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11 May 2012
- 04:0404:04, 11 May 2012 diff hist −142 Adoption →Reunion: Removing Advertisment
- 04:0304:03, 11 May 2012 diff hist −5 Adoption →Effects on the natural mother: Natural parents is sometimes seen as a POV term. Original is less controversial. Great new section by the way.
- 04:0004:00, 11 May 2012 diff hist −287 Adoption →Effects on the natural mother: Unsourced
- 03:5903:59, 11 May 2012 diff hist −14 Adoption →Middle Ages to Modern Period: They were not necessarily children.
- 03:5803:58, 11 May 2012 diff hist −7 Adoption →Antiquity: Style. Why use two words when you can use one? Also, the term foundlings is more historically correct.
- 03:5603:56, 11 May 2012 diff hist −6 Adoption →Antiquity: the phrase before the Middle Ages is too broad; could be prehistory.
- 03:5403:54, 11 May 2012 diff hist −32 Adoption Reverting lede back to original. The new sentences introduced POV language (biological parent) and used terms limited to the modern period (rights, official, etc.)
10 February 2012
- 03:0303:03, 10 February 2012 diff hist −16 m Adoption →Modern period
- 02:5102:51, 10 February 2012 diff hist −31 m Adoption Fixing improper English
1 December 2011
- 14:4714:47, 1 December 2011 diff hist −354 Adoption →How adoptions originate
29 November 2011
- 02:2102:21, 29 November 2011 diff hist −215 Western culture Consolidating lede; removed irrationality reference as empirism is largely an British phenonmena.
10 April 2011
- 03:4703:47, 10 April 2011 diff hist −1 m Adoption →Public perception of adoption: The sources refers to North America, the U.S., and the West, using the terms interchangabely.
19 March 2011
- 14:2014:20, 19 March 2011 diff hist −130 Adoption I suggest this addition is misplaced for two reasons: 1) since the lede is a summary, the detail should be in the body of the article and in the "See Also, " and 2) modern adoption comes at the end of this lede rather than the middle.
- 14:1314:13, 19 March 2011 diff hist +47 Baby Scoop Era Undid revision 418840209 by 75.61.134.158 (talk) Take that issue up with the source.
- 14:1014:10, 19 March 2011 diff hist −18 Nation Put controversy section at end rather than upfront. It seems important to delve into the history of the word before applying it to a issue. Also changed a few title words. I suggest adding detail to the last section, e.g. Kurds and Cherokee.
- 14:0514:05, 19 March 2011 diff hist −592 Nation Clarifying lede, largely by removing examples which should be in the discussion; also the entire paragraph only has only source, so I just put that on the end rather than listing it thrice.
- 13:5913:59, 19 March 2011 diff hist −659 m Nation Removing note which is already in discussion section.
- 13:5713:57, 19 March 2011 diff hist −234 m Nation Removing note which is already in discussion section.
10 March 2011
- 14:1214:12, 10 March 2011 diff hist −15 Adoption Deleted the word "kin" since it excluded adoption between related parties; these actually make up most adoptions.
8 March 2011
- 02:3702:37, 8 March 2011 diff hist −233 Language of adoption →Positive Adoption Language: Seems to be a true statement, but I think a reference is needed for something that controversial.
- 02:3302:33, 8 March 2011 diff hist −431 Adoption →Adoption terminology: Does not seem relevant to me; trying to keep to the facts.
- 02:3102:31, 8 March 2011 diff hist −66 m Adoption →How adoptions originate: Removing what appears to be a bad tag?
- 02:2802:28, 8 March 2011 diff hist −905 Adoption →How adoptions originate: Last editor blanked out an entire paragraph and replaced it with what reads as advertising for U.S. adoption agencies; should be global definition and not a resource for prospective adoptive parents.
29 January 2011
- 15:2815:28, 29 January 2011 diff hist −70 Adoption The last edit seemed to fit much better in the section on coercion, so I moved it and tried to integrate it better; this section needs more detail.
16 December 2010
- 06:2806:28, 16 December 2010 diff hist +647 Talk:Same-sex parenting →POV Issue: Odd revert war
- 06:1806:18, 16 December 2010 diff hist +2 m Adoption →How adoptions originate
24 November 2010
- 14:2414:24, 24 November 2010 diff hist −95 Same-sex adoption →Research on child outcomes: Removed unsourced and unverifable statement.
7 November 2010
- 23:3823:38, 7 November 2010 diff hist −1 m Adoption →Middle Ages to Modern Period: typo
23 October 2010
- 12:5812:58, 23 October 2010 diff hist +378 Talk:Adoption →Reunion Registry
22 October 2010
- 01:5401:54, 22 October 2010 diff hist +26 Adoption →Parenting: Adding detail to Case study
- 01:4601:46, 22 October 2010 diff hist −13 m Talk:Adoption →RfC
- 01:4601:46, 22 October 2010 diff hist +616 Talk:Adoption →RfC: Anne Case et. al
21 October 2010
- 02:0702:07, 21 October 2010 diff hist −12 Adoption →Parenting: Removing content tag since Gibson inclusion is no longer disputed
- 02:0402:04, 21 October 2010 diff hist −463 Adoption →Parenting: Summarizing Gibson
- 01:5701:57, 21 October 2010 diff hist −137 Adoption →Parenting: Making the transition statement clear, ensuring both paragraphs can stand on their own
- 01:5401:54, 21 October 2010 diff hist +189 Talk:Adoption →RfC: No SYNT
- 01:5101:51, 21 October 2010 diff hist +649 Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper: Good point
- 01:4001:40, 21 October 2010 diff hist +117 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Adoption, fostering, orphan care and displacement →Foster care
20 October 2010
- 04:3904:39, 20 October 2010 diff hist +159 Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper
- 04:3804:38, 20 October 2010 diff hist +214 Talk:Adoption →Nigel Barber
- 04:3604:36, 20 October 2010 diff hist −5 m Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper
- 04:3604:36, 20 October 2010 diff hist +1,057 Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper
- 04:0104:01, 20 October 2010 diff hist +368 Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper
- 03:5703:57, 20 October 2010 diff hist +177 Talk:Adoption →Nigel Barber
- 03:5503:55, 20 October 2010 diff hist +192 Talk:Philosophy →Systemic bias
- 03:4803:48, 20 October 2010 diff hist −1,619 Same-sex adoption →Research on child outcomes: Removing paragraph that has nothing to do with adoption, Maybe it showed go in the parenting article.
- 03:4503:45, 20 October 2010 diff hist +479 Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper
- 03:3503:35, 20 October 2010 diff hist −358 Adoption Undid revision 391771684 by Tijfo098 (talk)Looks to me like they do. Nigel is an expert in evol. bio. not adoption. Pls. refer to Talk.
- 03:3203:32, 20 October 2010 diff hist +674 Talk:Adoption →Kyle Gibson Research Paper: new section
- 03:2303:23, 20 October 2010 diff hist −358 Adoption →Parenting: A blog is an inappropriate source (see Talk page)