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Overview of My Topic

After looking through many wikipedia pages on the topic and terms that we talked about in class, I came to a conclusion to what topic I would like to contribute to. I am interested in adding more information to the Norplant wikipedia page. It seems like there's not much specific information on that topic so I want to add onto what they already have. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Norplant

My Edits

Under Side Effects-Norplant

Nov. 20, 2013 There are also rare instances of stroke and heart attack. Some people experience pain and infection at the area where Norplant was inserted.

peer review: Michaela Holland. Hi I checked your Norplant page and your addiyions are still up there! YAY. I think you should 1. Hyperlink the words stroke and heart attack just put two brackets arond it like this stroke heart attack or just click the chain looking button on the top left of the edit bar

You also seem a little low on things to add to Wikipedia, maybe talk about the complications of removal, the finances, insurance policy, and doctor's not being trained in removal. 3. Last just hperlink your reference on the page concerning Dorthy Robert's article we read in class. I am sure you can find it on J stor and hyperlink it externally through the button I mentioned before! Great job!

Nov. 21, 2013 These side effects are irreversible once the hormones are inserted into the body.

Dorothy Roberts-Killing the Black Body

Nov. 26, 2013 Using the example of marketing Norplant, Roberts describes how racial controversy is linked to experimenting Norplant on women with different ethnicity.

Nov. 29, 2013 Although the idea of Norplant helped reduce teen pregnancy within a period of 5 years, it created a racial segregation when Norplant started marketing to the poor black women. It states that "Proposals designed to reduce the number of children born to poor parents are an attempt to fend off this threat to white people's welfare, a threat that is specifically Black" (Roberts, 112). Due to this statement in Robert's book, it shows the privilege and inequality between race and class ranking in the society. This refers to the hierarchy of gender.

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 ==My Edits==
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 Nov. 20, 2013
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 There are also rare instances of stroke and heart attack. Some people experience pain and infection at the area where Norplant was inserted.
 *'''peer review''': Michaela Holland. Hi I checked your  Norplant page and your addiyions are still up there! YAY. I think you should 1. Hyperlink the words stroke and heart attack just put two brackets arond it like this [[stroke]] [[heart attack]] or just click the chain looking button on the top left of the edit bar
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 These side effects are irreversible once the hormones are inserted into the body.
-'''Dorothy Roberts-Killing the Black Body'''
+===Dorothy Roberts-Killing the Black Body===
 Nov. 26, 2013
 Using the example of marketing Norplant, Roberts describes how racial controversy is linked to experimenting Norplant on women with different ethnicity.