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::::Are you able to look at the Google cache and see writing that is not "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery"? I think that much is objective. For me there is also a subjective component, perhaps harder to quantify, with which reading the paragraph that starts "Merlini has performed several..." gives me physical discomfort due to lack of objectivity. [[User:Unscintillating|Unscintillating]] ([[User talk:Unscintillating|talk]]) 23:27, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
::::Are you able to look at the Google cache and see writing that is not "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery"? I think that much is objective. For me there is also a subjective component, perhaps harder to quantify, with which reading the paragraph that starts "Merlini has performed several..." gives me physical discomfort due to lack of objectivity. [[User:Unscintillating|Unscintillating]] ([[User talk:Unscintillating|talk]]) 23:27, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
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:::::The writing can be improved. For example, one sentence I would delete is "David Merlini's live TV shows broke all current ratings records in 2004 and 2005" because it is unsourced. Once that sentence is removed, when I read the article in the Google cache, I do see writing that is of an "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery".<p>I consider such defects very minor and easy to address. [[Wikipedia:Editing policy#Wikipedia is a work in progress: perfection is not required]] and [[Wikipedia:Arguments to avoid in deletion discussions#Surmountable problems]].<br><br>The article said, "Merlini has performed several high-tech stunts such as being launched in a rocket, embedded in a block of solid concrete then lowered into the Danube, or frozen with liquid nitrogen."<p>I do not see anything promotional about "Merlini has performed several". Merlini's stunts are performances so "perform" is an acceptable verb to use. How would you rephrase that sentence?<p>[[User:Cunard|Cunard]] ([[User talk:Cunard|talk]]) 23:44, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
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*Cunard's position is quite arguable, and it's plausible that the reason so little attention was paid to the sources he presents is because participation at AfD these days is so low. Would a fresh listing attract some more substantive comments? It's worth a shot, although I fear that Sandstein might be right and it could well go by without anyone bothering at all. I'm afraid the root problem----lack of editors----is getting worse and we'll see more and more of these, with flaky decisions coming out of almost unattended discussions.—[[User:S Marshall|<font face="Verdana" color="Maroon">'''S Marshall'''</font>]] <small>[[User talk:S Marshall|T]]/[[Special:Contributions/S Marshall|C]]</small> 10:31, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
*Cunard's position is quite arguable, and it's plausible that the reason so little attention was paid to the sources he presents is because participation at AfD these days is so low. Would a fresh listing attract some more substantive comments? It's worth a shot, although I fear that Sandstein might be right and it could well go by without anyone bothering at all. I'm afraid the root problem----lack of editors----is getting worse and we'll see more and more of these, with flaky decisions coming out of almost unattended discussions.—[[User:S Marshall|<font face="Verdana" color="Maroon">'''S Marshall'''</font>]] <small>[[User talk:S Marshall|T]]/[[Special:Contributions/S Marshall|C]]</small> 10:31, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
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:*''It's worth a shot, although I fear that Sandstein might be right and it could well go by without anyone bothering at all.'' – that could happen (but likely will not because of the increased attention from this DRV). I differ from Sandstein in that if no one bothers to comment, "no consensus" rather than "delete" should be the correct close. [[User:Cunard|Cunard]] ([[User talk:Cunard|talk]]) 19:50, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
:*''It's worth a shot, although I fear that Sandstein might be right and it could well go by without anyone bothering at all.'' – that could happen (but likely will not because of the increased attention from this DRV). I differ from Sandstein in that if no one bothers to comment, "no consensus" rather than "delete" should be the correct close. [[User:Cunard|Cunard]] ([[User talk:Cunard|talk]]) 19:50, 25 September 2016 (UTC) |
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24 September 2016
David Merlini
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Hi Sandstein. I do not see sufficient discussion of the sources at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/David Merlini for a "delete" close. No one responded to my argument that: Only DGG expressed an opinion about my sources. (It is unclear if Appable reviewed the sources.) None of the previous participants returned to the AfD discussion, so nothing can be concluded from their silence. That DGG and I disagree on the sources is insufficient for a "delete" close. I ask you to either reclose as "no consensus" or relist the debate since the AfD had been relisted only once. Cunard (talk) 18:06, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
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The closing admin wrote "the sources were available for more than a week, were presumably read by several people, and the only person to comment on them was unconvinced". When one editor lists sources and another editor disagrees that those sources establish notability, that is "no consensus". Because AfD is a discussion rather than a vote, that several other people "presumably" read those sources but declined to explain their thoughts about them in the AfD does not make the consensus "delete".
Overturn to no consensus or overturn to relist.
