 22 June 2017 diff hist −97 m Injury in humans This is an injury article not trauma.
20 June 2017
- 10:3210:32, 20 June 2017 diff hist −2 Injury in humans →By activity: format correction
- 10:3110:31, 20 June 2017 diff hist +11 m Injury in humans grammar clarification
- 10:2910:29, 20 June 2017 diff hist +167 Injury in humans Improvements in style, grammar and and emphasis. Redundancy to distinguish plural vs. singular "damage(s)" words is intentional and useful to ensure readers understand the substantial difference.Change places with reader, what is the message.
- 08:3308:33, 20 June 2017 diff hist +50 Injury in humans No edit summary
- 07:1007:10, 20 June 2017 diff hist −2 m Injury in humans grammar change
- 07:0007:00, 20 June 2017 diff hist +51 m Injury in humans grammar correction, wiki links added
19 June 2017
- 13:5113:51, 19 June 2017 diff hist +228 m Injury in humans removed bold and otherwise clarify difference between words "damage" and "damages" minor grammar improvement. Importance is "damage" is used in the NIH definition, people confuse it with "damages"
- 12:5112:51, 19 June 2017 diff hist +190 m Injury in humans grammar and word improvements. addition of "wounds" in definition of injury per NIH reference. Respected terms in NIH reference, the NIH article referenced could have been better written Wiki now probably clearer than NIH. Useful word links were checked.
- 11:1711:17, 19 June 2017 diff hist +108 m Injury in humans added additional injury types from same NIH reference as mere "causes" of injury makes nature of injury vague without "types".
- 11:0111:01, 19 June 2017 diff hist +486 m Injury in humans clarifies common and frequent misuse and misunderstanding between the words "injuries", "damages" and "damage". Provides reference for definition of "damage" and "injury", and wiki links for "damages" and "loss".
- 09:4809:48, 19 June 2017 diff hist +1 m Atonic seizure links added, simplified grammar
- 09:2609:26, 19 June 2017 diff hist −2 m Atonic seizure injury is much better word for harm to the body, damage at law is money which results from an injury and is confusing, injury is only indirectly from the seizure in the result of the fall, injury is direct from the effect and result from falling
1 June 2017
- 10:3310:33, 1 June 2017 diff hist −193 m Carbonated water Statement is unproven and unlikely true, citation is an entertaining article but reports no real tests, studies or empirical facts.
- 10:1610:16, 1 June 2017 diff hist −142 Carbonated water Removed statement is better discussed below under "etymology"
- 10:0610:06, 1 June 2017 diff hist +63 m Carbonated water grammar and factual improvement, the reader is given notice of the facts even if I do not have a citation .
29 May 2017
- 14:3714:37, 29 May 2017 diff hist +2 Norgesic No edit summary
- 14:3414:34, 29 May 2017 diff hist −2 Norgesic I'm not sure I prepared the citation correctly
- 14:3214:32, 29 May 2017 diff hist −10 Norgesic No edit summary
- 14:3114:31, 29 May 2017 diff hist +622 Norgesic See the leaflet for Australia, the aspirin and caffeine are replaced, I think by Australian equivalent of Tylenol in U.S. This could be of some medical consequence for some people, I don't know if I did the citation right.
22 May 2017
- 04:1804:18, 22 May 2017 diff hist +1 m Christian Beyer No edit summary
19 May 2017
- 18:2118:21, 19 May 2017 diff hist +15 m Roger Ailes →Fox: missing info, year of this action. begs question of accuracy Tag: Visual edit
- 13:1313:13, 19 May 2017 diff hist −689 American Express Cause marketing statements are vague, factually unreliable, unsupported. Statements lack: citations, dates, identity of involved of third parties, etc. The accuracy, truth or details cannot be verified. No controversy here, but no support. Tag: Visual edit
9 May 2017
- 14:1514:15, 9 May 2017 diff hist +45 m Bituminous waterproofing factual correction Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5509:55, 9 May 2017 diff hist +1 m Vaudeville tense correction Tag: Visual edit
26 April 2017
- 11:4211:42, 26 April 2017 diff hist +55 m John Phillips (musician) clarifies subject and object ambiguity, minor improved formatting and grammar. No info on wife Farnaz except this articles states under "Death" he spend his last years with her. Needs a source or citation also. Tag: Visual edit