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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 12:15, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"that borrows similarities to previous songs produced by Harris" → "that is similar to song's produced by Harris for other singer's."
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"and is noted for being a departure from Cole's previous works." → Move this to the end of the next sentence, as it is more about critical response.
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
", who deemed it as catchy, yet generic when compared to other radio songs." → "; although many thought it was catchy, it was thought to be generic when compared to other songs played on the radio."
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

""Call My Name" achieve moderate commercial success, reaching the top spot of the charts in Ireland, Poland, Scotland and the United Kingdom." → Considering her main markets are indeed Ireland, Scotland and the UK and it hit #1 in all three, I'd say it was better than just moderate.

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"The release of it was promoted with two teasers, until the full video premiered on 2 May 2012." → Prior to it's premiere on 2 May 2012, it was promoted by two teaser clips."
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Cole performed the track on several occasions," → "To promote the song, Cole performed the track on"
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Most of those performances were subject of controversy when media outlets reported that the singer was lip synching to the song." → "It was reported by various media outlets that Cole had lip synced her performances of "Call My Name".
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Background

"Although this was subsequently denied by Harris, who claimed on Twitter that it was never optioned to Ora." → "Harris subsequently denied Ora's claim on his Twitter account, writing that it was never offered to the singer."
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Composition

Reception

No need for two sub sections here. Both the Critical response section and Chart performance section can stand alone.
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

"fastest selling number one single on the Official Charts Company" → "fastest selling number one single on the UK Singles Chart"
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Remove "UK" from The X Factor
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Why is James Arthur italicised?
Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

Remove "UK" from The X Factor
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Charts and certifications

Make the Chart column shaded
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Release history

Make the Chart column shaded
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Status

On Hold for 7 days. AARON• ^TALK 23:04, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. AARON• ^TALK 01:49, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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