Cunard (talk) 21:52, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
- It is a fallacy to presume that the sources available for a week were read, when they may or may not have been read. Unscintillating (talk) 23:26, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
RecloseI can't tell what the decision was from the closing or the subsequent discussion. What were the WP:DEL-REASONS for the deletion? Without knowing why the article was closed as delete, it is difficult for editors to know how to fix problems. Were !votes taken down? If not, why not? My quick analysis without access to the article is that the WP:DEL8 argument raised after the nomination was resolved. The WP:DEL14 raised in the nomination was supported with a 2nd suggestion to Incubate, but was not resolved. Unscintillating (talk) 23:26, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
- Unscintillating (talk · contribs), would you clarify what you mean by "reclose"? Is that a "relist" or an "overturn" or something else? Cunard (talk) 19:50, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- I was thinking of something that includes a vacate but leaves a relist as an option, but after seeing the state of the article in the Google cache, I feel that this article should not go back to mainspace. I think the nominator was right on target and should be sustained, although I still can't see the talk page of the article. Unscintillating (talk) 22:13, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- Overturn to Delete as per WP:DEL14, with incubate on request As stated previously, the WP:DEL8 argument raised after the nomination was resolved. The argument of "extremely promotional", a WP:DEL14/WP:NOT argument, was the problem raised in the nomination, but was never again discussed. As per WP:NOQUORUM, "If a nomination has received no comments from any editor besides the nominator...Common options include...closing in favour of the nominator's stated proposal". While the community rejects notability-based NO-QUORUM deletions, the deletion here is a WP:NOT deletion. Unscintillating (talk) 22:13, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- Would you clarify how the article in the Google cache violates WP:NOT? Why do you feel that "after seeing the state of the article in the Google cache, I feel that this article should not go back to mainspace"? Cunard (talk) 22:21, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- It is true that the nominator has not provided a WP:DEL-REASON or wikilinked to the WP:NOT policy, but I think that the phrase "extremely promotional" at least suggests WP:DEL14 and WP:PROMO, whose point 5 reads,.
5. Advertising, marketing or public relations. Information about companies and products must be written in an objective and unbiased style, free of puffery.
- Are you able to look at the Google cache and see writing that is not "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery"? I think that much is objective. For me there is also a subjective component, perhaps harder to quantify, with which reading the paragraph that starts "Merlini has performed several..." gives me physical discomfort due to lack of objectivity. Unscintillating (talk) 23:27, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- The writing can be improved. For example, one sentence I would delete is "David Merlini's live TV shows broke all current ratings records in 2004 and 2005" because it is unsourced. Once that sentence is removed, when I read the article in the Google cache, I do see writing that is of an "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery".
I consider such defects very minor and easy to address. Wikipedia:Editing policy#Wikipedia is a work in progress: perfection is not required and Wikipedia:Arguments to avoid in deletion discussions#Surmountable problems.
The article said, "Merlini has performed several high-tech stunts such as being launched in a rocket, embedded in a block of solid concrete then lowered into the Danube, or frozen with liquid nitrogen."I do not see anything promotional about "Merlini has performed several". Merlini's stunts are performances so "perform" is an acceptable verb to use. How would you rephrase that sentence?
- The writing can be improved. For example, one sentence I would delete is "David Merlini's live TV shows broke all current ratings records in 2004 and 2005" because it is unsourced. Once that sentence is removed, when I read the article in the Google cache, I do see writing that is of an "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery".
- Are you able to look at the Google cache and see writing that is not "objective and unbiased style, free of puffery"? I think that much is objective. For me there is also a subjective component, perhaps harder to quantify, with which reading the paragraph that starts "Merlini has performed several..." gives me physical discomfort due to lack of objectivity. Unscintillating (talk) 23:27, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- Cunard's position is quite arguable, and it's plausible that the reason so little attention was paid to the sources he presents is because participation at AfD these days is so low. Would a fresh listing attract some more substantive comments? It's worth a shot, although I fear that Sandstein might be right and it could well go by without anyone bothering at all. I'm afraid the root problem----lack of editors----is getting worse and we'll see more and more of these, with flaky decisions coming out of almost unattended discussions.—S Marshall T/C 10:31, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- It's worth a shot, although I fear that Sandstein might be right and it could well go by without anyone bothering at all. – that could happen (but likely will not because of the increased attention from this DRV). I differ from Sandstein in that if no one bothers to comment, "no consensus" rather than "delete" should be the correct close. Cunard (talk) 19:50, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- Endorse deletion -- I followed the AfD although I did not !vote as the area of entertainers is not of strong interest to me. I reviewed the additional sources, but they looked like "human interest" stories and adding them would result in an article on a subject of passing significance. I'd day that it was a case of WP:TOOSOON. If the discussion is reopened, I would probably !vote delete. K.e.coffman (talk) 18:25, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- DRV analyzes the consensus in the discussion. Two editors, DGG and I, commented about the sources and differed on whether the sources established notability. Do you believe that is consensus for deletion? Cunard (talk) 19:50, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- There was also an !Vote from editor Muffled Packeted: "Equally, he has no significantly-sized fanbase, won no major accolades, and the only contribution he has made- holding his breath- is neither "'unique, prolific or innovative."" K.e.coffman (talk) 20:03, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- relist or overturn to NC There may be been a TNT issue here, but in the face of actual sources, there is no consensus to ignore them. Hobit (talk) 19:36, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- Overturn to "no consensus" or relist. Resolved promotionalism isn't a reason for deletion, cf. DEL4, and notability is not judged based on the content of the article, see ARTN, thus, the nominator's vote should have been disregarded as illogical and "flatly contradict[ing] established policy . . . ." WP:CLOSE § Consensus. Similarly, John Pack Lampert's boilerplate "non-notable [adjective]" vote "show[s] no understanding of the matter of issue." That leaves three reasoned votes: Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi and DGG voting for deletion and Cunard supporting retention, and a 2–1 split is no consensus. No shade to the closer. Rebbing 21:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)